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不同的电影类型对我们有不同的好处,动作片释放压力,喜剧片舒缓心情,科幻片激发想象力……喜欢哪一类型的电影因人而异。你校英语社团将举办主题为“My favourite kind of movie”的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
内容包括:●How often do you go to the movies?
●What kind of movies do you like best?
●Why do you like this kind of movie?
●Which movie is the best one that you have ever watched?
要求:1. 词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Hi, everyone! I'd like to share something about my favourite kind of movie with you.
不同的电影类型对我们有不同的好处,动作片释放压力,喜剧片舒缓心情,科幻片激发想象力……喜欢哪一类型的电影因人而异。你校英语社团将举办主题为“My favourite kind of movie”的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
内容包括:●How often do you go to the movies?
●What kind of movies do you like best?
●Why do you like this kind of movie?
●Which movie is the best one that you have ever watched?
要求:1. 词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Hi, everyone! I'd like to share something about my favourite kind of movie with you.
I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best.
First, cartoons make me happy with their funny stories and cheerful endings.
Second, their songs are lovely and easy to sing. My favourite is Try Everything from Zootopia,
which is also the best cartoon I've ever seen—so fun and interesting!
Finally, I always learn something from cartoons.
For example, Zootopia teaches me never to give up when facing difficulties.
Cartoons are really worth watching.
Why not give them a try?
答案
I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best.
First, cartoons make me happy with their funny stories and cheerful endings. Second, their songs are lovely and easy to sing. My favourite is Try Everything from Zootopia, which is also the best cartoon I've ever seen—so fun and interesting! Finally, I always learn something from cartoons. For example, Zootopia teaches me never to give up when facing difficulties.
Cartoons are really worth watching. Why not give them a try?
First, cartoons make me happy with their funny stories and cheerful endings. Second, their songs are lovely and easy to sing. My favourite is Try Everything from Zootopia, which is also the best cartoon I've ever seen—so fun and interesting! Finally, I always learn something from cartoons. For example, Zootopia teaches me never to give up when facing difficulties.
Cartoons are really worth watching. Why not give them a try?
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确征文需包含四个核心要点：去电影院的频率、最喜欢的电影类型、喜欢该类型的原因、看过的最好的电影。结合已给开头，先点明自身观影频率和喜爱的电影类型；再用连接词（如First、Second、Finally）分点阐述喜欢的原因，使结构清晰；接着列举具体的电影实例支撑内容；最后收尾呼应主题，控制词数在80-100之间，避免出现真实人名、校名。
【解析】本文先回答观影频率（twice a month）并点明喜爱卡通片；再分三点说明原因：一是卡通片的有趣故事和开心结局能让人开心，二是卡通片的歌曲好听易唱，三是能从中学到道理；随后以《疯狂动物城》为例，说明这是自己看过最好的卡通片；最后总结卡通片值得观看，发出尝试的呼吁，完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best.
First, cartoons make me happy with their funny stories and cheerful endings. Second, their songs are lovely and easy to sing. My favourite is Try Everything from Zootopia, which is also the best cartoon I've ever seen—so fun and interesting! Finally, I always learn something from cartoons. For example, Zootopia teaches me never to give up when facing difficulties.
Cartoons are really worth watching. Why not give them a try?
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式表达、语句衔接
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖题目要求的四个要点，结构清晰，使用恰当的连接词使文章逻辑连贯，语言简洁易懂，符合词数要求，通过具体电影实例增强了内容的真实性，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】本文先回答观影频率（twice a month）并点明喜爱卡通片；再分三点说明原因：一是卡通片的有趣故事和开心结局能让人开心，二是卡通片的歌曲好听易唱，三是能从中学到道理；随后以《疯狂动物城》为例，说明这是自己看过最好的卡通片；最后总结卡通片值得观看，发出尝试的呼吁，完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best.
First, cartoons make me happy with their funny stories and cheerful endings. Second, their songs are lovely and easy to sing. My favourite is Try Everything from Zootopia, which is also the best cartoon I've ever seen—so fun and interesting! Finally, I always learn something from cartoons. For example, Zootopia teaches me never to give up when facing difficulties.
Cartoons are really worth watching. Why not give them a try?
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式表达、语句衔接
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖题目要求的四个要点，结构清晰，使用恰当的连接词使文章逻辑连贯，语言简洁易懂，符合词数要求，通过具体电影实例增强了内容的真实性，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.7
