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写作方法提优
精研高分写作范式
掌握考场实战技法
📖 D1
同学们,在本单元的学习里,我们认识了努力相关的表达,也学会了如何描述自己为目标付出的努力。当你遇到困难、想要放弃时,是什么让你坚持下去,最终取得进步?现在就让我们动笔写一写吧!
写作思路
例题演练
生活中你遇到过哪些困难?你又是如何面对的呢?写一篇不少于6句话的短文。
范文展示
I wanted to pass my PE running test, but I was slow at first. I was worried I would fail.
I practised running every morning before school. When I felt tired and wanted to stop, I kept going. I also asked my PE teacher for tips.
At last, I passed the test! I felt so proud of myself. Trying my best really helped me.
小试身手
六年级一班在开展主题为“My English Learning Story”的故事分享活动。假如你是王月,请你结合以下提示信息,写一篇英语短文,并与全班同学分享你努力学习英语的故事。不少于6句话。
Hello, everyone! I'm Wang Yue and I'm glad to share my English learning story with you.
Thank you!
精研高分写作范式
掌握考场实战技法
📖 D1
同学们,在本单元的学习里,我们认识了努力相关的表达,也学会了如何描述自己为目标付出的努力。当你遇到困难、想要放弃时,是什么让你坚持下去,最终取得进步?现在就让我们动笔写一写吧!
写作思路
例题演练
生活中你遇到过哪些困难?你又是如何面对的呢?写一篇不少于6句话的短文。
范文展示
I wanted to pass my PE running test, but I was slow at first. I was worried I would fail.
I practised running every morning before school. When I felt tired and wanted to stop, I kept going. I also asked my PE teacher for tips.
At last, I passed the test! I felt so proud of myself. Trying my best really helped me.
小试身手
六年级一班在开展主题为“My English Learning Story”的故事分享活动。假如你是王月,请你结合以下提示信息,写一篇英语短文,并与全班同学分享你努力学习英语的故事。不少于6句话。
Hello, everyone! I'm Wang Yue and I'm glad to share my English learning story with you.
At first, learning English was difficult for me. I could not speak English well. I failed my first exam, and I felt very sad.
To do better, I did some things. I took notes in class and tried to remember important words every day. I also wrote a diary in English to help my writing. I answered more questions in class too. After a lot of practice, I did better in English. Now I know that we should never give up and should try our best to face difficulties.
Thank you!
答案
写作方法提优
Hello, everyone! I'm Wang Yue and I'm glad to share my English learning story with you.
At first, learning English was difficult for me. I could not speak English well. I failed my first exam, and I felt very sad.
To do better, I did some things. I took notes in class and tried to remember important words every day. I also wrote a diary in English to help my writing. I answered more questions in class too.
After a lot of practice, I did better in English. Now I know that we should never give up and should try our best to face difficulties.
Thank you!
Hello, everyone! I'm Wang Yue and I'm glad to share my English learning story with you.
At first, learning English was difficult for me. I could not speak English well. I failed my first exam, and I felt very sad.
To do better, I did some things. I took notes in class and tried to remember important words every day. I also wrote a diary in English to help my writing. I answered more questions in class too.
After a lot of practice, I did better in English. Now I know that we should never give up and should try our best to face difficulties.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语记叙文写作题，主题为“My English Learning Story”，要求以王月的身份分享学习英语的努力故事，不少于6句话。解题思路：先承接给定的开头，接着叙述初期学习英语遇到的困难，再列举为提升英语采取的具体努力措施，然后说明进步后的结果，最后点明感悟并致谢，需结合自身真实经历，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，符合六年级英语水平。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 沿用给定开头；2. 描述初期学英语的困难（如口语差、首次考试失利等）；3. 列举具体努力方法（课堂记笔记、每日背单词、写英语日记、课堂主动答问等）；4. 说明练习后的进步结果；5. 点明感悟（永不放弃、尽力面对困难）；6. 结尾致谢。注意句子数量不少于6句，语法正确，用词简单贴合学生生活。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Wang Yue and I'm glad to share my English learning story with you.
At first, learning English was difficult for me. I could not speak English well. I failed my first exam, and I felt very sad.
To do better, I did some things. I took notes in class and tried to remember important words every day. I also wrote a diary in English to help my writing. I answered more questions in class too.
After a lot of practice, I did better in English. Now I know that we should never give up and should try our best to face difficulties.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语表达应用、主题短文写作
【点评】
本题结合学生真实学习场景，考查英语记叙文的写作能力，要求学生清晰叙述事件的起因、经过、结果，传递努力的主题，贴近学生生活实际，便于学生结合自身经历完成写作，符合六年级学生的英语学习要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语记叙文写作题，主题为“My English Learning Story”，要求以王月的身份分享学习英语的努力故事，不少于6句话。解题思路：先承接给定的开头，接着叙述初期学习英语遇到的困难，再列举为提升英语采取的具体努力措施，然后说明进步后的结果，最后点明感悟并致谢，需结合自身真实经历，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，符合六年级英语水平。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 沿用给定开头；2. 描述初期学英语的困难（如口语差、首次考试失利等）；3. 列举具体努力方法（课堂记笔记、每日背单词、写英语日记、课堂主动答问等）；4. 说明练习后的进步结果；5. 点明感悟（永不放弃、尽力面对困难）；6. 结尾致谢。注意句子数量不少于6句，语法正确，用词简单贴合学生生活。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Wang Yue and I'm glad to share my English learning story with you.
At first, learning English was difficult for me. I could not speak English well. I failed my first exam, and I felt very sad.
To do better, I did some things. I took notes in class and tried to remember important words every day. I also wrote a diary in English to help my writing. I answered more questions in class too.
After a lot of practice, I did better in English. Now I know that we should never give up and should try our best to face difficulties.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语表达应用、主题短文写作
【点评】
本题结合学生真实学习场景，考查英语记叙文的写作能力，要求学生清晰叙述事件的起因、经过、结果，传递努力的主题，贴近学生生活实际，便于学生结合自身经历完成写作，符合六年级学生的英语学习要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
