第5课时 主题写作专项 练写作 答案D13
主题词网
优选词汇
·grandparent ·grandfather ·grandmother ·parent ·father
·mother ·aunt ·uncle ·sister ·brother
·son ·daughter ·wife ·husband ·cousin
·job ·teacher ·doctor ·nurse ·policeman
·manager ·worker ·driver ·cook ·actor
·handsome ·beautiful ·tall ·short ·thin
·funny ·kind ·clever ·friendly ·helpful
写作实例
审时态：一般现在时 审主题 审人称：以第一、三人称为主
今天班里组织了一项“我爱我家”的活动，该活动要求每名学生介绍自己的家人。请你根据自己的全家福，向全班同学介绍你的家人。
提示内容：1.介绍你的家庭成员，包括年龄和职业等；
2.表达你对家人的爱。
写作要求：1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数70以上。





写作支架
开头 — 开篇点题 — Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce to you all.（高分句式1）
中间 — 详细介绍家人 — This is . You can see people in the photo.
This man is my father. He is . He is and he works for .
This woman is my mother. She is . She is . She likes .
I have a brother and a sister. My brother is and he is . My sister’s name is . She is . I like her because she .（高分句式2）
They are both students.
结尾 — 表达对家人的爱 — I love . We love and help each other.
初中英语中的书面表达通常属于提示类作文，有的给出文字提示，有的给出图表提示。在写作之前要认真阅读
教材原文
P39 This is my family photo.
P37 I have a brother and a sister.
P38 I love my big family.
P39 We love and help each other.
优秀范文
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.①
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital.② This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute.③ They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
亮点评析
①以I’d like to...句式点明主题。
②以并列句的结构介绍“我”爸爸的职业和工作地点。
③该句中的原因状语从句解释了“我”喜欢妹妹的原因。

Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital. This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute. They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.

【分析】本题为初中英语提示类书面表达，主题是“我爱我家”。解题思路：首先明确写作要求：时态用一般现在时，人称以第一、第三人称为主，不得出现真实信息，词数70以上；其次遵循给定的写作支架：开篇用高分句式点明介绍家人的主题，中间按顺序介绍全家福中的家庭成员（含年龄、职业等信息），结尾表达对家人的爱；最后结合给定的主题词汇，运用合适的句式（如原因状语从句）丰富内容，确保符合要求。
【解析】按照写作要求与支架，依次完成内容：1. 开篇点题，用高分句式引出介绍家人的主题；2. 引出全家福，说明照片中的人数；3. 分别介绍父母的年龄、职业等信息；4. 介绍兄弟姐妹的情况，用原因状语从句说明喜欢妹妹的原因；5. 结尾表达对家人的爱。具体内容如下：Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all. This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital. This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute. They are both students. I love my big family. We love and help each other.
【答案】Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital. This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute. They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、家庭话题词汇
【点评】范文紧扣“我爱我家”主题，结构清晰，严格遵循写作支架，运用了高分句式（I’d like to...）和原因状语从句，内容完整充实，符合初中英语书面表达的各项要求，准确传达了对家人的爱，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.6