六、书面表达
为了更好地发现并减少学生的压力,你们班开展了一次以“Less Pressure,Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一份演讲稿,谈谈你的压力及缓解压力的好办法。
Your pressure
• compete with classmates
• ...
The ways to reduce pressure
• communicate with someone
• listen to music or watch a movie
• ...
要求:1.包括所有提示内容,并适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数110左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello,boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem among students. Many students are under much pressure. So am I.




Everyone has pressure. I hope we can deal with it well. Thanks for listening!

On the one hand, I usually worry about my schoolwork because I have to compete with my classmates. On the other hand, I always have difficulty getting on well with my parents. As a result, we often argue with each other.
Although there is much pressure in my life, there are many ways to reduce pressure. First, it's necessary for us to communicate with someone when we have pressure. Talking about our problems with friends or teachers may help us a lot. In addition, another useful way is to listen to music or watch a movie. What's more, we can do sport to reduce pressure. Less pressure can help us have a better life.

【分析】
本题要求写一篇以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲稿，需包含提示的压力（与同学竞争）及补充的合理压力、减压方法（与他人交流、听音乐/看电影）及补充的合理方法，还要注意词数、无真实信息。解题思路：1. 先明确自身压力，除题目给出的与同学竞争，可补充与父母相处的矛盾；2. 对应减压方法，除题目给出的，可补充做运动；3. 用通顺的英语组织内容，衔接自然，符合演讲稿语气，确保涵盖所有要求。
【解析】
承接开头后，先说明自身压力：On the one hand, I usually worry about my schoolwork because I have to compete with my classmates. On the other hand, I always have difficulty getting on well with my parents. As a result, we often argue with each other. 接着阐述减压方法：Although there is much pressure in my life, there are many ways to reduce pressure. First, it's necessary for us to communicate with someone when we have pressure. Talking about our problems with friends or teachers may help us a lot. In addition, another useful way is to listen to music or watch a movie. What's more, we can do sport to reduce pressure. Less pressure can help us have a better life.
【答案】
On the one hand, I usually worry about my schoolwork because I have to compete with my classmates. On the other hand, I always have difficulty getting on well with my parents. As a result, we often argue with each other.
Although there is much pressure in my life, there are many ways to reduce pressure. First, it's necessary for us to communicate with someone when we have pressure. Talking about our problems with friends or teachers may help us a lot. In addition, another useful way is to listen to music or watch a movie. What's more, we can do sport to reduce pressure. Less pressure can help us have a better life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、演讲稿写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，涵盖所有提示内容，适当补充了合理的压力与减压方法，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿格式，词数适中，未出现真实信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3