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Ⅶ. Think and write.
2023年12月，我们国家的部分地区遭遇了多年不遇的罕见暴雪。请以“The snowstorm”为题，根据提示词、提示要点，并结合所学内容，写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。
提示词：suffer（遭受），destroy（破坏），fall down，traffic（交通），send
提示要点：
(1)What was the result of the snowstorm?
(2)What did our country do to do with（应对）the snowstorm?
(3)What should we do as a student?
2023年12月，我们国家的部分地区遭遇了多年不遇的罕见暴雪。请以“The snowstorm”为题，根据提示词、提示要点，并结合所学内容，写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。
提示词：suffer（遭受），destroy（破坏），fall down，traffic（交通），send
提示要点：
(1)What was the result of the snowstorm?
(2)What did our country do to do with（应对）the snowstorm?
(3)What should we do as a student?
答案
Possible version:
The snowstorm
In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. Many trees fell down, blocking the roads and destroying power lines. The traffic was seriously affected, and many people had to stay at home.
Our country took quick action to deal with the snowstorm. The government sent rescue teams to clear the roads and restore the power supply. They also provided food and warm clothes for those in need.
As students, we should also do our part. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or volunteer to help those affected. We should learn to understand how to deal with natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a challenge, but with everyone's efforts, we overcame it.
The snowstorm
In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. Many trees fell down, blocking the roads and destroying power lines. The traffic was seriously affected, and many people had to stay at home.
Our country took quick action to deal with the snowstorm. The government sent rescue teams to clear the roads and restore the power supply. They also provided food and warm clothes for those in need.
As students, we should also do our part. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or volunteer to help those affected. We should learn to understand how to deal with natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a challenge, but with everyone's efforts, we overcame it.
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语话题作文，题目为“The snowstorm”，需围绕2023年12月的罕见暴雪完成写作。解题思路：①先明确写作的三个核心要点，分别对应暴雪的结果、国家的应对措施、学生的做法；②结合给定提示词（suffer、destroy、fall down、traffic、send），将提示词融入对应要点中；③采用分段结构，分三段分别阐述三个要点，确保词数不少于80，语言符合英语表达习惯，逻辑清晰。
【解析】写作时，第一段围绕“暴雪的结果”展开：点明时间和暴雪情况，用suffer描述受灾，用fall down、destroy说明具体破坏（如树木倒塌、电力线被毁），用traffic说明交通受影响；第二段围绕“国家的应对”展开：用send说明政府派救援队、送物资等措施；第三段围绕“学生的做法”展开：说明学生能做的小事（如扫雪、做志愿者），最后收尾升华主题，体现团结克服困难。
【答案】The snowstorm
In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. Many trees fell down, blocking the roads and destroying power lines. The traffic was seriously affected, and many people had to stay at home.
Our country took quick action to deal with the snowstorm. The government sent rescue teams to clear the roads and restore the power supply. They also provided food and warm clothes for those in need.
As students, we should also do our part. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or volunteer to help those affected. We should learn to understand how to deal with natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a challenge, but with everyone's efforts, we overcame it.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖三个提示要点，合理运用所有提示词汇，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合英语作文的写作规范，达到了词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时，第一段围绕“暴雪的结果”展开：点明时间和暴雪情况，用suffer描述受灾，用fall down、destroy说明具体破坏（如树木倒塌、电力线被毁），用traffic说明交通受影响；第二段围绕“国家的应对”展开：用send说明政府派救援队、送物资等措施；第三段围绕“学生的做法”展开：说明学生能做的小事（如扫雪、做志愿者），最后收尾升华主题，体现团结克服困难。
【答案】The snowstorm
In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. Many trees fell down, blocking the roads and destroying power lines. The traffic was seriously affected, and many people had to stay at home.
Our country took quick action to deal with the snowstorm. The government sent rescue teams to clear the roads and restore the power supply. They also provided food and warm clothes for those in need.
As students, we should also do our part. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or volunteer to help those affected. We should learn to understand how to deal with natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a challenge, but with everyone's efforts, we overcame it.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖三个提示要点，合理运用所有提示词汇，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合英语作文的写作规范，达到了词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
