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十六、书面表达。(5分)
同学们,暑假就要来临了。这是你们小学阶段的最后一个暑假了,你们有什么特别的计划呢?请以"My summer holiday plans"为题,写一篇小作文。
要求:1.时态准确,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范;
2.内容至少包含思维导图中的三个方面,可适当拓展;
3.不少于60个单词(不包括已给单词)。
My summer holiday plans
Summer holiday is coming.
同学们,暑假就要来临了。这是你们小学阶段的最后一个暑假了,你们有什么特别的计划呢?请以"My summer holiday plans"为题,写一篇小作文。
要求:1.时态准确,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范;
2.内容至少包含思维导图中的三个方面,可适当拓展;
3.不少于60个单词(不包括已给单词)。
My summer holiday plans
Summer holiday is coming.
I have many plans for the holiday. I will go to Beijing to visit my aunt. I will stay there for two weeks. I will read some books and have drawing lessons. Doing sport is very important. I will run in the morning and go swimming with my father. I will also play basketball with my friends. I can also help my mother do some housework, such as washing dishes and sweeping the floor.
答案
My Summer holiday plans
Summer holiday is coming. I have many
plans for the holiday. I will go to Beijing to
visit my aunt. I will stay there for two weeks.
I will read some books and have drawing
lessons. Doing sport is very important. I will
run in the morning and go swimming with my
father. I will also play basketball with my
friends. I can also help my mother do some
housework, such as washing dishes and
sweeping the floor.
Summer holiday is coming. I have many
plans for the holiday. I will go to Beijing to
visit my aunt. I will stay there for two weeks.
I will read some books and have drawing
lessons. Doing sport is very important. I will
run in the morning and go swimming with my
father. I will also play basketball with my
friends. I can also help my mother do some
housework, such as washing dishes and
sweeping the floor.
解析
【分析】
首先第一步先审题：明确写作主题是我的暑假计划，时态要以一般将来时为主，要求至少覆盖思维导图里3个及以上的内容，字数不少于60词。第二步搭建写作框架：开头承接题目给出的开头句，先总述自己有很多假期安排；中间部分从思维导图的旅行、学习、运动、做家务等选项里挑选至少3个方向，每个方向补充具体的细节，比如旅行可以写目的地、同行人、停留时长，学习可以写具体的学习内容，运动可以写具体的运动项目，做家务可以写具体的家务类型，让内容更饱满；最后通读检查时态、拼写、语句通顺度，确保符合所有要求。
【解析】
1. 搭建行文结构：采用总分总结构，开篇总起说明自己有丰富的暑假计划，中间分点阐述不同类别的假期安排，内容充实完整。
2. 选取写作素材：从思维导图中选取旅行、学习、运动、做家务4个维度，满足“至少3个方面”的要求，每个维度补充细节：①旅行：计划去北京看望阿姨，停留两周；②学习：假期阅读书籍、参加绘画课程；③运动：晨跑、和父亲游泳、和朋友打篮球；④做家务：帮妈妈洗碗、扫地。
3. 串联成文：使用will引导的一般将来时串联所有内容，保证语句衔接自然，字数达标，最后检查拼写、语法和标点，避免错误。
【答案】
My summer holiday plans
Summer holiday is coming. I have many plans for the holiday. I will go to Beijing to visit my aunt. I will stay there for two weeks. I will read some books and have drawing lessons. Doing sport is very important. I will run in the morning and go swimming with my father. I will also play basketball with my friends. I can also help my mother do some housework, such as washing dishes and sweeping the floor.
【知识点】
一般将来时应用，英语话题作文写作，假期类词汇运用
【点评】
本题是小学阶段常见的提纲类话题作文，依托思维导图给出明确的写作方向，大幅降低了写作难度，学生只需要紧扣提示点，用正确的将来时表述计划，适当补充细节就能轻松达到字数和内容要求，同时也能引导学生树立合理规划假期、劳逸结合的意识。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先第一步先审题：明确写作主题是我的暑假计划，时态要以一般将来时为主，要求至少覆盖思维导图里3个及以上的内容，字数不少于60词。第二步搭建写作框架：开头承接题目给出的开头句，先总述自己有很多假期安排；中间部分从思维导图的旅行、学习、运动、做家务等选项里挑选至少3个方向，每个方向补充具体的细节，比如旅行可以写目的地、同行人、停留时长，学习可以写具体的学习内容，运动可以写具体的运动项目，做家务可以写具体的家务类型，让内容更饱满；最后通读检查时态、拼写、语句通顺度，确保符合所有要求。
【解析】
1. 搭建行文结构：采用总分总结构，开篇总起说明自己有丰富的暑假计划，中间分点阐述不同类别的假期安排，内容充实完整。
2. 选取写作素材：从思维导图中选取旅行、学习、运动、做家务4个维度，满足“至少3个方面”的要求，每个维度补充细节：①旅行：计划去北京看望阿姨，停留两周；②学习：假期阅读书籍、参加绘画课程；③运动：晨跑、和父亲游泳、和朋友打篮球；④做家务：帮妈妈洗碗、扫地。
3. 串联成文：使用will引导的一般将来时串联所有内容，保证语句衔接自然，字数达标，最后检查拼写、语法和标点，避免错误。
【答案】
My summer holiday plans
Summer holiday is coming. I have many plans for the holiday. I will go to Beijing to visit my aunt. I will stay there for two weeks. I will read some books and have drawing lessons. Doing sport is very important. I will run in the morning and go swimming with my father. I will also play basketball with my friends. I can also help my mother do some housework, such as washing dishes and sweeping the floor.
【知识点】
一般将来时应用，英语话题作文写作，假期类词汇运用
【点评】
本题是小学阶段常见的提纲类话题作文，依托思维导图给出明确的写作方向，大幅降低了写作难度，学生只需要紧扣提示点，用正确的将来时表述计划，适当补充细节就能轻松达到字数和内容要求，同时也能引导学生树立合理规划假期、劳逸结合的意识。
【难度系数】
0.7
