Ⅶ.书面表达。
根据图画支架提示,以Better changes, better life为题写一篇小作文。


Better changes, better life
We must make some changes in our daily life日常生活. We can make
our life better.
We can reuse some old things. We can reuse wrapping paper to make a
rubbish bin. We can
We can reuse old trousers to make shorts or rag. We can
We can reduce waste. We can write on both sides of paper. We
We can recycle some things. We can use waste paper to make some paper
bags. We can
We can also replace some things. We can use glasses instead of paper cups.
We can
Better changes, better life!
根据图画支架提示,以Better changes, better life为题写一篇小作文。
Better changes, better life
We must make some changes in our daily life日常生活. We can make
our life better.
We can reuse some old things. We can reuse wrapping paper to make a
rubbish bin. We can
reuse wrapping paper to make a storage box or draw pictures on it.
We can reuse old trousers to make shorts or rag. We can
reuse a bottle to make a vase.
We can reduce waste. We can write on both sides of paper. We
can advocate the paperless office.
We can recycle some things. We can use waste paper to make some paper
bags. We can
use waste glass to make new glasses. We can use the broken glass to make a flower pot.
We can also replace some things. We can use glasses instead of paper cups.
We can
use shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
Better changes, better life!
答案
参考范文:
We must make some changes in our daily life.
We can make our life better.
We can reuse some old things. We can reuse
wrapping paper to make a rubbish bin. We can reuse
wrapping paper to make a storage box or draw
pictures on it. We can reuse old trousers to make
shorts or rag. We can reuse a bottle to make a vase.
We can reduce waste. We can write on both sides
of paper. We can advocate the paperless office.
We can recycle some things. We can use waste
paper to make some paper bags. We can use
waste glass to make new glasses. We can use the
broken glass to make a flower pot.
We can also replace some things. We can use
glasses instead of paper cups. We can use
shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
Better changes, better life!
We must make some changes in our daily life.
We can make our life better.
We can reuse some old things. We can reuse
wrapping paper to make a rubbish bin. We can reuse
wrapping paper to make a storage box or draw
pictures on it. We can reuse old trousers to make
shorts or rag. We can reuse a bottle to make a vase.
We can reduce waste. We can write on both sides
of paper. We can advocate the paperless office.
We can recycle some things. We can use waste
paper to make some paper bags. We can use
waste glass to make new glasses. We can use the
broken glass to make a flower pot.
We can also replace some things. We can use
glasses instead of paper cups. We can use
shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
Better changes, better life!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇半开放的环保主题补全作文,解题时首先要先定位每一处空白对应的段落核心主题:
1. 第一处空白所属段落主题是「重复利用包装纸」,前面已经给出用包装纸做垃圾桶的示例,我们只需要联想包装纸其他可二次利用的合理场景,写出符合We can开头的简单句即可;
2. 第二处空白所属段落主题是「旧物重复利用」,前面给出旧裤子改短裤、抹布的示例,补充其他常见旧物改造的合理做法即可;
3. 第三处空白所属段落主题是「减少浪费」,前面给出纸张双面书写的示例,补充能减少资源消耗的日常做法即可;
4. 第四处空白所属段落主题是「回收利用」,前面给出废纸制作纸袋的示例,补充其他可回收物品的回收利用场景即可;
5. 第五处空白所属段落主题是「环保物品替换一次性用品」,前面给出玻璃杯代替纸杯的示例,补充用耐用品替换一次性用品的合理做法即可。
所有补写内容都要贴合低碳环保的核心,句式和前文给出的示例保持一致,语法正确就符合要求。
【解析】
我们按照段落主题逐一补全内容:
① 对应包装纸二次利用的空白:结合包装纸的特性,可补写和前文句式一致的内容:We can reuse wrapping paper to make a storage box or draw pictures on it.
② 对应旧物改造的空白:选取常见的空瓶子改造场景,补写:We can reuse a bottle to make a vase.
③ 对应减少浪费的空白:结合办公场景减耗的常见做法,补写:We can advocate the paperless office.
④ 对应回收利用的空白:选取废玻璃回收的场景,补写:We can use waste glass to make new glasses. We can use the broken glass to make a flower pot.
⑤ 对应物品替换的空白:选取购物场景替换一次性塑料袋的常见做法,补写:We can use shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
补全后全文逻辑连贯,所有内容都紧扣“小改变优化生活”的主题,符合写作要求。
【答案】
Better changes, better life
We must make some changes in our daily life. We can make our life better.
We can reuse some old things. We can reuse wrapping paper to make a rubbish bin. We can reuse wrapping paper to make a storage box or draw pictures on it.
We can reuse old trousers to make shorts or rag. We can reuse a bottle to make a vase.
We can reduce waste. We can write on both sides of paper. We can advocate the paperless office.
We can recycle some things. We can use waste paper to make some paper bags. We can use waste glass to make new glasses. We can use the broken glass to make a flower pot.
We can also replace some things. We can use glasses instead of paper cups. We can use shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
Better changes, better life!
【知识点】
环保主题表达;简单句写作;情景补全
【点评】
本题属于半限定式书面表达,不需要学生独立完成全篇创作,仅需结合每段给定的主题提示补充合理内容,既降低了低年级学生的写作门槛,也能引导学生将英语表达和日常环保常识结合,作答时只要内容贴合对应段落主题、语法正确即可得分,无需完全和参考范文一致。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇半开放的环保主题补全作文,解题时首先要先定位每一处空白对应的段落核心主题:
1. 第一处空白所属段落主题是「重复利用包装纸」,前面已经给出用包装纸做垃圾桶的示例,我们只需要联想包装纸其他可二次利用的合理场景,写出符合We can开头的简单句即可;
2. 第二处空白所属段落主题是「旧物重复利用」,前面给出旧裤子改短裤、抹布的示例,补充其他常见旧物改造的合理做法即可;
3. 第三处空白所属段落主题是「减少浪费」,前面给出纸张双面书写的示例,补充能减少资源消耗的日常做法即可;
4. 第四处空白所属段落主题是「回收利用」,前面给出废纸制作纸袋的示例,补充其他可回收物品的回收利用场景即可;
5. 第五处空白所属段落主题是「环保物品替换一次性用品」,前面给出玻璃杯代替纸杯的示例,补充用耐用品替换一次性用品的合理做法即可。
所有补写内容都要贴合低碳环保的核心,句式和前文给出的示例保持一致,语法正确就符合要求。
【解析】
我们按照段落主题逐一补全内容:
① 对应包装纸二次利用的空白:结合包装纸的特性,可补写和前文句式一致的内容:We can reuse wrapping paper to make a storage box or draw pictures on it.
② 对应旧物改造的空白:选取常见的空瓶子改造场景,补写:We can reuse a bottle to make a vase.
③ 对应减少浪费的空白:结合办公场景减耗的常见做法,补写:We can advocate the paperless office.
④ 对应回收利用的空白:选取废玻璃回收的场景,补写:We can use waste glass to make new glasses. We can use the broken glass to make a flower pot.
⑤ 对应物品替换的空白:选取购物场景替换一次性塑料袋的常见做法,补写:We can use shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
补全后全文逻辑连贯,所有内容都紧扣“小改变优化生活”的主题,符合写作要求。
【答案】
Better changes, better life
We must make some changes in our daily life. We can make our life better.
We can reuse some old things. We can reuse wrapping paper to make a rubbish bin. We can reuse wrapping paper to make a storage box or draw pictures on it.
We can reuse old trousers to make shorts or rag. We can reuse a bottle to make a vase.
We can reduce waste. We can write on both sides of paper. We can advocate the paperless office.
We can recycle some things. We can use waste paper to make some paper bags. We can use waste glass to make new glasses. We can use the broken glass to make a flower pot.
We can also replace some things. We can use glasses instead of paper cups. We can use shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
Better changes, better life!
【知识点】
环保主题表达;简单句写作;情景补全
【点评】
本题属于半限定式书面表达,不需要学生独立完成全篇创作,仅需结合每段给定的主题提示补充合理内容,既降低了低年级学生的写作门槛,也能引导学生将英语表达和日常环保常识结合,作答时只要内容贴合对应段落主题、语法正确即可得分,无需完全和参考范文一致。
【难度系数】
0.7
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