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假定英语课上你们进行了关于“你喜欢的电影类型”的讨论,以下是部分讨论结果。请你介绍讨论结果,并补充一种你喜欢的类型,写一篇短文向你的同学介绍。
What kind of movies do you like?
○Most students like comedies because they can laugh.
○Some students love action films because…
…
注意:词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Different people like different kinds of movies. Here comes the result.
审题指导:
1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称和第三人称
写作框架:
90 英语 九年级 上册 译林版
优秀范文:
假定英语课上你们进行了关于“你喜欢的电影类型”的讨论,以下是部分讨论结果。请你介绍讨论结果,并补充一种你喜欢的类型,写一篇短文向你的同学介绍。
What kind of movies do you like?
○Most students like comedies because they can laugh.
○Some students love action films because…
…
注意:词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Different people like different kinds of movies. Here comes the result.
审题指导:
1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称和第三人称
写作框架:
90 英语 九年级 上册 译林版
优秀范文:
答案
Different people like different kinds of movies. Here comes the result.
Most students like comedies because they can laugh and relax after hard study. Some students love action films because they are exciting and full of energy. Besides, a few enjoy cartoons for their cute characters and interesting stories. As for me, I prefer science fiction. It shows amazing future worlds and new technology, making me think about our life and the future.
In short, watching movies is fun and helpful for us.
Most students like comedies because they can laugh and relax after hard study. Some students love action films because they are exciting and full of energy. Besides, a few enjoy cartoons for their cute characters and interesting stories. As for me, I prefer science fiction. It shows amazing future worlds and new technology, making me think about our life and the future.
In short, watching movies is fun and helpful for us.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题类说明文写作，需承接给定开头，先介绍讨论中提及的学生喜好的电影类型（多数学生喜欢喜剧的原因、部分学生喜欢动作片的原因），补充其他学生的喜好，再说明自己喜欢的电影类型及原因，最后简单总结，注意词数80-100，时态以一般现在时为主，人称结合第三人称与第一人称，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍多数学生的喜好：Most students like comedies because they can laugh and relax after hard study.
2. 介绍部分学生的喜好：Some students love action films because they are exciting and full of energy.
3. 补充其他学生的喜好：Besides, a few enjoy cartoons for their cute characters and interesting stories.
4. 说明自己的喜好及原因：As for me, I prefer science fiction. It shows amazing future worlds and new technology, making me think about our life and the future.
5. 总结全文：In short, watching movies is fun and helpful for us.
【答案】
Different people like different kinds of movies. Here comes the result.
Most students like comedies because they can laugh and relax after hard study. Some students love action films because they are exciting and full of energy. Besides, a few enjoy cartoons for their cute characters and interesting stories. As for me, I prefer science fiction. It shows amazing future worlds and new technology, making me think about our life and the future.
In short, watching movies is fun and helpful for us.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、说明文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣话题，清晰呈现了讨论结果，补充了个人喜欢的电影类型及原因，结构完整，语言通顺，符合九年级英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题类说明文写作，需承接给定开头，先介绍讨论中提及的学生喜好的电影类型（多数学生喜欢喜剧的原因、部分学生喜欢动作片的原因），补充其他学生的喜好，再说明自己喜欢的电影类型及原因，最后简单总结，注意词数80-100，时态以一般现在时为主，人称结合第三人称与第一人称，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍多数学生的喜好：Most students like comedies because they can laugh and relax after hard study.
2. 介绍部分学生的喜好：Some students love action films because they are exciting and full of energy.
3. 补充其他学生的喜好：Besides, a few enjoy cartoons for their cute characters and interesting stories.
4. 说明自己的喜好及原因：As for me, I prefer science fiction. It shows amazing future worlds and new technology, making me think about our life and the future.
5. 总结全文：In short, watching movies is fun and helpful for us.
【答案】
Different people like different kinds of movies. Here comes the result.
Most students like comedies because they can laugh and relax after hard study. Some students love action films because they are exciting and full of energy. Besides, a few enjoy cartoons for their cute characters and interesting stories. As for me, I prefer science fiction. It shows amazing future worlds and new technology, making me think about our life and the future.
In short, watching movies is fun and helpful for us.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、说明文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣话题，清晰呈现了讨论结果，补充了个人喜欢的电影类型及原因，结构完整，语言通顺，符合九年级英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
