八、书面表达20分
中国素有"礼仪之邦"之称,你的外国朋友Eric将作为交换生来中国学习,想要了解一些中国礼仪。请你根据下面思维导图中的提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍中国的一些日常礼仪。

注意:1. 要点齐全,省略号部分适当补充;2. 词数不少于90,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;3. 文中不可提及真实的校名、人名等。
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.





I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Best wishes,
Zhao Hui

八、One possible version:
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common practice. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. There are many manners at the dinner table, such as using the correct things and not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice. Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders, offering seats to those in need, and always saying "thank you" when necessary. These are just a few examples of the rich etiquette culture in China. I'm sure that you'll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.
I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Best wishes,
Zhao Hui
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏提示信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明将介绍中国礼仪;第二步,从问候、参加聚会、餐桌礼仪等入手,重点介绍中国的礼仪;第三步,表达希望“建议能有所帮助并期待在中国见面”的心愿。
[亮点词汇]
①common practice常规做法 ②etiquette culture礼仪文化 ③immerse oneself in... 沉浸于……
[高分句型]
①When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. It's+adj.+to do sth固定句式
②Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders, offering seats to those in need, and always saying "thank you" when necessary.动词不定式作后置定语
③I'm sure that you'll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.that引导宾语从句;as引导时间状语从句

【分析】
本题为材料类英语书面表达，需依据思维导图的四个核心要点（问候、参加聚会、餐桌礼仪、其他礼仪）完成写作，且开头、结尾已给定。解题思路为：1. 承接开头，明确要介绍中国日常礼仪；2. 依次对应思维导图模块展开，每个模块结合提示补充合理细节（如餐桌礼仪补充“不把筷子直立插在米饭中”，其他礼仪补充“尊老、让座”等）；3. 结尾呼应要求，表达期待。写作时以一般现在时为主，确保要点齐全、内容连贯、词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，引出介绍中国礼仪的内容；
2. 分模块阐述：
问候部分：说明握手是常见问候方式；
参加聚会部分：点明准时到达、保持愉快交谈是重要礼仪；
餐桌礼仪部分：补充使用正确餐具、不把筷子直立插在米饭里等细节；
其他礼仪部分：补充尊重长辈、给有需要的人让座、必要时说“谢谢”等内容；
3. 补充中国礼仪文化的总结，最后呼应结尾，表达期待。
写作时运用亮点词汇（如common practice, etiquette culture）和高分句型（如It's + adj. + to do sth, include doing sth），确保内容充实。
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common practice. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. There are many manners at the dinner table, such as using the correct things and not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice. Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders, offering seats to those in need, and always saying "thank you" when necessary. These are just a few examples of the rich etiquette culture in China. I'm sure that you'll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.
I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Best wishes,
Zhao Hui
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中国日常礼仪英语表达
【点评】
本文覆盖了思维导图所有要点，补充了合理细节，使用了恰当的亮点词汇和高分句型，时态正确，结构完整，符合外国朋友了解中国礼仪的需求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6