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五、书面表达
某英语报社为了呼吁人类保护动物，举行了一场以“How to Protect the Animals”为主题的征文大赛，请你根据以下问题提示写一篇英语短文参赛。
提示：
1. Why is it important to protect animals?
2. What do you think the government should do and why?
3. What do you think we should do and why?
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80—100词。
How to Protect the Animals
某英语报社为了呼吁人类保护动物，举行了一场以“How to Protect the Animals”为主题的征文大赛，请你根据以下问题提示写一篇英语短文参赛。
提示：
1. Why is it important to protect animals?
2. What do you think the government should do and why?
3. What do you think we should do and why?
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80—100词。
How to Protect the Animals
答案
How to Protect the Animals
Animals are in danger now. People keep catching too many animals for their fur and bones.
We should take action to protect the earth. The government has made some laws. We can't buy fur coats any more. We'd better build more reserves.
I like the earth. I want to make it more and more beautiful, so I'd like to join the animal protection club. I will do as possible as I can to protect the earth. If I can become a member of the earth club, I will be very happy.
Animals are in danger now. People keep catching too many animals for their fur and bones.
We should take action to protect the earth. The government has made some laws. We can't buy fur coats any more. We'd better build more reserves.
I like the earth. I want to make it more and more beautiful, so I'd like to join the animal protection club. I will do as possible as I can to protect the earth. If I can become a member of the earth club, I will be very happy.
解析
【分析】
写作时需紧扣“How to Protect the Animals”主题，依次覆盖三个提示问题：1. 先说明保护动物的重要性——点明动物现状（濒危），原因是人类过度捕猎，进而引出保护动物是维护生态平衡的关键；2. 阐述政府应采取的措施及原因——政府可制定相关法律、建立动物保护区，原因是政府具备宏观监管能力，能从制度层面约束伤害动物的行为；3. 说明个人应做的事及原因——个人可加入动物保护组织、拒绝购买皮草制品，原因是个人行动能汇聚力量，带动身边人增强保护意识。同时需注意语言通顺、要点齐全，控制词数在80-100词，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头段：点明动物现状，引出保护的必要性，如“Animals are in danger now. People keep catching too many animals for their fur and bones.”；2. 中间段（政府层面）：说明政府的做法及原因，如“The government has made some laws. We can't buy fur coats any more. We'd better build more reserves.”；3. 中间段（个人层面）：说明个人行动及原因，如“I'd like to join the animal protection club. I will do as possible as I can to protect animals.”；4. 结尾段：呼应主题，表达保护的决心，如“I want to make our home more beautiful.”。
【答案】
How to Protect the Animals
Animals are in danger now. People keep catching too many animals for their fur and bones.
We should take action to protect the earth. The government has made some laws. We can't buy fur coats any more. We'd better build more reserves.
I like the earth. I want to make it more and more beautiful, so I'd like to join the animal protection club. I will do as possible as I can to protect the earth. If I can become a member of the earth club, I will be very happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、保护动物主题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，覆盖了所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言简单通顺，符合参赛征文的基本要求，词数也符合要求，适合初中阶段学生完成。整体是一篇合格的参赛征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作时需紧扣“How to Protect the Animals”主题，依次覆盖三个提示问题：1. 先说明保护动物的重要性——点明动物现状（濒危），原因是人类过度捕猎，进而引出保护动物是维护生态平衡的关键；2. 阐述政府应采取的措施及原因——政府可制定相关法律、建立动物保护区，原因是政府具备宏观监管能力，能从制度层面约束伤害动物的行为；3. 说明个人应做的事及原因——个人可加入动物保护组织、拒绝购买皮草制品，原因是个人行动能汇聚力量，带动身边人增强保护意识。同时需注意语言通顺、要点齐全，控制词数在80-100词，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头段：点明动物现状，引出保护的必要性，如“Animals are in danger now. People keep catching too many animals for their fur and bones.”；2. 中间段（政府层面）：说明政府的做法及原因，如“The government has made some laws. We can't buy fur coats any more. We'd better build more reserves.”；3. 中间段（个人层面）：说明个人行动及原因，如“I'd like to join the animal protection club. I will do as possible as I can to protect animals.”；4. 结尾段：呼应主题，表达保护的决心，如“I want to make our home more beautiful.”。
【答案】
How to Protect the Animals
Animals are in danger now. People keep catching too many animals for their fur and bones.
We should take action to protect the earth. The government has made some laws. We can't buy fur coats any more. We'd better build more reserves.
I like the earth. I want to make it more and more beautiful, so I'd like to join the animal protection club. I will do as possible as I can to protect the earth. If I can become a member of the earth club, I will be very happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、保护动物主题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，覆盖了所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言简单通顺，符合参赛征文的基本要求，词数也符合要求，适合初中阶段学生完成。整体是一篇合格的参赛征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
