九、书面表达。(5 分)
假如你是李颖,请根据下面的表格提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你和你的家人、朋友的出行方式。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,可适当发挥想象,不少于5句话。

假如你是李颖,请根据下面的表格提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你和你的家人、朋友的出行方式。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,可适当发挥想象,不少于5句话。
答案
参考范文:
My name is Li Ying. I live on Garden
Street. I go to school by bike every day. My
parents work in a hospital. It is far from our
home. They go to work by bus. My good
friend Zhang Jun lives in Sunshine Town.
It's near his school. He goes to school on
foot every day.
My name is Li Ying. I live on Garden
Street. I go to school by bike every day. My
parents work in a hospital. It is far from our
home. They go to work by bus. My good
friend Zhang Jun lives in Sunshine Town.
It's near his school. He goes to school on
foot every day.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,我们先梳理所有给定的信息点:1. 身份是李颖,住址在花园街,上学的出行方式是骑自行车;2. 李颖的父母也住在花园街,上班出行方式是坐公交;3. 好友张军住在阳光镇,上学出行方式是步行。接下来我们按照自我介绍→介绍自身情况→介绍父母情况→介绍好友情况的逻辑来组织内容,适当补充合理的细节(比如父母工作地点离家远、张军家离学校近)让内容更通顺自然,同时注意保证句子数量不少于5句,检查语法尤其是一般现在时里第三人称单数的动词变形、交通方式的固定搭配不要出错,就能完成符合要求的短文。
【解析】
1. 开篇先做自我介绍,引出核心身份:My name is Li Ying.
2. 接着介绍自己的住址,对应表格信息:I live on Garden Street.
3. 说明自己的上学出行方式,匹配表格里的自行车图示:I go to school by bike every day.
4. 过渡到介绍父母的相关情况,先补充合理设定说明坐公交的原因:My parents work in a hospital. It is far from our home. 再对应表格信息说明他们的出行方式:They go to work by bus.
5. 最后过渡到介绍好友张军的情况,先说明他的住址:My good friend Zhang Jun lives in Sunshine Town. 补充细节说明步行的原因:It's near his school. 最后说明他的出行方式:He goes to school on foot every day.
把所有句子连贯整合,确认所有要点都覆盖,语句通顺,符合题目要求即可。
【答案】
参考范文:
My name is Li Ying. I live on Garden Street. I go to school by bike every day. My parents work in a hospital. It is far from our home. They go to work by bus. My good friend Zhang Jun lives in Sunshine Town. It's near his school. He goes to school on foot every day.
【知识点】
一般现在时,交通方式表达,地点介词搭配
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类书面表达,难度较低,只需要完整覆盖表格给出的全部信息点,适当补充符合逻辑的细节让行文流畅,注意主谓一致、交通方式的固定短语搭配,就可以写出符合要求的短文,适合巩固基础的英语写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题,我们先梳理所有给定的信息点:1. 身份是李颖,住址在花园街,上学的出行方式是骑自行车;2. 李颖的父母也住在花园街,上班出行方式是坐公交;3. 好友张军住在阳光镇,上学出行方式是步行。接下来我们按照自我介绍→介绍自身情况→介绍父母情况→介绍好友情况的逻辑来组织内容,适当补充合理的细节(比如父母工作地点离家远、张军家离学校近)让内容更通顺自然,同时注意保证句子数量不少于5句,检查语法尤其是一般现在时里第三人称单数的动词变形、交通方式的固定搭配不要出错,就能完成符合要求的短文。
【解析】
1. 开篇先做自我介绍,引出核心身份:My name is Li Ying.
2. 接着介绍自己的住址,对应表格信息:I live on Garden Street.
3. 说明自己的上学出行方式,匹配表格里的自行车图示:I go to school by bike every day.
4. 过渡到介绍父母的相关情况,先补充合理设定说明坐公交的原因:My parents work in a hospital. It is far from our home. 再对应表格信息说明他们的出行方式:They go to work by bus.
5. 最后过渡到介绍好友张军的情况,先说明他的住址:My good friend Zhang Jun lives in Sunshine Town. 补充细节说明步行的原因:It's near his school. 最后说明他的出行方式:He goes to school on foot every day.
把所有句子连贯整合,确认所有要点都覆盖,语句通顺,符合题目要求即可。
【答案】
参考范文:
My name is Li Ying. I live on Garden Street. I go to school by bike every day. My parents work in a hospital. It is far from our home. They go to work by bus. My good friend Zhang Jun lives in Sunshine Town. It's near his school. He goes to school on foot every day.
【知识点】
一般现在时,交通方式表达,地点介词搭配
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类书面表达,难度较低,只需要完整覆盖表格给出的全部信息点,适当补充符合逻辑的细节让行文流畅,注意主谓一致、交通方式的固定短语搭配,就可以写出符合要求的短文,适合巩固基础的英语写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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