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假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写一封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如图：
注意：1. 词数80-100；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classics, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
Yours,
Li Hui
审题指导：
1. 体裁：应用文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classics, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The classic that people in China and even around the world love was written in a very humorous way①. I love all the four main characters, especially the Monkey King. The Monkey King who has a magic stick can make 72 changes to his shape and size②. Although he is very naughty, he is clever enough to
overcome hundreds of difficulties③ on the way to the West with his three partners. ⑥ They work well with each other④ and finally, they achieve their dream⑤.
The story tells us: Follow our dream and never give up, and we can make it.
Yours,
Li Hui
亮点词块
①in a very humorous way 以一种幽默的方式
②make 72 changes to his shape and size 在外形和大小方面做出72种变化
③overcome hundreds of difficulties 克服了成百上千种困难
④work well with each other 彼此团结合作
⑤achieve their dream 实现了他们的梦想
高分句子
⑥ Although he is very naughty, he is clever enough to overcome hundreds of difficulties on the way to the West with his three partners.
（although引导让步状语从句）虽然他很调皮，但他足够聪明，和三个伙伴一起在西行路上克服了数百种困难。
假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写一封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如图：
注意：1. 词数80-100；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classics, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
Yours,
Li Hui
审题指导：
1. 体裁：应用文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classics, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The classic that people in China and even around the world love was written in a very humorous way①. I love all the four main characters, especially the Monkey King. The Monkey King who has a magic stick can make 72 changes to his shape and size②. Although he is very naughty, he is clever en
overcome hundreds of difficulties③ on the way to the West with his three partners. ⑥ They work well with each other④ and finally, they achieve their dream⑤.The story tells us: Follow our dream and never give up, and we can make it.
Yours,
Li Hui
亮点词块
①in a very humorous way 以一种幽默的方式
②make 72 changes to his shape and size 在外形和大小方面做出72种变化
③overcome hundreds of difficulties 克服了成百上千种困难
④work well with each other 彼此团结合作
⑤achieve their dream 实现了他们的梦想
高分句子
⑥ Although he is very naughty, he is clever enough to overcome hundreds of difficulties on the way to the West with his three partners.
（although引导让步状语从句）虽然他很调皮，但他足够聪明，和三个伙伴一起在西行路上克服了数百种困难。
答案
The classic that people in China and even around the world love was written in a very humorous way. I love all the four main characters, especially the Monkey King. The Monkey King who has a magic stick can make 72 changes to his shape and size. Although he is very naughty, he is clever enough to overcome hundreds of difficulties on the way to the West with his three partners. They work well with each other and finally, they achieve their dream.
The story tells us: Follow our dream and never give up, and we can make it.
The story tells us: Follow our dream and never give up, and we can make it.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是给英国朋友Mike写一封邮件推荐中国经典名著《西游记》，开头和结尾已给出，需涵盖作品的受欢迎程度、写作风格、主要人物（重点是美猴王）的特点、团队合作及作品主题，要求用一般现在时，词数80-100。写作时先承接开头总起推荐，再分述作品亮点，接着介绍人物与团队，最后点明主题，运用高分句型和亮点词块提升作文质量，确保结构清晰、要点齐全。
【解析】
1. 承接开头的推荐，介绍《西游记》是深受中外喜爱的经典，写作风格幽默；2. 介绍主要人物，重点描述美猴王的72变、金箍棒，虽调皮但聪明，能克服西行路上的困难；3. 说明师徒四人团结合作，最终实现目标；4. 点明作品传达的“坚持梦想不放弃”的主题，使用指定的亮点词块和高分句型，符合词数要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
The classic that people in China and even around the world love was written in a very humorous way. I love all the four main characters, especially the Monkey King. The Monkey King who has a magic stick can make 72 changes to his shape and size. Although he is very naughty, he is clever enough to overcome hundreds of difficulties on the way to the West with his three partners. They work well with each other and finally, they achieve their dream.
The story tells us: Follow our dream and never give up, and we can make it.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语句型运用、中国经典名著英语表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣写作要求，要点齐全，语言流畅地道，运用了高分句型和亮点词块，准确传达了推荐《西游记》的意图，同时点明了作品的主题，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的推荐邮件。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作任务是给英国朋友Mike写一封邮件推荐中国经典名著《西游记》，开头和结尾已给出，需涵盖作品的受欢迎程度、写作风格、主要人物（重点是美猴王）的特点、团队合作及作品主题，要求用一般现在时，词数80-100。写作时先承接开头总起推荐，再分述作品亮点，接着介绍人物与团队，最后点明主题，运用高分句型和亮点词块提升作文质量，确保结构清晰、要点齐全。
【解析】
1. 承接开头的推荐，介绍《西游记》是深受中外喜爱的经典，写作风格幽默；2. 介绍主要人物，重点描述美猴王的72变、金箍棒，虽调皮但聪明，能克服西行路上的困难；3. 说明师徒四人团结合作，最终实现目标；4. 点明作品传达的“坚持梦想不放弃”的主题，使用指定的亮点词块和高分句型，符合词数要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
The classic that people in China and even around the world love was written in a very humorous way. I love all the four main characters, especially the Monkey King. The Monkey King who has a magic stick can make 72 changes to his shape and size. Although he is very naughty, he is clever enough to overcome hundreds of difficulties on the way to the West with his three partners. They work well with each other and finally, they achieve their dream.
The story tells us: Follow our dream and never give up, and we can make it.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语句型运用、中国经典名著英语表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣写作要求，要点齐全，语言流畅地道，运用了高分句型和亮点词块，准确传达了推荐《西游记》的意图，同时点明了作品的主题，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的推荐邮件。
【难度系数】
0.6
