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主题词网
写一篇有关交流之旅的文章
经历
感受
优选词汇
exchange
foreign
host family
abroad
cultural difference
program
activities
take part in
tour
communication
anxious
grateful
independent
confused
homesick
unfamiliar
lonely
worried
shocked
feel at home
写作实例
审主题
审要点
审时态：以一般过去时、一般现在时为主
审人称：以第一人称为主
假如你是李华,你刚从美国留学回家,想写一封信给寄宿家庭,表达你的感激之情。
内容提示:1.说明写信的目的;2.具体描述寄宿家庭对你的帮助(学习和生活两个方面);3.表达感激之情及美好祝愿。
要求:1.词数90左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;4.条理清楚,语句通顺,语义连贯,书写规范。
Dear Mr Brown,
How are you? I had a safe journey back to China yesterday.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作支架
开头 — 解释写信的目的 — I am writing to express my gratitude for during my stay.
中间 — 从学习和生活两个方面具体描述寄宿家庭给予的帮助 — For my studies, thank you for helping me with . Besides, through , I’ve gained a deeper understanding of .（高分句式1） The cultural differences we discussed have and 图1 （高分句式2） Moreover, I’m grateful that you taught me . From to , these abilities have made me more self-reliant.
结尾 — 表达感激之情及美好祝愿 — I can’t thank you enough for ! I wish your family all the happiness and success.
优秀范文
Dear Mr Brown,
How are you? I had a safe journey back to China yesterday. I am writing to express my gratitude for① your generous help during my stay. I had many wonderful experiences and enjoyed myself very much.
For my studies, thank you for helping me with my homework every evening. Your encouragement not only made my learning in the US much easier but also② boosted my confidence①. Besides, through our museum visits, I’ve gained③ a deeper understanding of your traditions. The cultural differences we discussed have broadened③ my horizons and made me more open-minded. Moreover, I’m grateful that you taught me practical life skills. From doing laundry to cooking simple meals, these abilities have made③ me more self-reliant.
I can’t thank you enough for everything you’ve done③! I wish your family all the happiness and success.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点评析
①使用了“express one’s gratitude for”“boost one’s confidence”提升文章档次。
②not only...but also...使文章更连贯,同时也增强了语言的表现力。
③现在完成时是本单元的核心语法,将学习的内容融入写作中,做到了学以致用。
主题词网
写一篇有关交流之旅的文章
经历
感受
优选词汇
exchange
foreign
host family
abroad
cultural difference
program
activities
take part in
tour
communication
anxious
grateful
independent
confused
homesick
unfamiliar
lonely
worried
shocked
feel at home
写作实例
审主题
审要点
审时态：以一般过去时、一般现在时为主
审人称：以第一人称为主
假如你是李华,你刚从美国留学回家,想写一封信给寄宿家庭,表达你的感激之情。
内容提示:1.说明写信的目的;2.具体描述寄宿家庭对你的帮助(学习和生活两个方面);3.表达感激之情及美好祝愿。
要求:1.词数90左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;4.条理清楚,语句通顺,语义连贯,书写规范。
Dear Mr Brown,
How are you? I had a safe journey back to China yesterday.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作支架
开头 — 解释写信的目的 — I am writing to express my gratitude for during my stay.
中间 — 从学习和生活两个方面具体描述寄宿家庭给予的帮助 — For my studies, thank you for helping me with . Besides, through , I’ve gained a deeper understanding of .（高分句式1） The cultural differences we discussed have and 图1 （高分句式2） Moreover, I’m grateful that you taught me . From to , these abilities have made me more self-reliant.
结尾 — 表达感激之情及美好祝愿 — I can’t thank you enough for ! I wish your family all the happiness and success.
优秀范文
Dear Mr Brown,
How are you? I had a safe journey back to China yesterday. I am writing to express my gratitude for① your generous help during my stay. I had many wonderful experiences and enjoyed myself very much.
For my studies, thank you for helping me with my homework every evening. Your encouragement not only made my learning in the US much easier but also② boosted my confidence①. Besides, through our museum visits, I’ve gained③ a deeper understanding of your traditions. The cultural differences we discussed have broadened③ my horizons and made me more open-minded. Moreover, I’m grateful that you taught me practical life skills. From doing laundry to cooking simple meals, these abilities have made③ me more self-reliant.
I can’t thank you enough for everything you’ve done③! I wish your family all the happiness and success.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点评析
①使用了“express one’s gratitude for”“boost one’s confidence”提升文章档次。
②not only...but also...使文章更连贯,同时也增强了语言的表现力。
③现在完成时是本单元的核心语法,将学习的内容融入写作中,做到了学以致用。
答案
I am writing to express my gratitude for your generous help during my stay. I had many wonderful experiences and enjoyed myself very much.
For my studies, thank you for helping me with my homework every evening. Your encouragement not only made my learning in the US much easier but also boosted my confidence. Besides, through our museum visits, I've gained a deeper understanding of your traditions. The cultural differences we discussed have broadened my horizons and made me more open-minded. Moreover, I'm grateful that you taught me practical life skills. From doing laundry to cooking simple meals, these abilities have made me more self-reliant.
I can't thank you enough for everything you've done!
For my studies, thank you for helping me with my homework every evening. Your encouragement not only made my learning in the US much easier but also boosted my confidence. Besides, through our museum visits, I've gained a deeper understanding of your traditions. The cultural differences we discussed have broadened my horizons and made me more open-minded. Moreover, I'm grateful that you taught me practical life skills. From doing laundry to cooking simple meals, these abilities have made me more self-reliant.
I can't thank you enough for everything you've done!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作任务，要求以李华的身份给美国寄宿家庭写感谢信，围绕“交流之旅的感激”展开。解题思路：首先明确写作目的（开头直接点明表达感激）；其次从学习、生活两个方面具体描述寄宿家庭的帮助，需运用给定的高分句式（如not only...but also）和核心词汇；最后遵循时态要求（一般过去时、现在完成时），使用第一人称，确保要点齐全、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“express my gratitude for your generous help during my stay”点明写信目的，补充说明有美好经历，引出下文；
2. 学习方面：写寄宿家庭每晚帮忙辅导作业，运用“not only...but also”体现鼓励对学习和自信的双重作用，通过博物馆参观加深对当地传统的理解；
3. 生活方面：写寄宿家庭教实用生活技能（如洗衣、做饭），提升自立能力；
4. 结尾：再次感谢寄宿家庭的付出并送上美好祝愿，符合书信格式。
【答案】
I am writing to express my gratitude for your generous help during my stay. I had many wonderful experiences and enjoyed myself very much.
For my studies, thank you for helping me with my homework every evening. Your encouragement not only made my learning in the US much easier but also boosted my confidence. Besides, through our museum visits, I've gained a deeper understanding of your traditions. The cultural differences we discussed have broadened my horizons and made me more open-minded. Moreover, I'm grateful that you taught me practical life skills. From doing laundry to cooking simple meals, these abilities have made me more self-reliant.
I can't thank you enough for everything you've done!
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般过去时与现在完成时、高分句式运用
【点评】
范文紧扣写作要求，要点齐全，情感真挚，运用了高级词汇和句式，时态正确，结构清晰，是符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书信写作任务，要求以李华的身份给美国寄宿家庭写感谢信，围绕“交流之旅的感激”展开。解题思路：首先明确写作目的（开头直接点明表达感激）；其次从学习、生活两个方面具体描述寄宿家庭的帮助，需运用给定的高分句式（如not only...but also）和核心词汇；最后遵循时态要求（一般过去时、现在完成时），使用第一人称，确保要点齐全、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“express my gratitude for your generous help during my stay”点明写信目的，补充说明有美好经历，引出下文；
2. 学习方面：写寄宿家庭每晚帮忙辅导作业，运用“not only...but also”体现鼓励对学习和自信的双重作用，通过博物馆参观加深对当地传统的理解；
3. 生活方面：写寄宿家庭教实用生活技能（如洗衣、做饭），提升自立能力；
4. 结尾：再次感谢寄宿家庭的付出并送上美好祝愿，符合书信格式。
【答案】
I am writing to express my gratitude for your generous help during my stay. I had many wonderful experiences and enjoyed myself very much.
For my studies, thank you for helping me with my homework every evening. Your encouragement not only made my learning in the US much easier but also boosted my confidence. Besides, through our museum visits, I've gained a deeper understanding of your traditions. The cultural differences we discussed have broadened my horizons and made me more open-minded. Moreover, I'm grateful that you taught me practical life skills. From doing laundry to cooking simple meals, these abilities have made me more self-reliant.
I can't thank you enough for everything you've done!
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般过去时与现在完成时、高分句式运用
【点评】
范文紧扣写作要求，要点齐全，情感真挚，运用了高级词汇和句式，时态正确，结构清晰，是符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
