2.在成长过程中,你会遇到一些烦恼吗?在遇到烦恼的时候,你向谁求助呢?有的人会与父母亲交流,向他们寻求帮助;有的人会向老师求助。李华最近也遇到了一些烦心事,上周她向英语报的Dr House求助。假设你是Dr House,请根据李华信中的内容写一封回信。

要求:(1)回复需要包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;(2)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)80词左右;(4)短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
It's not easy being a child, and it's normal to have these feelings —
Hope things are going well with you!
Dr House
浙江新期末·八年级英语(下册)·人教版 10——8
要求:(1)回复需要包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;(2)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)80词左右;(4)短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
It's not easy being a child, and it's normal to have these feelings —
Hope things are going well with you!
Dr House
浙江新期末·八年级英语(下册)·人教版 10——8
答案
2. One possible version:
Dear Li Hua,
It's not easy being a child, and it's normal to have these feelings. Why don't you talk with your parents? Firstly, you can tell them you want to keep a diary because it's really helpful with your writing and creativity. Secondly, you should explain that you have done all your homework before keeping a diary. You can show your parents it's not getting in the way of studying. After that, you can do more chores, like sweeping the floor. What's more, it's impolite to argue with your parents. You should say sorry to them and have a proper communication with them.
Hope things are going well with you!
Dr House
(88 words)
Dear Li Hua,
It's not easy being a child, and it's normal to have these feelings. Why don't you talk with your parents? Firstly, you can tell them you want to keep a diary because it's really helpful with your writing and creativity. Secondly, you should explain that you have done all your homework before keeping a diary. You can show your parents it's not getting in the way of studying. After that, you can do more chores, like sweeping the floor. What's more, it's impolite to argue with your parents. You should say sorry to them and have a proper communication with them.
Hope things are going well with you!
Dr House
(88 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Dr House的身份给李华写回信,解决她因写日记与父母产生矛盾的烦恼。解题思路:首先共情李华的感受,让她感受到被理解;接着给出具体可行的建议:一是和父母沟通写日记的益处(如提升写作、创造力);二是说明自己会先完成作业再写日记,不会影响学习;三是主动分担家务,减少父母的顾虑;四是建议不要争吵,用恰当的方式交流。需注意语言符合书信格式,要点齐全,字数控制在80词左右,不提及真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接给定的开头,先共情李华的感受;2. 依次给出具体建议:向父母说明写日记对写作和创造力有帮助,告知父母自己会先完成作业再写日记,不会耽误学习,主动承担家务,避免与父母争吵,用礼貌的方式沟通;3. 衔接给定的结尾,完成回信。
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
It's not easy being a child, and it's normal to have these feelings. Why don't you talk with your parents? Firstly, you can tell them you want to keep a diary because it's really helpful with your writing and creativity. Secondly, you should explain that you have done all your homework before keeping a diary. You can show your parents it's not getting in the way of studying. After that, you can do more chores, like sweeping the floor. What's more, it's impolite to argue with your parents. You should say sorry to them and have a proper communication with them.
Hope things are going well with you!
Dr House
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、日常交际用语
【点评】
这封回信紧扣李华的烦恼,给出的建议具体可行,既尊重李华的爱好,又兼顾父母的担忧,语言通顺连贯,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以Dr House的身份给李华写回信,解决她因写日记与父母产生矛盾的烦恼。解题思路:首先共情李华的感受,让她感受到被理解;接着给出具体可行的建议:一是和父母沟通写日记的益处(如提升写作、创造力);二是说明自己会先完成作业再写日记,不会影响学习;三是主动分担家务,减少父母的顾虑;四是建议不要争吵,用恰当的方式交流。需注意语言符合书信格式,要点齐全,字数控制在80词左右,不提及真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接给定的开头,先共情李华的感受;2. 依次给出具体建议:向父母说明写日记对写作和创造力有帮助,告知父母自己会先完成作业再写日记,不会耽误学习,主动承担家务,避免与父母争吵,用礼貌的方式沟通;3. 衔接给定的结尾,完成回信。
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
It's not easy being a child, and it's normal to have these feelings. Why don't you talk with your parents? Firstly, you can tell them you want to keep a diary because it's really helpful with your writing and creativity. Secondly, you should explain that you have done all your homework before keeping a diary. You can show your parents it's not getting in the way of studying. After that, you can do more chores, like sweeping the floor. What's more, it's impolite to argue with your parents. You should say sorry to them and have a proper communication with them.
Hope things are going well with you!
Dr House
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、日常交际用语
【点评】
这封回信紧扣李华的烦恼,给出的建议具体可行,既尊重李华的爱好,又兼顾父母的担忧,语言通顺连贯,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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