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七、书面表达 (共 1 大题, 满分 20 分)
家规潜移默化地塑造着我们的品格与个性。假如你是滕飞, 你的朋友彼得对你的“家规”很感兴趣。请你根据以下
1. What are some of the rules in your family?
2. What do you think about them?
3. How can they help you?
4. Something more about your family rules.
注意: 文中不得透露个人真实信息; 词数 80 左右; 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my family rules.
Yours,
Teng Fei
家规潜移默化地塑造着我们的品格与个性。假如你是滕飞, 你的朋友彼得对你的“家规”很感兴趣。请你根据以下
内
容
提
示
, 用英语给彼得写一封回信。内
容
提
示
:1. What are some of the rules in your family?
2. What do you think about them?
3. How can they help you?
4. Something more about your family rules.
注意: 文中不得透露个人真实信息; 词数 80 左右; 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my family rules.
There are many rules in my family. First, I must finish all my homework right after school and keep my bedroom tidy every day. Also, I need to keep my desk tidy. I can watch TV, but only on weekends. Besides schoolwork, I have some chores to do, like walking our dog.
On weekends, I have to practise the piano. Some of these rules seem strict, but they are good for me and help me become a better person.
How about your family rules? Please write to me.
On weekends, I have to practise the piano. Some of these rules seem strict, but they are good for me and help me become a better person.
How about your family rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Teng Fei
答案
[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my family rules. There are many rules in my family. First, I must finish all my homework right after school and keep my bedroom tidy every day. Also, I need to keep my desk tidy. I can watch TV, but only on weekends. Besides schoolwork, I have some chores to do, like walking our dog.
On weekends, I have to practise the piano. Some of these rules seem strict, but they are good for me and help me become a better person.
How about your family rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Teng Fei
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my family rules. There are many rules in my family. First, I must finish all my homework right after school and keep my bedroom tidy every day. Also, I need to keep my desk tidy. I can watch TV, but only on weekends. Besides schoolwork, I have some chores to do, like walking our dog.
On weekends, I have to practise the piano. Some of these rules seem strict, but they are good for me and help me become a better person.
How about your family rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Teng Fei
解析
【分析】
首先，这是一篇英语书信写作题，需给朋友介绍自家家规，要覆盖题目给出的四个提示点。解题思路如下：
1. 承接已给出的书信开头，先具体列举不同方面的家规，比如学习、日常起居、娱乐、家务、兴趣练习等，让内容充实具体；
2. 接着表达对家规的看法，既要体现出部分规则的严格性，也要点明自己理解其积极意义；
3. 然后说明家规对自己的帮助，比如培养良好习惯、促进自身成长；
4. 最后添加询问对方家规的内容，增强书信的互动性，同时控制词数符合要求。全程要注意语气亲切自然，避免透露真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与语气：这是给朋友的回信，采用第一人称，语气要亲切随意，符合日常交流的感觉。
2. 段落规划：
第一段：承接开头，分点列举家规，涵盖课后作业、房间整理、娱乐限制、家务劳动等，让内容全面覆盖生活的不同方面；
第二段：补充家规（周末练钢琴），同时表达对家规的看法和其带来的帮助，回应题目中“看法”和“帮助”的要求；
最后添加一句询问对方家规的内容，完成书信的互动闭环，符合书信写作的特点。
3. 语言调整：使用简单易懂的句式和常用表达，确保词数在要求范围内，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my family rules. There are many rules in my family. First, I must finish all my homework right after school and keep my bedroom tidy every day. Also, I need to keep my desk tidy. I can watch TV, but only on weekends. Besides schoolwork, I have some chores to do, like walking our dog.
On weekends, I have to practise the piano. Some of these rules seem strict, but they are good for me and help me become a better person.
How about your family rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Teng Fei
【知识点】
英语书信写作、家庭规则表达、观点陈述
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了所有提示要点，结构清晰，段落层次分明。语言简洁地道，符合初中生的英语水平，语气亲切自然，契合书信的交流场景，同时精准把控词数，是一篇规范优质的英语书信范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，这是一篇英语书信写作题，需给朋友介绍自家家规，要覆盖题目给出的四个提示点。解题思路如下：
1. 承接已给出的书信开头，先具体列举不同方面的家规，比如学习、日常起居、娱乐、家务、兴趣练习等，让内容充实具体；
2. 接着表达对家规的看法，既要体现出部分规则的严格性，也要点明自己理解其积极意义；
3. 然后说明家规对自己的帮助，比如培养良好习惯、促进自身成长；
4. 最后添加询问对方家规的内容，增强书信的互动性，同时控制词数符合要求。全程要注意语气亲切自然，避免透露真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与语气：这是给朋友的回信，采用第一人称，语气要亲切随意，符合日常交流的感觉。
2. 段落规划：
第一段：承接开头，分点列举家规，涵盖课后作业、房间整理、娱乐限制、家务劳动等，让内容全面覆盖生活的不同方面；
第二段：补充家规（周末练钢琴），同时表达对家规的看法和其带来的帮助，回应题目中“看法”和“帮助”的要求；
最后添加一句询问对方家规的内容，完成书信的互动闭环，符合书信写作的特点。
3. 语言调整：使用简单易懂的句式和常用表达，确保词数在要求范围内，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my family rules. There are many rules in my family. First, I must finish all my homework right after school and keep my bedroom tidy every day. Also, I need to keep my desk tidy. I can watch TV, but only on weekends. Besides schoolwork, I have some chores to do, like walking our dog.
On weekends, I have to practise the piano. Some of these rules seem strict, but they are good for me and help me become a better person.
How about your family rules? Please write to me.
Yours,
Teng Fei
【知识点】
英语书信写作、家庭规则表达、观点陈述
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了所有提示要点，结构清晰，段落层次分明。语言简洁地道，符合初中生的英语水平，语气亲切自然，契合书信的交流场景，同时精准把控词数，是一篇规范优质的英语书信范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
