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十四、不知不觉,阅读主题周已接近尾声。李老师要求大家学以致用,用一般过去时,根据提示,写
一写露西上周六的活动。(5分)
要求:书写规范,语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于50个单词。
提示:did a lot of housework, made the bed, swept the floor, cleaned the house, washed the
dishes
一写露西上周六的活动。(5分)
要求:书写规范,语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于50个单词。
提示:did a lot of housework, made the bed, swept the floor, cleaned the house, washed the
dishes
Lucy was very busy last Saturday. She
did a lot of housework. She made the bed in
the bedroom at six o'clock. She swept the
floor and cleaned the house after breakfast.
She cooked lunch in the kitchen at eleven
o'clock. Then after lunch, she washed the
dishes. She was very tired but happy.
did a lot of housework. She made the bed in
the bedroom at six o'clock. She swept the
floor and cleaned the house after breakfast.
She cooked lunch in the kitchen at eleven
o'clock. Then after lunch, she washed the
dishes. She was very tired but happy.
答案
Lucy was very busy last Saturday. She
did a lot of housework. She made the bed in
the bedroom at six o'clock. She swept the
floor and cleaned the house after breakfast.
She cooked lunch in the kitchen at eleven
o'clock. Then after lunch, she washed the
dishes. She was very tired but happy.
did a lot of housework. She made the bed in
the bedroom at six o'clock. She swept the
floor and cleaned the house after breakfast.
She cooked lunch in the kitchen at eleven
o'clock. Then after lunch, she washed the
dishes. She was very tired but happy.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：全程使用一般过去时，覆盖所有给出的提示活动，字数不少于50词，语句连贯通顺。第一步先开篇点题，直接点明核心要素：人物是露西，时间是上周六，总述她当天的整体状态，快速切入主题。第二步按照时间先后的顺序，把题干给出的做家务的提示短语逐一安排到对应的时间节点里，还可以补充少量合理的细节比如具体的时间点、动作发生的场景，让内容更饱满连贯，避免内容太零散。第三步在结尾补充露西做完家务后的感受，让文章结构完整，最后通读全文检查所有动词都用过去式，没有遗漏提示内容，字数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：第一句直接交代核心信息，说明露西上周六很忙，直接奠定全文一般过去时的叙事基调。
2. 串联提示内容：先总述她做了很多家务，之后按照时间先后顺序，依次把提示的made the bed、swept the floor、cleaned the house、washed the dishes几个动作融入叙事中，补充合理的时间状语比如at six o'clock、after breakfast、after lunch，还可以补充少量符合逻辑的额外动作比如做午饭，让行文更流畅，轻松达到50词的字数要求。
3. 收尾完善：最后补充露西做完家务的感受，让文章逻辑完整，核查所有谓语动词都正确使用过去式，没有语法错误，所有提示短语都全部用到，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
Lucy was very busy last Saturday. She did a lot of housework. She made the bed in the bedroom at six o'clock. She swept the floor and cleaned the house after breakfast. She cooked lunch in the kitchen at eleven o'clock. Then after lunch, she washed the dishes. She was very tired but happy.
【知识点】
一般过去时，英语短文写作，动词过去式
【点评】
这篇范文完全贴合题目要求，完整覆盖了题干给出的所有提示短语，以时间顺序串联所有活动，叙事逻辑清晰，全程正确使用一般过去时，语句通顺，字数远超最低要求，结尾补充的情绪描写让内容更生动自然。同学们完成这类提示类的过去时写作题时，要先把所有提示短语列出来避免遗漏，善用时间类衔接词梳理叙事顺序，保证全文字态时态统一即可拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：全程使用一般过去时，覆盖所有给出的提示活动，字数不少于50词，语句连贯通顺。第一步先开篇点题，直接点明核心要素：人物是露西，时间是上周六，总述她当天的整体状态，快速切入主题。第二步按照时间先后的顺序，把题干给出的做家务的提示短语逐一安排到对应的时间节点里，还可以补充少量合理的细节比如具体的时间点、动作发生的场景，让内容更饱满连贯，避免内容太零散。第三步在结尾补充露西做完家务后的感受，让文章结构完整，最后通读全文检查所有动词都用过去式，没有遗漏提示内容，字数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：第一句直接交代核心信息，说明露西上周六很忙，直接奠定全文一般过去时的叙事基调。
2. 串联提示内容：先总述她做了很多家务，之后按照时间先后顺序，依次把提示的made the bed、swept the floor、cleaned the house、washed the dishes几个动作融入叙事中，补充合理的时间状语比如at six o'clock、after breakfast、after lunch，还可以补充少量符合逻辑的额外动作比如做午饭，让行文更流畅，轻松达到50词的字数要求。
3. 收尾完善：最后补充露西做完家务的感受，让文章逻辑完整，核查所有谓语动词都正确使用过去式，没有语法错误，所有提示短语都全部用到，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
Lucy was very busy last Saturday. She did a lot of housework. She made the bed in the bedroom at six o'clock. She swept the floor and cleaned the house after breakfast. She cooked lunch in the kitchen at eleven o'clock. Then after lunch, she washed the dishes. She was very tired but happy.
【知识点】
一般过去时，英语短文写作，动词过去式
【点评】
这篇范文完全贴合题目要求，完整覆盖了题干给出的所有提示短语，以时间顺序串联所有活动，叙事逻辑清晰，全程正确使用一般过去时，语句通顺，字数远超最低要求，结尾补充的情绪描写让内容更生动自然。同学们完成这类提示类的过去时写作题时，要先把所有提示短语列出来避免遗漏，善用时间类衔接词梳理叙事顺序，保证全文字态时态统一即可拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
