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八、书面表达。(5分)
结合实际情况,描述一下你们全家人晚上的活动。
要求:1.条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范;
2.用现在进行时;
3.不少于5句话。
It is six o'clock in the evening. My family are at home.
Look!
结合实际情况,描述一下你们全家人晚上的活动。
要求:1.条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范;
2.用现在进行时;
3.不少于5句话。
It is six o'clock in the evening. My family are at home.
Look!
My grandpa is reading a book.
My father is walking with my mother in the garden.
And they are talking.
My sister is watching TV in the living room.
My brother is doing his homework in his bedroom.
I am sweeping the floor.
答案
参考范文:
It is six o'clock in the evening. My
family are at home. Look! My grandpa is
reading a book. My father is walking with
my mother in the garden. And they are
talking. My sister is watching TV in the living
room. My brother is doing his homework in
his bedroom. I am sweeping the floor.
It is six o'clock in the evening. My
family are at home. Look! My grandpa is
reading a book. My father is walking with
my mother in the garden. And they are
talking. My sister is watching TV in the living
room. My brother is doing his homework in
his bedroom. I am sweeping the floor.
解析
【分析】
这道题要求用现在进行时描述全家人晚间的活动，解题时首先要明确核心时态的使用规则，先梳理家中不同成员的常见晚间活动，按照从长辈到晚辈的顺序依次介绍，保证逻辑通顺，每句话都符合现在进行时"主语+be+动词现在分词"的结构，满足不少于5句话的要求，写完后检查拼写、be动词和主语的搭配是否正确，确保内容连贯符合生活实际。
【解析】
步骤1：锁定时态要求，所有描述正在发生的动作都要使用现在进行时，注意不同人称对应的be动词搭配：第一人称I搭配am，第三人称单数搭配is，复数人称搭配are。
步骤2：给不同家庭成员安排符合日常逻辑的晚间活动，比如长辈阅读、父母散步聊天、同辈看电视/写作业、自己做家务等，避免内容重复。
步骤3：依次串联成句，保证句数达标，衔接自然，最终得到完整文段。
【答案】
It is six o'clock in the evening. My family are at home. Look! My grandpa is reading a book. My father is walking with my mother in the garden. And they are talking. My sister is watching TV in the living room. My brother is doing his homework in his bedroom. I am sweeping the floor.
【知识点】
1. 现在进行时结构
2. 英语情景写作
3. 日常动作表达
【点评】
本题属于基础应用型写作题，核心考点是现在进行时的实际运用，难度较低，只需要紧扣题干时态要求，结合生活中家人的常见晚间活动展开描写，注意be动词和主语人称匹配、动词现在分词拼写正确，很容易达到题目要求拿到满分，平时可以多积累居家相关的动作短语，进一步丰富写作内容。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题要求用现在进行时描述全家人晚间的活动，解题时首先要明确核心时态的使用规则，先梳理家中不同成员的常见晚间活动，按照从长辈到晚辈的顺序依次介绍，保证逻辑通顺，每句话都符合现在进行时"主语+be+动词现在分词"的结构，满足不少于5句话的要求，写完后检查拼写、be动词和主语的搭配是否正确，确保内容连贯符合生活实际。
【解析】
步骤1：锁定时态要求，所有描述正在发生的动作都要使用现在进行时，注意不同人称对应的be动词搭配：第一人称I搭配am，第三人称单数搭配is，复数人称搭配are。
步骤2：给不同家庭成员安排符合日常逻辑的晚间活动，比如长辈阅读、父母散步聊天、同辈看电视/写作业、自己做家务等，避免内容重复。
步骤3：依次串联成句，保证句数达标，衔接自然，最终得到完整文段。
【答案】
It is six o'clock in the evening. My family are at home. Look! My grandpa is reading a book. My father is walking with my mother in the garden. And they are talking. My sister is watching TV in the living room. My brother is doing his homework in his bedroom. I am sweeping the floor.
【知识点】
1. 现在进行时结构
2. 英语情景写作
3. 日常动作表达
【点评】
本题属于基础应用型写作题，核心考点是现在进行时的实际运用，难度较低，只需要紧扣题干时态要求，结合生活中家人的常见晚间活动展开描写，注意be动词和主语人称匹配、动词现在分词拼写正确，很容易达到题目要求拿到满分，平时可以多积累居家相关的动作短语，进一步丰富写作内容。
【难度系数】
0.7
