写作演练＞＞
昨天的英语课上，你们班同学就“安全”话题展开了讨论。请你根据提示，写一篇80词左右的发言总结稿并给你校英语报编辑部投稿。

[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时、一般过去时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明英语课上就安全话题展开讨论,再详述讨论结果,并介绍相关观点,最后谈谈自己对于安全的看法。
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写作专训
One possible version:
In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
First, we should obey the traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go together in the evening. Never go out alone. We should go home as early as possible. Finally, we should learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important. We must firmly say no to school bullying.

【分析】首先明确写作任务：为校英语报撰写80词左右的发言总结稿，内容围绕英语课上“安全”话题的讨论展开。需遵循要求：以第一人称为主，时态结合一般过去时（描述讨论的发生）和一般现在时（陈述观点）；结构按“点明讨论背景→详述讨论得出的安全要点→表达个人看法”的顺序推进，确保要点全面、语言简洁，符合投稿规范。
【解析】第一步：开头用一般过去时点明英语课上开展了安全话题讨论，引出总结；第二步：分点列举讨论得出的安全注意事项（交通规则、健康饮食、禁止私自下河游泳、夜间结伴出行、防范自然灾害等），用一般现在时陈述观点；第三步：结尾表达个人对学生安全的重视，补充反校园欺凌的要点，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
First, we should obey the traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go together in the evening. Never go out alone. We should go home as early as possible. Finally, we should learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important. We must firmly say no to school bullying.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、安全话题英语表达
【点评】本文结构清晰，严格遵循写作要求，覆盖多个安全相关要点，时态运用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合校英语报投稿的规范，是一篇合格的写作范文。
【难度系数】0.6