66.暑假即将来临,你校英文报新增"Cool Summer Stories"栏目,向全校学生征稿。请你根据栏目海报信息写一篇英语短文,分享你去年暑假的一次经历与收获。

注意:(1)包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:70左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My last summer holiday was (fun/exciting/meaningful/unforgettable/... ).
注意:(1)包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:70左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My last summer holiday was (fun/exciting/meaningful/unforgettable/... ).
答案
66. One possible version:
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
From this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
From this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题,需围绕“Cool Summer Stories”栏目的征稿要求,结合三个核心要点(暑假的感受、暑假做的具体事情、从经历中获得的收获)完成短文。首先确定暑假的感受(如unforgettable),接着描述暑假的具体经历(如看望乡下爷爷奶奶并参与农活),最后说明从经历中得到的感悟,同时要满足词数要求、避免出现真实信息。
【解析】短文采用“总-分-总”结构:开头点明暑假感受为unforgettable;中间部分具体叙述暑假去乡下看望爷爷奶奶,帮忙喂鸡、摘菜、挤牛奶、做饭等经历;结尾总结收获,即亲近了爷爷奶奶,理解了劳动的重要性,符合题目所有要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I helped them feed chickens, pick vegetables and even tried to milk a cow. I also cooked some local food for them. It was not easy but interesting.
From this experience, I got closer to my grandparents and understood the importance of hard work. These warm memories will stay with me.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语叙事表达
【点评】作文紧扣主题,涵盖所有要点,语言流畅自然,结构清晰,情感真挚,符合初中英语写作的要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】短文采用“总-分-总”结构:开头点明暑假感受为unforgettable;中间部分具体叙述暑假去乡下看望爷爷奶奶,帮忙喂鸡、摘菜、挤牛奶、做饭等经历;结尾总结收获,即亲近了爷爷奶奶,理解了劳动的重要性,符合题目所有要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I helped them feed chickens, pick vegetables and even tried to milk a cow. I also cooked some local food for them. It was not easy but interesting.
From this experience, I got closer to my grandparents and understood the importance of hard work. These warm memories will stay with me.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语叙事表达
【点评】作文紧扣主题,涵盖所有要点,语言流畅自然,结构清晰,情感真挚,符合初中英语写作的要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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