单元写作专题

One possible version:
A Special Graduation Memory in My Heart
A special graduation memory in my heart is our class photo. It was taken on the playground on a sunny afternoon last month.
In the photo, all my classmates and teachers are smiling brightly. Behind us stands our beautiful teaching building. When I look at it, I remember the day we took it. Everyone was a little sad because graduation was coming, but we tried our best to smile. We hugged warmly and said “good luck” again and again.
This photo means a lot to me. It always reminds me of the warmest and most precious time in my life. I will keep it in my heart forever.
思路梳理 【总体分析】
①体裁:记叙文;②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点题;第二步,描述物品和背后的故事;第三步,表达感悟。

【分析】本题为英语单元写作题，要求围绕“心中特别的毕业回忆”写一篇记叙文。解题思路：首先明确体裁为记叙文，时态结合一般过去时（描述过去事件）和一般现在时（表达当下感悟）；其次遵循写作步骤：开篇点题引出核心回忆（班级照片），接着描述照片内容及背后的故事（拍照的时间、场景、当时的心情与互动），最后表达该回忆的意义与感悟，写作时需适当添加细节，避免遗漏要点。
【解析】第一步，开篇点题：直接点明心中特别的毕业回忆是班级照片，说明拍照的时间（上个月晴朗的下午）与地点（操场）；第二步，描述内容与故事：介绍照片中师生的状态，回忆拍照当天虽因毕业临近有些伤感，但大家努力微笑、互相拥抱祝福的场景；第三步，表达感悟：说明照片是人生中温暖珍贵的时光，会永远珍藏。
【答案】One possible version:
A Special Graduation Memory in My Heart
A special graduation memory in my heart is our class photo. It was taken on the playground on a sunny afternoon last month.
In the photo, all my classmates and teachers are smiling brightly. Behind us stands our beautiful teaching building. When I look at it, I remember the day we took it. Everyone was a little sad because graduation was coming, but we tried our best to smile. We hugged warmly and said “good luck” again and again.
This photo means a lot to me. It always reminds me of the warmest and most precious time in my life. I will keep it in my heart forever.
思路梳理 【总体分析】
①体裁:记叙文;②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点题;第二步,描述物品和背后的故事;第三步,表达感悟。
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；英语主题写作；英语时态运用
【点评】本题为单元写作专题，围绕学生熟悉的毕业回忆展开，贴近生活，考查学生的记叙文写作能力、时态运用能力及情感表达能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能有效检验学生的语言综合运用水平。
【难度系数】0.5

【训练提升】
时光荏苒，初中生活即将结束。回首三年，一枚校徽、一张合影、一本同学录，甚至走廊里的一句问候，都可能成为你最珍贵的毕业记忆。请以“A Special Graduation Memory in My Heart”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享这份感动。
内容要点:1. 介绍这个与毕业有关的物品或瞬间;2. 讲述它背后的故事;3. 表达你的感受或它对你的意义。
写作要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,可适当拓展;2. 语言通顺,行文连贯,过渡自然;3. 词数100左右;4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

1. 介绍这个与毕业有关的物品或瞬间:
A Special Graduation Memory in My Heart
A special graduation memory in my heart is our class photo. It was taken on the playground on a sunny afternoon last month.
2. 讲述它背后的故事:
In the photo, all my classmates and teachers are smiling brightly. Behind us stands our beautiful teaching building. When I look at it, I remember the day we took it. Everyone was a little sad because graduation was coming, but we tried our best to smile. We hugged warmly and said “good luck” again and again.
3. 表达你的感受或它对你的意义:
This photo means a lot to me. It always reminds me of the warmest and most precious time in my life. I will keep it in my heart forever.

【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，需围绕毕业相关的物品或瞬间展开，包含三个核心要点：介绍物品/瞬间、讲述背后故事、表达感受意义。解题时先确定具体载体（如班级合影），再按要点组织内容，注意语言通顺、词数符合要求，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】首先确定写作主题为班级合影，先介绍合影的时间与地点（操场，上周晴天）；接着讲述背后的故事：同学们因毕业临近略带伤感但努力微笑，互相拥抱送祝福；最后表达其意义：是生命中温暖珍贵的回忆，会永远珍藏。
【答案】A Special Graduation Memory in My Heart
A special graduation memory in my heart is our class photo. It was taken on the playground on a sunny afternoon last month.
In the photo, all my classmates and teachers are smiling brightly. Behind us stands our beautiful teaching building. When I look at it, I remember the day we took it. Everyone was a little sad because graduation was coming, but we tried our best to smile. We hugged warmly and said “good luck” again and again.
This photo means a lot to me. It always reminds me of the warmest and most precious time in my life. I will keep it in my heart forever.
【知识点】英语话题写作、语句连贯、要点覆盖
【点评】本题贴合初中毕业主题，考查学生英语综合运用能力，要求围绕给定要点组织内容，语言通顺、情感真挚，符合初中英语写作考查目标。
【难度系数】0.6