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六、书面表达。（共20分）
学校自然爱好者协会正在招募新成员，假如你是李平，请根据以下信息提示，给协会主席写一封英文申请信。
注意：1. 词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。2. 申请信需包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使申请信连贯、通顺。3. 申请信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Lovers Society.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
学校自然爱好者协会正在招募新成员，假如你是李平，请根据以下信息提示，给协会主席写一封英文申请信。
注意：1. 词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。2. 申请信需包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使申请信连贯、通顺。3. 申请信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Lovers Society.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
答案
One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Lovers Society.
First, let me introduce myself. I'm Li Ping. I'm a Grade 8 student. I like reading books about biology in my free time.
Every weekend, I go out for a walk with my family. Green trees, beautiful flowers and even grass on both sides of the roads often catch my eye.
But sadly, we know some people cut down too many trees and hunt some wild animals for money. So I want to be a nature protector of the Nature Lovers Society. I will design a poster to tell more people the importance of protecting nature. What's more, I will plant more trees with my family.
If I can become a member of the Nature Lovers Society, I will be very happy. You can call me on 2865666 or email me at lipingsm@126.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Lovers Society.
First, let me introduce myself. I'm Li Ping. I'm a Grade 8 student. I like reading books about biology in my free time.
Every weekend, I go out for a walk with my family. Green trees, beautiful flowers and even grass on both sides of the roads often catch my eye.
But sadly, we know some people cut down too many trees and hunt some wild animals for money. So I want to be a nature protector of the Nature Lovers Society. I will design a poster to tell more people the importance of protecting nature. What's more, I will plant more trees with my family.
If I can become a member of the Nature Lovers Society, I will be very happy. You can call me on 2865666 or email me at lipingsm@126.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：写一封申请信加入学校自然爱好者协会，需要覆盖思维导图给出的全部4个核心要点：个人信息、美丽自然、环境问题、积极行动。第一步先确定文体是正式申请信，使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实人名校名。接下来梳理写作逻辑：首先承接题目给出的开头，先介绍自己的基本情况，完成个人信息部分的内容；接着结合自身日常体验描述自然的美好，对应美丽自然的要点；之后转折点明当下存在的各类环境问题，对应环境问题的要点；再说明自己想要践行的环保举措，对应积极行动的要点；最后补充联系方式，表达想要加入的意愿，自然收尾，保证行文连贯流畅，要点不遗漏。
【解析】
写作可按照以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，先做自我介绍，说明自己的年级、日常相关爱好，完成「Personal information 个人信息」的要点输出；
2. 结合日常亲近自然的经历，描绘绿树、鲜花等自然美景，表达自己对美好自然的喜爱，完成「Beautiful nature 美丽自然」的要点；
3. 语义转折，点明当前存在的乱砍滥伐树木、非法猎杀野生动物等环境问题，完成「Environmental problems 环境问题」的要点；
4. 阐述自己加入协会后计划开展的具体环保行动，比如设计环保宣传海报、参与植树活动等，完成「Active action 积极行动」的要点；
5. 最后补充个人联系方式，表达期待加入的心情，衔接题目给出的结尾句，检查词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实人名、校名信息，行文通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Lovers Society.
First, let me introduce myself. I'm Li Ping. I'm a Grade 8 student. I like reading books about biology in my free time.
Every weekend, I go out for a walk with my family. Green trees, beautiful flowers and even grass on both sides of the roads often catch my eye.
But sadly, we know some people cut down too many trees and hunt some wild animals for money. So I want to be a nature protector of the Nature Lovers Society. I will design a poster to tell more people the importance of protecting nature. What's more, I will plant more trees with my family.
If I can become a member of the Nature Lovers Society, I will be very happy. You can call me on 2865666 or email me at lipingsm@126.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英文书信写作，环保主题表达，要点类写作
【点评】
本题属于提纲类应用文写作，既考察学生对申请信格式、正式礼貌语气的掌握，也要求学生将给定的四个核心要点自然串联，避免生硬堆砌内容，同时结合环保主题引导学生输出相关实用表达，能够很好地考察学生的英语书面表达综合能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：写一封申请信加入学校自然爱好者协会，需要覆盖思维导图给出的全部4个核心要点：个人信息、美丽自然、环境问题、积极行动。第一步先确定文体是正式申请信，使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实人名校名。接下来梳理写作逻辑：首先承接题目给出的开头，先介绍自己的基本情况，完成个人信息部分的内容；接着结合自身日常体验描述自然的美好，对应美丽自然的要点；之后转折点明当下存在的各类环境问题，对应环境问题的要点；再说明自己想要践行的环保举措，对应积极行动的要点；最后补充联系方式，表达想要加入的意愿，自然收尾，保证行文连贯流畅，要点不遗漏。
【解析】
写作可按照以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，先做自我介绍，说明自己的年级、日常相关爱好，完成「Personal information 个人信息」的要点输出；
2. 结合日常亲近自然的经历，描绘绿树、鲜花等自然美景，表达自己对美好自然的喜爱，完成「Beautiful nature 美丽自然」的要点；
3. 语义转折，点明当前存在的乱砍滥伐树木、非法猎杀野生动物等环境问题，完成「Environmental problems 环境问题」的要点；
4. 阐述自己加入协会后计划开展的具体环保行动，比如设计环保宣传海报、参与植树活动等，完成「Active action 积极行动」的要点；
5. 最后补充个人联系方式，表达期待加入的心情，衔接题目给出的结尾句，检查词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实人名、校名信息，行文通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Lovers Society.
First, let me introduce myself. I'm Li Ping. I'm a Grade 8 student. I like reading books about biology in my free time.
Every weekend, I go out for a walk with my family. Green trees, beautiful flowers and even grass on both sides of the roads often catch my eye.
But sadly, we know some people cut down too many trees and hunt some wild animals for money. So I want to be a nature protector of the Nature Lovers Society. I will design a poster to tell more people the importance of protecting nature. What's more, I will plant more trees with my family.
If I can become a member of the Nature Lovers Society, I will be very happy. You can call me on 2865666 or email me at lipingsm@126.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英文书信写作，环保主题表达，要点类写作
【点评】
本题属于提纲类应用文写作，既考察学生对申请信格式、正式礼貌语气的掌握，也要求学生将给定的四个核心要点自然串联，避免生硬堆砌内容，同时结合环保主题引导学生输出相关实用表达，能够很好地考察学生的英语书面表达综合能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
