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(九)
当下，很多城市居民养宠物狗，由此带来了一些问题。为此，某英文报开展了“文明养狗”的征文活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书投稿，介绍养宠物狗可能带来的问题，并呼吁大家文明养狗。要点如下：
要求：
1. 词数100左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
参考词汇:责任感 a sense of responsibility；打扰 disturb；粪便 excrement and urine；狗链 lead
How to be a responsible pet dog owner
A lot of people around us keep pet dogs.
当下，很多城市居民养宠物狗，由此带来了一些问题。为此，某英文报开展了“文明养狗”的征文活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书投稿，介绍养宠物狗可能带来的问题，并呼吁大家文明养狗。要点如下：
要求：
1. 词数100左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
参考词汇:责任感 a sense of responsibility；打扰 disturb；粪便 excrement and urine；狗链 lead
How to be a responsible pet dog owner
A lot of people around us keep pet dogs.
However, people taking their dogs to public places may
cause some problems. For example, their dogs may bark and disturb people. Their excrement and urine
may pollute the environment. What's worse, the dogs sometimes are allowed to run freely in public areas,
posing a threat to people's safety.
In my opinion, we should be responsible pet owners. Pet dog owners must learn to train their dogs to
keep quiet. When walking their pets, they should clean up their dogs' excrement and urine. All pet dogs
must be walked with a lead so that they won't hurt people. We hope pet dog owners respect other people's
rights by keeping the environment clean and safe.
cause some problems. For example, their dogs may bark and disturb people. Their excrement and urine
may pollute the environment. What's worse, the dogs sometimes are allowed to run freely in public areas,
posing a threat to people's safety.
In my opinion, we should be responsible pet owners. Pet dog owners must learn to train their dogs to
keep quiet. When walking their pets, they should clean up their dogs' excrement and urine. All pet dogs
must be walked with a lead so that they won't hurt people. We hope pet dog owners respect other people's
rights by keeping the environment clean and safe.
答案
(九) How to be a responsible pet dog owner
A lot of people around us keep pet dogs. However, people taking their dogs to public places may
cause some problems. For example, their dogs may bark and disturb people. Their excrement and urine
may pollute the environment. What's worse, the dogs sometimes are allowed to run freely in public areas,
posing a threat to people's safety.
In my opinion, we should be responsible pet owners. Pet dog owners must learn to train their dogs to
keep quiet. When walking their pets, they should clean up their dogs' excrement and urine. All pet dogs
must be walked with a lead so that they won't hurt people. We hope pet dog owners respect other people's
rights by keeping the environment clean and safe.
A lot of people around us keep pet dogs. However, people taking their dogs to public places may
cause some problems. For example, their dogs may bark and disturb people. Their excrement and urine
may pollute the environment. What's worse, the dogs sometimes are allowed to run freely in public areas,
posing a threat to people's safety.
In my opinion, we should be responsible pet owners. Pet dog owners must learn to train their dogs to
keep quiet. When walking their pets, they should clean up their dogs' excrement and urine. All pet dogs
must be walked with a lead so that they won't hurt people. We hope pet dog owners respect other people's
rights by keeping the environment clean and safe.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确文体是主题为“文明养狗”的英语倡议书，首先梳理所有需要覆盖的要点：第一部分要写养宠物狗带来的困扰，题干已经给出噪音扰人、粪便污染环境两个点，我们结合生活常识补充合理的第三点，比如宠物狗随意跑动容易威胁路人安全；第二部分要给出对应建议，题干给出训练动物、及时清理粪便两个点，对应补充的困扰补充第三点建议：出门遛狗牵好狗链。接下来合理使用题干给出的参考词汇，先承接已给出的开头，先介绍养狗带来的各类问题，再顺理成章引出文明养狗的倡议，控制词数在100左右，不泄露任何个人隐私信息，保证行文逻辑通顺即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 谋篇布局：全文分为两个清晰层次，第一层次阐述养宠物狗给他人带来的三类困扰，第二层次针对上述问题给出对应的文明养狗建议，最后发出呼吁，符合倡议书的写作逻辑。
2. 要点逐一落实：① 困扰部分依次覆盖：狗吠打扰他人、排泄物污染环境、宠物随意跑动威胁路人安全三个点；② 建议部分依次覆盖：训练宠物不扰民、及时清理宠物排泄物、遛狗牵好狗链三个点，全部用到题干给出的参考词汇，满足题干要求。
3. 润色衔接：使用however、for example、what's worse、in my opinion等过渡词让行文流畅自然，贴合倡议书的呼吁语气，控制总词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
How to be a responsible pet dog owner
A lot of people around us keep pet dogs. However, people taking their dogs to public places may cause some problems. For example, their dogs may bark and disturb people. Their excrement and urine may pollute the environment. What's worse, the dogs sometimes are allowed to run freely in public areas, posing a threat to people's safety.
In my opinion, we should be responsible pet owners. Pet dog owners must learn to train their dogs to keep quiet. When walking their pets, they should clean up their dogs' excrement and urine. All pet dogs must be walked with a lead so that they won't hurt people. We hope pet dog owners respect other people's rights by keeping the environment clean and safe.
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，要点类英语作文
【点评】
本题贴近日常生活场景，考查初中阶段英语应用文的写作能力，学生只要准确梳理题干给出的所有要点，补充符合场景逻辑的相关内容，正确使用提示给出的参考词汇，做到要点全覆盖、语句通顺连贯，就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先明确文体是主题为“文明养狗”的英语倡议书，首先梳理所有需要覆盖的要点：第一部分要写养宠物狗带来的困扰，题干已经给出噪音扰人、粪便污染环境两个点，我们结合生活常识补充合理的第三点，比如宠物狗随意跑动容易威胁路人安全；第二部分要给出对应建议，题干给出训练动物、及时清理粪便两个点，对应补充的困扰补充第三点建议：出门遛狗牵好狗链。接下来合理使用题干给出的参考词汇，先承接已给出的开头，先介绍养狗带来的各类问题，再顺理成章引出文明养狗的倡议，控制词数在100左右，不泄露任何个人隐私信息，保证行文逻辑通顺即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 谋篇布局：全文分为两个清晰层次，第一层次阐述养宠物狗给他人带来的三类困扰，第二层次针对上述问题给出对应的文明养狗建议，最后发出呼吁，符合倡议书的写作逻辑。
2. 要点逐一落实：① 困扰部分依次覆盖：狗吠打扰他人、排泄物污染环境、宠物随意跑动威胁路人安全三个点；② 建议部分依次覆盖：训练宠物不扰民、及时清理宠物排泄物、遛狗牵好狗链三个点，全部用到题干给出的参考词汇，满足题干要求。
3. 润色衔接：使用however、for example、what's worse、in my opinion等过渡词让行文流畅自然，贴合倡议书的呼吁语气，控制总词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
How to be a responsible pet dog owner
A lot of people around us keep pet dogs. However, people taking their dogs to public places may cause some problems. For example, their dogs may bark and disturb people. Their excrement and urine may pollute the environment. What's worse, the dogs sometimes are allowed to run freely in public areas, posing a threat to people's safety.
In my opinion, we should be responsible pet owners. Pet dog owners must learn to train their dogs to keep quiet. When walking their pets, they should clean up their dogs' excrement and urine. All pet dogs must be walked with a lead so that they won't hurt people. We hope pet dog owners respect other people's rights by keeping the environment clean and safe.
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，要点类英语作文
【点评】
本题贴近日常生活场景，考查初中阶段英语应用文的写作能力，学生只要准确梳理题干给出的所有要点，补充符合场景逻辑的相关内容，正确使用提示给出的参考词汇，做到要点全覆盖、语句通顺连贯，就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
(十)
对于“作业遇到困难时是否向老师请教”这个话题，同学们持有不同的观点。请你根据下表内容的提示，写一篇文章，陈述同学们的观点及理由，并谈谈你的观点和理由。
要求：
1. 短文必须包括表中全部内容，可以适当增加细节。
2. 词数100左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems.
对于“作业遇到困难时是否向老师请教”这个话题，同学们持有不同的观点。请你根据下表内容的提示，写一篇文章，陈述同学们的观点及理由，并谈谈你的观点和理由。
要求：
1. 短文必须包括表中全部内容，可以适当增加细节。
2. 词数100左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems.
Those who prefer to ask teachers for help say that solutions to homework problems are easier to
understand because teachers are more likely to explain them clearly. In addition, it is a good chance to
communicate with teachers.
Others, however, hold a different view because they are too shy to ask. It also worries them that they
might be laughed at by the classmates.
From my point of view, I will surely choose to ask teachers for help when I come across difficulties.
The reason is that I consider it a good way to train my thinking abilities when discussing the problems with
my teachers. What's more, the faster I solve my problem, the more time I will save. Therefore, my
learning efficiency can be greatly improved.
understand because teachers are more likely to explain them clearly. In addition, it is a good chance to
communicate with teachers.
Others, however, hold a different view because they are too shy to ask. It also worries them that they
might be laughed at by the classmates.
From my point of view, I will surely choose to ask teachers for help when I come across difficulties.
The reason is that I consider it a good way to train my thinking abilities when discussing the problems with
my teachers. What's more, the faster I solve my problem, the more time I will save. Therefore, my
learning efficiency can be greatly improved.
答案
(十) The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework
problems. Those who prefer to ask teachers for help say that solutions to homework problems are easier to
understand because teachers are more likely to explain them clearly. In addition, it is a good chance to
communicate with teachers.
Others, however, hold a different view because they are too shy to ask. It also worries them that they
might be laughed at by the classmates.
From my point of view, I will surely choose to ask teachers for help when I come across difficulties.
The reason is that I consider it a good way to train my thinking abilities when discussing the problems with
my teachers. What's more, the faster I solve my problem, the more time I will save. Therefore, my
learning efficiency can be greatly improved.
problems. Those who prefer to ask teachers for help say that solutions to homework problems are easier to
understand because teachers are more likely to explain them clearly. In addition, it is a good chance to
communicate with teachers.
Others, however, hold a different view because they are too shy to ask. It also worries them that they
might be laughed at by the classmates.
From my point of view, I will surely choose to ask teachers for help when I come across difficulties.
The reason is that I consider it a good way to train my thinking abilities when discussing the problems with
my teachers. What's more, the faster I solve my problem, the more time I will save. Therefore, my
learning efficiency can be greatly improved.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先梳理所有要求：需要完整覆盖表格里两类同学的全部观点和对应理由，之后输出自己的观点以及至少2条不与表格内容重复的新理由，词数控制在100左右，给定开头不需要额外撰写。接下来构思行文结构：第一部分承接开头，先介绍支持向老师请教的同学的想法，把“老师讲解清晰易懂、能增加和老师交流的机会”两个理由自然表述出来；第二部分用转折过渡，介绍不愿向老师请教的同学的顾虑，对应写出“性格内向羞于开口、怕被同学嘲笑”两个理由；第三部分输出个人观点，选取合理的原创理由，比如和老师讨论问题能锻炼思维、快速解决难题可以节省时间提升效率，最后用连接词串联全文，保证逻辑通顺，全程注意不泄露任何个人隐私信息。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先引出支持向老师求助的群体，用定语从句明确主体，依次说明两个支持的理由，用"In addition"作为衔接词让表述流畅自然。
2. 用转折词"however"过渡，引出持反对意见的另一部分同学，依次说明他们羞于开口、怕被同学嘲笑的两点顾虑，逻辑层次清晰。
3. 最后用"From my point of view"引出个人观点，给出两个不与表格重复的合理理由：一是和老师讨论问题能锻炼自身思维能力，二是快速解决难题可以节省时间、提升学习效率，收尾自然，检查确认所有要点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现个人隐私信息。
【答案】
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems. Those who prefer to ask teachers for help say that solutions to homework problems are easier to understand because teachers are more likely to explain them clearly. In addition, it is a good chance to communicate with teachers.
Others, however, hold a different view because they are too shy to ask. It also worries them that they might be laughed at by the classmates.
From my point of view, I will surely choose to ask teachers for help when I come across difficulties. The reason is that I consider it a good way to train my thinking abilities when discussing the problems with my teachers. What's more, the faster I solve my problem, the more time I will save. Therefore, my learning efficiency can be greatly improved.
【知识点】
观点类英语写作
议论文逻辑衔接
要点整合表达
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的观点类话题写作，既要求学生完整提取整合题干给出的所有既定要点，又需要学生自主拓展合理的原创观点理由，既考察学生的信息处理能力，也考察学生的语言组织和逻辑表达能力，写作时注意不要遗漏表格里的任意一个给定理由，个人补充的理由要避开表格已有的内容，符合题干要求即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先梳理所有要求：需要完整覆盖表格里两类同学的全部观点和对应理由，之后输出自己的观点以及至少2条不与表格内容重复的新理由，词数控制在100左右，给定开头不需要额外撰写。接下来构思行文结构：第一部分承接开头，先介绍支持向老师请教的同学的想法，把“老师讲解清晰易懂、能增加和老师交流的机会”两个理由自然表述出来；第二部分用转折过渡，介绍不愿向老师请教的同学的顾虑，对应写出“性格内向羞于开口、怕被同学嘲笑”两个理由；第三部分输出个人观点，选取合理的原创理由，比如和老师讨论问题能锻炼思维、快速解决难题可以节省时间提升效率，最后用连接词串联全文，保证逻辑通顺，全程注意不泄露任何个人隐私信息。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先引出支持向老师求助的群体，用定语从句明确主体，依次说明两个支持的理由，用"In addition"作为衔接词让表述流畅自然。
2. 用转折词"however"过渡，引出持反对意见的另一部分同学，依次说明他们羞于开口、怕被同学嘲笑的两点顾虑，逻辑层次清晰。
3. 最后用"From my point of view"引出个人观点，给出两个不与表格重复的合理理由：一是和老师讨论问题能锻炼自身思维能力，二是快速解决难题可以节省时间、提升学习效率，收尾自然，检查确认所有要点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现个人隐私信息。
【答案】
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems. Those who prefer to ask teachers for help say that solutions to homework problems are easier to understand because teachers are more likely to explain them clearly. In addition, it is a good chance to communicate with teachers.
Others, however, hold a different view because they are too shy to ask. It also worries them that they might be laughed at by the classmates.
From my point of view, I will surely choose to ask teachers for help when I come across difficulties. The reason is that I consider it a good way to train my thinking abilities when discussing the problems with my teachers. What's more, the faster I solve my problem, the more time I will save. Therefore, my learning efficiency can be greatly improved.
【知识点】
观点类英语写作
议论文逻辑衔接
要点整合表达
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的观点类话题写作，既要求学生完整提取整合题干给出的所有既定要点，又需要学生自主拓展合理的原创观点理由，既考察学生的信息处理能力，也考察学生的语言组织和逻辑表达能力，写作时注意不要遗漏表格里的任意一个给定理由，个人补充的理由要避开表格已有的内容，符合题干要求即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
