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(二)书面表达(共1题,计15分)
76. 你校英语社团正在举行以"My Beautiful Hometown"为题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示:
(1)介绍家乡自然美景;
(2)表达对家乡的情感。
注意事项:
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(2)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
(3)词数70左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is
76. 你校英语社团正在举行以"My Beautiful Hometown"为题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示:
(1)介绍家乡自然美景;
(2)表达对家乡的情感。
注意事项:
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(2)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
(3)词数70左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is
答案
One possible version:
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views.
There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:题中所给要点要齐全,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。其次要注意时态正确、段落清楚。同时文章中要出现一些过渡表达使文章更顺畅。还要写出亮点词汇和高级句式,如固定短语、定语从句和非谓语的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明"家乡美";第二步,具体讲述家乡之美都体现在哪些方面;第三步,总结收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满 ②landscape风景
[高分句型]
The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here. so连接表示因果关系的并列句
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views.
There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:题中所给要点要齐全,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。其次要注意时态正确、段落清楚。同时文章中要出现一些过渡表达使文章更顺畅。还要写出亮点词汇和高级句式,如固定短语、定语从句和非谓语的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明"家乡美";第二步,具体讲述家乡之美都体现在哪些方面;第三步,总结收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满 ②landscape风景
[高分句型]
The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here. so连接表示因果关系的并列句
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以"My Beautiful Hometown"为题写短文。首先明确体裁为说明文，时态采用一般现在时；需涵盖两个核心要点：介绍家乡自然美景、表达对家乡的情感。写作遵循"总-分-总"结构：开头点题说明家乡是美丽之地，中间具体描述自然景观（如河流、森林等），结尾抒发对家乡的喜爱；同时需注意不出现真实信息，词数约70词，适当发挥使内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点明家乡是美丽之地，呼应题目；
2. 中间：具体描述自然美景，如用"a long river through the city"介绍河流，用"full of green trees and colourful flowers"说明春季河岸景色，补充森林随季节变色、有可爱动物，丰富美景内容；
3. 结尾：用简单直接的句子表达对家乡的情感，如"my hometown is the best place in the world"；
4. 注意使用亮点词汇（如be full of）和并列句（so连接），确保语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views.
There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、说明文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，结构清晰，语言简洁连贯，使用了合适的词汇和句式，符合征文要求，准确表达了对家乡的赞美之情。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以"My Beautiful Hometown"为题写短文。首先明确体裁为说明文，时态采用一般现在时；需涵盖两个核心要点：介绍家乡自然美景、表达对家乡的情感。写作遵循"总-分-总"结构：开头点题说明家乡是美丽之地，中间具体描述自然景观（如河流、森林等），结尾抒发对家乡的喜爱；同时需注意不出现真实信息，词数约70词，适当发挥使内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点明家乡是美丽之地，呼应题目；
2. 中间：具体描述自然美景，如用"a long river through the city"介绍河流，用"full of green trees and colourful flowers"说明春季河岸景色，补充森林随季节变色、有可爱动物，丰富美景内容；
3. 结尾：用简单直接的句子表达对家乡的情感，如"my hometown is the best place in the world"；
4. 注意使用亮点词汇（如be full of）和并列句（so连接），确保语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views.
There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、说明文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，结构清晰，语言简洁连贯，使用了合适的词汇和句式，符合征文要求，准确表达了对家乡的赞美之情。
【难度系数】
0.5
