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四、书面表达(真题·台州临海)
37.你们学校英语社团正在举办主题为“How to have a happy and healthy life”的演讲比赛。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求:(1)演讲稿中必须包括图表中的所有信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息;(3)80—100 词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to have a happy and healthy life with you.
Thank you for your listening!
37.你们学校英语社团正在举办主题为“How to have a happy and healthy life”的演讲比赛。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求:(1)演讲稿中必须包括图表中的所有信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息;(3)80—100 词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to have a happy and healthy life with you.
Here are some of my ways.
At first, we should have balanced eating habits. Eating both vegetables and fruit is important for our body. Also, we should have less food with much salt, fat and sugar. Second, in our free time, it's helpful to do sports such as playing basketball and running to build a stronger body. What's more, we should enjoy our life by having a good rest and spending time with family. Finally, find a hobby you love, like reading or drawing. It makes life more fun!
All in all, please remember: a healthy body, a happy life!
At first, we should have balanced eating habits. Eating both vegetables and fruit is important for our body. Also, we should have less food with much salt, fat and sugar. Second, in our free time, it's helpful to do sports such as playing basketball and running to build a stronger body. What's more, we should enjoy our life by having a good rest and spending time with family. Finally, find a hobby you love, like reading or drawing. It makes life more fun!
All in all, please remember: a healthy body, a happy life!
Thank you for your listening!
答案
37. One possible version:
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to have a happy and healthy life with you. Here are some of my ways.
At first, we should have balanced eating habits. Eating both vegetables and fruit is important for our body. Also, we should have less food with much salt, fat and sugar. Second, in our free time, it's helpful to do sports such as playing basketball and running to build a stronger body. What's more, we should enjoy our life by having a good rest and spending time with family. Finally, find a hobby you love, like reading or drawing. It makes life more fun!
All in all, please remember: a healthy body, a happy life!
Thank you for your listening!
(100 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本题要求写一篇“如何过一种快乐健康的生活”的演讲稿。用一般现在时。以第一人称为主。
【提纲演示】
| 开门见山 | I'm glad to share my ideas about ... |
| ---- | ---- |
| 具体措施 | have balanced eating habits：eat both vegetables and fruit
have less food with much salt, fat and sugar
do sports：play basketball
run
enjoy our life：have a good rest
spend time with family
find a hobby you like：reading and drawing |
| 总结 | a healthy body, a happy life |
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to have a happy and healthy life with you. Here are some of my ways.
At first, we should have balanced eating habits. Eating both vegetables and fruit is important for our body. Also, we should have less food with much salt, fat and sugar. Second, in our free time, it's helpful to do sports such as playing basketball and running to build a stronger body. What's more, we should enjoy our life by having a good rest and spending time with family. Finally, find a hobby you love, like reading or drawing. It makes life more fun!
All in all, please remember: a healthy body, a happy life!
Thank you for your listening!
(100 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本题要求写一篇“如何过一种快乐健康的生活”的演讲稿。用一般现在时。以第一人称为主。
【提纲演示】
| 开门见山 | I'm glad to share my ideas about ... |
| ---- | ---- |
| 具体措施 | have balanced eating habits：eat both vegetables and fruit
have less food with much salt, fat and sugar
do sports：play basketball
run
enjoy our life：have a good rest
spend time with family
find a hobby you like：reading and drawing |
| 总结 | a healthy body, a happy life |
解析
【分析】本题要求写一篇主题为“How to have a happy and healthy life”的英语演讲稿，需包含图表中所有信息（饮食习惯、做运动、享受生活及补充内容），符合80-100词的要求，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：先承接开头引出具体方法，再分点阐述对应图表的内容，补充合理细节，最后总结呼应主题，注意使用一般现在时、第一人称，语言通顺符合演讲稿语气。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，说明要分享具体方法；2. 阐述饮食习惯：强调吃蔬菜和水果，少吃高盐、高脂、高糖食物；3. 说明运动方面：列举打篮球、跑步等运动来增强体质；4. 讲述享受生活的方式：好好休息、陪伴家人；5. 补充爱好类内容：比如阅读、绘画等；6. 总结主题，最后衔接结尾。
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to have a happy and healthy life with you. Here are some of my ways.
At first, we should have balanced eating habits. Eating both vegetables and fruit is important for our body. Also, we should have less food with much salt, fat and sugar. Second, in our free time, it's helpful to do sports such as playing basketball and running to build a stronger body. What's more, we should enjoy our life by having a good rest and spending time with family. Finally, find a hobby you love, like reading or drawing. It makes life more fun!
All in all, please remember: a healthy body, a happy life!
Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、健康话题英语表达
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖图表信息，补充内容合理贴切，结构清晰，分点明确，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的格式与字数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，说明要分享具体方法；2. 阐述饮食习惯：强调吃蔬菜和水果，少吃高盐、高脂、高糖食物；3. 说明运动方面：列举打篮球、跑步等运动来增强体质；4. 讲述享受生活的方式：好好休息、陪伴家人；5. 补充爱好类内容：比如阅读、绘画等；6. 总结主题，最后衔接结尾。
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to have a happy and healthy life with you. Here are some of my ways.
At first, we should have balanced eating habits. Eating both vegetables and fruit is important for our body. Also, we should have less food with much salt, fat and sugar. Second, in our free time, it's helpful to do sports such as playing basketball and running to build a stronger body. What's more, we should enjoy our life by having a good rest and spending time with family. Finally, find a hobby you love, like reading or drawing. It makes life more fun!
All in all, please remember: a healthy body, a happy life!
Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、健康话题英语表达
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖图表信息，补充内容合理贴切，结构清晰，分点明确，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的格式与字数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
