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【参考范文】
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
解析
【分析】本题为单元写作指导类题目，需围绕“英语学习经历与科技的帮助”展开写作。解题思路：首先明确写作核心是分享自身英语学习的变化，突出科技对英语学习的助力；接着采用“总-分-总”结构，开头点明分享主题，中间对比过去英语学习的困难与现在借助科技（电子词典、学习APP、在线课程）取得的进步，结尾总结科技对学习的便利；最后礼貌收尾，符合写作规范。
【解析】写作时遵循“总-分-总”结构：1. 开头：点明分享英语学习经历的主题，引出下文；2. 中间：先写过去英语学习的问题（记单词困难、课堂听不懂），再写现在借助科技手段（电子词典查生词、APP练习听说、在线课程学习）实现英语进步；3. 结尾：总结科技对学习的帮助，礼貌致谢，完成写作。
【答案】It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
【知识点】英语写作、单元写作指导
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合主题合理组织内容，突出科技在学习中的作用，结构清晰，符合单元写作的考查要求，有助于提升学生的英语写作与主题表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时遵循“总-分-总”结构：1. 开头：点明分享英语学习经历的主题，引出下文；2. 中间：先写过去英语学习的问题（记单词困难、课堂听不懂），再写现在借助科技手段（电子词典查生词、APP练习听说、在线课程学习）实现英语进步；3. 结尾：总结科技对学习的帮助，礼貌致谢，完成写作。
【答案】It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
【知识点】英语写作、单元写作指导
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合主题合理组织内容，突出科技在学习中的作用，结构清晰，符合单元写作的考查要求，有助于提升学生的英语写作与主题表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
如何写学习故事的文章
本单元主题为“我的英语学习故事”，写作内容需涵盖以下内容：
①遇到的问题；②解决问题的具体过程；③收获与感受。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是李华，你班班会将进行一次英语学习交流活动，请同学们讲一讲自己在英语学习过程中曾经遇到过哪些困难或问题，后来又是怎样解决的，获得了什么样的进步和感悟。请你根据以上要点完成一篇发言稿，谈一谈你特别的英语学习经历和感悟吧。
【写作构思】
【佳作展示】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today let me tell you something about my English-learning experiences.
I was a shy boy before, and I didn't like to talk. My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English. My English teacher Miss Zhang noticed that. She had a talk with me and gave me some good suggestions. I felt better. After class, I took part in the English corner and practised speaking English as often as possible. Slowly, I became brave to express myself. I got first
prize in my class English speech contest. I really feel happy and confident now. I believe as long as we practise more, we'll make more progress.
Thanks for your listening.
【实战演练】
本单元主题为“我的英语学习故事”，写作内容需涵盖以下内容：
①遇到的问题；②解决问题的具体过程；③收获与感受。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是李华，你班班会将进行一次英语学习交流活动，请同学们讲一讲自己在英语学习过程中曾经遇到过哪些困难或问题，后来又是怎样解决的，获得了什么样的进步和感悟。请你根据以上要点完成一篇发言稿，谈一谈你特别的英语学习经历和感悟吧。
【写作构思】
【佳作展示】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today let me tell you something about my English-learning experiences.
I was a shy boy before, and I didn't like to talk. My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English. My English teacher Miss Zhang noticed that. She had a talk with me and gave me some good suggestions. I felt better. After class, I took part in the English corner and practised speaking English as often as possible. Slowly, I became brave to express myself. I got first
prize in my class English speech contest. I really feel happy and confident now. I believe as long as we practise more, we'll make more progress.
Thanks for your listening.
【实战演练】
答案
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today let me tell you something about my English-learning experiences.
I was a shy boy before, and I didn't like to talk. My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English. My English teacher Miss Zhang noticed that. She had a talk with me and gave me some good suggestions. I felt better. After class, I took part in the English corner and practised speaking English as often as possible. Slowly, I became brave to express myself. I got first prize in my class English speech contest. I really feel happy and confident now. I believe as long as we practise more, we'll make more progress.
Thanks for your listening.
I was a shy boy before, and I didn't like to talk. My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English. My English teacher Miss Zhang noticed that. She had a talk with me and gave me some good suggestions. I felt better. After class, I took part in the English corner and practised speaking English as often as possible. Slowly, I became brave to express myself. I got first prize in my class English speech contest. I really feel happy and confident now. I believe as long as we practise more, we'll make more progress.
Thanks for your listening.
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份撰写主题为“我的英语学习故事”的发言稿，需涵盖三个核心部分：①遇到的问题（害怕说英语，口语能力差）；②解决问题的具体过程（老师给出建议、参加英语角、经常练习）；③收获与感受（变得勇敢、获奖、感悟多练习的重要性）。解题时需先梳理思维导图的关键信息，再按发言稿的结构（问候、自我介绍、叙述经历、结尾致谢）将信息串联，确保语言通顺、符合要求。
【解析】按照发言稿的规范格式，首先问候并介绍自己，接着说明遇到的问题（害羞、怕说英语导致口语不好），然后阐述解决过程（老师谈话给出建议，课后参加英语角并经常练习），最后说明收获（变得勇敢、获班级英语演讲比赛一等奖，感悟多练习能取得进步），结尾致谢，形成完整的发言稿。
【答案】Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today let me tell you something about my English-learning experiences.
I was a shy boy before, and I didn't like to talk. My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English. My English teacher Miss Zhang noticed that. She had a talk with me and gave me some good suggestions. I felt better. After class, I took part in the English corner and practised speaking English as often as possible. Slowly, I became brave to express myself. I got first prize in my class English speech contest. I really feel happy and confident now. I believe as long as we practise more, we'll make more progress.
Thanks for your listening.
【知识点】英语发言稿写作、英语学习经历写作
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有内容，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合发言稿的交际语境，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】按照发言稿的规范格式，首先问候并介绍自己，接着说明遇到的问题（害羞、怕说英语导致口语不好），然后阐述解决过程（老师谈话给出建议，课后参加英语角并经常练习），最后说明收获（变得勇敢、获班级英语演讲比赛一等奖，感悟多练习能取得进步），结尾致谢，形成完整的发言稿。
【答案】Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today let me tell you something about my English-learning experiences.
I was a shy boy before, and I didn't like to talk. My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English. My English teacher Miss Zhang noticed that. She had a talk with me and gave me some good suggestions. I felt better. After class, I took part in the English corner and practised speaking English as often as possible. Slowly, I became brave to express myself. I got first prize in my class English speech contest. I really feel happy and confident now. I believe as long as we practise more, we'll make more progress.
Thanks for your listening.
【知识点】英语发言稿写作、英语学习经历写作
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有内容，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合发言稿的交际语境，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.3
假定你是李华，在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中，你打算参加以“Science Technology Has Improved My English”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示，分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数90左右。
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class.
Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary.
Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
答案
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
解析
【分析】
本次写作是英语演讲稿，主题为“Science Technology Has Improved My English”。需结合思维导图的三个核心模块：学习英语的困难、科技助力英语提升的方法、自身感悟。开头已给出，写作时先点明过去学英语的困难，再具体说明科技带来的解决方法，最后表达对科技的感悟，紧扣主题，符合演讲语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明过去学英语的困难：I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. 接着阐述科技带来的帮助：Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. 最后表达感悟并收尾：Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient. Thank you for your listening.
【答案】
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作；科技与英语学习表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结合思维导图的困难、方法、感悟三个部分，结构清晰，内容具体，符合演讲稿的格式与语气，语言流畅，准确表达了科技对英语学习的帮助。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作是英语演讲稿，主题为“Science Technology Has Improved My English”。需结合思维导图的三个核心模块：学习英语的困难、科技助力英语提升的方法、自身感悟。开头已给出，写作时先点明过去学英语的困难，再具体说明科技带来的解决方法，最后表达对科技的感悟，紧扣主题，符合演讲语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明过去学英语的困难：I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. 接着阐述科技带来的帮助：Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. 最后表达感悟并收尾：Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient. Thank you for your listening.
【答案】
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I had difficulty in remembering English words. I couldn't understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English improves a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes.
Thanks to science technology, my English has made great progress. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作；科技与英语学习表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结合思维导图的困难、方法、感悟三个部分，结构清晰，内容具体，符合演讲稿的格式与语气，语言流畅，准确表达了科技对英语学习的帮助。
【难度系数】
0.5
