沙场练兵
假如你是李华，来自合肥，是学校动物保护俱乐部 (the Animal Protection Club) 的成员之一。为了让更多的同学了解大熊猫、保护大熊猫，请你以 “Let’s Save Giant Pandas” 为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。参考信息：1. 大熊猫的习性：爱吃竹子、睡觉；善于爬树，会游泳…… 2. 大熊猫的现状：目前全世界约有 1900 只…… 3.……
要求：70 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：大熊猫 giant panda，爬 climb，濒临灭绝的 endangered
Let’s Save Giant Pandas
Hello, I’m Li Hua, a student from Hefei.

[ 审题指导 ]
1. 体裁：演讲稿
2. 人称：以第三人称为主
3. 时态：一般现在时
[ 思路构建 ]

[ 精彩范文 ]
Let’s Save Giant Pandas
Hello, I’m Li Hua, a student from Hefei. Let me tell you something about giant pandas.
Giant pandas like to eat bamboo and sleep. They are good at climbing trees, swimming and so on. However, giant pandas are in danger with about 1,900 pandas in the wild in the world. Nowadays, people cut down many trees. Giant pandas do not have enough food to eat or enough places to live in. They become endangered

Let me tell you something about giant pandas. I'm a member of the Animal Protection Club.
Giant pandas love eating bamboo and sleeping. They are good at climbing trees and they can swim too. However, there are only about 1,900 giant pandas in the world now. They are endangered and have less and less living space. We should do our best to help and save them!

【分析】本题要求以李华的身份写一篇题为“Let’s Save Giant Pandas”的英语演讲稿，开头已给出，需依据思维导图的结构完成写作：首先承接开头用“Let me tell you...”引出关于大熊猫的话题；接着介绍大熊猫的习性（爱吃竹子、睡觉，擅长爬树、会游泳）；然后说明现状（全球约1900只，濒危，生存空间不足）；最后呼吁保护。需注意人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时，字数控制在70词左右，符合演讲稿的表达特点。
【解析】步骤1：承接给定开头，用“Let me tell you something about giant pandas.”引出话题，同时点明自己是动物保护俱乐部成员，契合身份；步骤2：介绍大熊猫习性：“Giant pandas love eating bamboo and sleeping. They are good at climbing trees and they can swim too.”；步骤3：说明现状：“However, there are only about 1,900 giant pandas in the world now. They are endangered and have less and less living space.”；步骤4：结尾发出呼吁：“We should do our best to help and save them!”，确保覆盖所有要求要点，语言准确简洁，符合字数要求。
【答案】Let me tell you something about giant pandas. I'm a member of the Animal Protection Club.
Giant pandas love eating bamboo and sleeping. They are good at climbing trees and they can swim too. However, there are only about 1,900 giant pandas in the world now. They are endangered and have less and less living space. We should do our best to help and save them!
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作；动物保护话题写作
【点评】该范文结构清晰，严格遵循题目要求，覆盖所有参考要点，语言规范准确，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇合格的演讲稿范文。
【难度系数】0.6

实战演练 (20分) 得分
假如你是李明，你的外教 Mr. Tyler 让你用英语向同学们介绍一种动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料，请根据下表，写一篇70词左右的演讲稿，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。

Golden Monkeys
Hello! My name is Li Ming. Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. Let me tell you something about them.

创新表达—写作能力提升练
实战演练
Golden Monkeys
Hello! My name is Li Ming. Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. Let me tell you something about them.
Golden monkeys are usually black or yellow, and they mainly live in China, Vietnam and Burma. They live in groups and live on leaves and fruit.
However, they are in danger because people hunt them. What's more, people cut down so many trees that they don't have enough places to live in.
We should take action to protect golden monkeys from now on. People shouldn't cut down too many trees any more and should stop hunting them right now.
【思路分析】开篇引出话题；正文具体阐述金丝猴的特点和现状；最后提出建议。

【分析】本题要求以李明的身份写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语演讲稿，需根据给定资料，遵循“引出话题—介绍金丝猴特征、分布、习性—说明现状—提出保护建议”的结构，语言简洁通顺，词数控制在70左右，准确运用资料信息即可完成写作。
【解析】沿用给定开篇后，依次介绍金丝猴的颜色（black or yellow）、分布（China, Vietnam, Burma）、生活习性（群居，以树叶和水果为食），说明其现状（因人类捕杀和栖息地减少处于危险中），最后提出保护建议（停止捕杀、保护树木），确保内容连贯，符合演讲稿表达习惯。
【答案】Golden Monkeys
Hello! My name is Li Ming. Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. Let me tell you something about them.
Golden monkeys are usually black or yellow, and they mainly live in China, Vietnam and Burma. They live in groups and live on leaves and fruit.
However, they are in danger because people hunt them. What's more, people cut down so many trees that they don't have enough places to live in.
We should take action to protect golden monkeys from now on. People shouldn't cut down too many trees any more and should stop hunting them right now.
【知识点】英语写作、动物介绍
【点评】本题结合给定资料考查英语应用文写作，既考查学生整合信息的能力，又渗透保护动物的意识，是基础写作能力的典型练习。
【难度系数】0.5