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第四部分:书面表达(本题有1题，共10分)
假如你是李明，你的笔友 Alice 写信询问你上周日做了什么。请根据下面表格给她写一封回信。
写作要求：
(1)要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。
(2)可适当发挥。80 词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
(3)不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称等相关信息。
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email. Last Sunday
Yours,
Li Ming
假如你是李明，你的笔友 Alice 写信询问你上周日做了什么。请根据下面表格给她写一封回信。
写作要求：
(1)要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。
(2)可适当发挥。80 词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
(3)不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称等相关信息。
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email. Last Sunday
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email. Last Sunday I went out with my family. It was hot and sunny. In the morning, we visited a tea museum. We watched a tea art performance. It was really enjoyable. They also let us try to make some tea. After that, we also enjoyed some tea. I like the black tea best. The trip was really relaxing.
In the afternoon, we went to a farm. I picked some waxberries and fed some chicken. The farmer taught us how to grow vegetables. I learned a lot. I felt very tired but happy.
What a fun and meaningful day!
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email. Last Sunday I went out with my family. It was hot and sunny. In the morning, we visited a tea museum. We watched a tea art performance. It was really enjoyable. They also let us try to make some tea. After that, we also enjoyed some tea. I like the black tea best. The trip was really relaxing.
In the afternoon, we went to a farm. I picked some waxberries and fed some chicken. The farmer taught us how to grow vegetables. I learned a lot. I felt very tired but happy.
What a fun and meaningful day!
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封回信，需围绕笔友询问的“上周日做了什么”展开。首先要明确书信格式，结合表格信息梳理写作要点：需包含天气（hot and sunny）、同行人物（family）、上午活动（参观茶博、看茶艺表演、品茶）、上午感受（relaxed）、下午活动（去农场、摘杨梅）、下午感受（tired but happy）；其次要使用一般过去时描述过去的活动，适当补充细节让内容更丰富，同时控制字数在80词左右，不得出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：全文采用一般过去时，描述上周日的活动；
2. 开篇承接已给内容，点明同行的人（my family）和天气（hot and sunny）；
3. 上午部分：依次叙述参观茶博、观看茶艺表演、品茶的过程，补充“尝试做茶”的细节，表达“relaxed”的感受；
4. 下午部分：叙述去农场、摘杨梅的活动，补充“喂鸡、学种菜”的细节，表达“tired but happy”的感受；
5. 结尾添加总结句呼应主题，检查要点是否齐全、语言是否通顺、字数是否符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email. Last Sunday I went out with my family. It was hot and sunny. In the morning, we visited a tea museum. We watched a tea art performance. It was really enjoyable. They also let us try to make some tea. After that, we also enjoyed some tea. I like the black tea best. The trip was really relaxing.
In the afternoon, we went to a farm. I picked some waxberries and fed some chicken. The farmer taught us how to grow vegetables. I learned a lot. I felt very tired but happy.
What a fun and meaningful day!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般过去时运用、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有给定要点，结构清晰（分上午、下午叙述），适当添加合理细节使内容充实，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，情感表达真实，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一封回信，需围绕笔友询问的“上周日做了什么”展开。首先要明确书信格式，结合表格信息梳理写作要点：需包含天气（hot and sunny）、同行人物（family）、上午活动（参观茶博、看茶艺表演、品茶）、上午感受（relaxed）、下午活动（去农场、摘杨梅）、下午感受（tired but happy）；其次要使用一般过去时描述过去的活动，适当补充细节让内容更丰富，同时控制字数在80词左右，不得出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：全文采用一般过去时，描述上周日的活动；
2. 开篇承接已给内容，点明同行的人（my family）和天气（hot and sunny）；
3. 上午部分：依次叙述参观茶博、观看茶艺表演、品茶的过程，补充“尝试做茶”的细节，表达“relaxed”的感受；
4. 下午部分：叙述去农场、摘杨梅的活动，补充“喂鸡、学种菜”的细节，表达“tired but happy”的感受；
5. 结尾添加总结句呼应主题，检查要点是否齐全、语言是否通顺、字数是否符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email. Last Sunday I went out with my family. It was hot and sunny. In the morning, we visited a tea museum. We watched a tea art performance. It was really enjoyable. They also let us try to make some tea. After that, we also enjoyed some tea. I like the black tea best. The trip was really relaxing.
In the afternoon, we went to a farm. I picked some waxberries and fed some chicken. The farmer taught us how to grow vegetables. I learned a lot. I felt very tired but happy.
What a fun and meaningful day!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般过去时运用、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有给定要点，结构清晰（分上午、下午叙述），适当添加合理细节使内容充实，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，情感表达真实，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
