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新学期已开始一个多月,相信你已渐渐熟悉自己的学校。假如你是阳光中学的李华,参与了学校与美国一所中学的友好交流项目。现在请你写一封邮件,从学校设施、师生情况和在校学习的感受三个方面向你的美国朋友露西介绍你的学校。
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:第一人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
All the best,
Li Hua
实战练笔.夯实写作功底
新学期已开始一个多月,相信你已渐渐熟悉自己的学校。假如你是阳光中学的李华,参与了学校与美国一所中学的友好交流项目。现在请你写一封邮件,从学校设施、师生情况和在校学习的感受三个方面向你的美国朋友露西介绍你的学校。
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:第一人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable.
Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field.
These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing.
I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here.
What about your school? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable.
Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field. These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing.
I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here. What about your school? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable.
Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field. These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing.
I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here. What about your school? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】首先明确文体为英文书信，时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称“我”为主。题目要求从学校设施、师生情况、在校学习感受三个方面介绍学校，结合给定的写作提纲（Introduction、Main body、Feelings）展开。开头已给出，接下来需分三部分完成：第一部分介绍学校整体及师生情况，第二部分说明学校设施，第三部分表达个人感受与期待，需适当发挥，控制词数在80左右，确保涵盖所有指定要点。
【解析】1. 承接开头，介绍学校整体特点与师生情况：My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable. 2. 介绍学校设施：Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field. These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing. 3. 表达个人感受与期待：I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here. What about your school? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
【答案】Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable.
Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field. These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing.
I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here. What about your school? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语书信格式，英语要点表达
【点评】本题是初中英语常见的书信写作题，要求围绕介绍学校涵盖指定要点，考察学生的语言组织、要点整合及书信格式运用能力，注重基础表达的准确性和内容的完整性。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接开头，介绍学校整体特点与师生情况：My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable. 2. 介绍学校设施：Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field. These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing. 3. 表达个人感受与期待：I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here. What about your school? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
【答案】Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable.
Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field. These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing.
I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here. What about your school? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语书信格式，英语要点表达
【点评】本题是初中英语常见的书信写作题，要求围绕介绍学校涵盖指定要点，考察学生的语言组织、要点整合及书信格式运用能力，注重基础表达的准确性和内容的完整性。
【难度系数】0.5
