七、书面表达满分25分
在我校二十周年校庆之际,"绿色校园"行动正式启动。现面向全体师生征集"绿色校园"倡议书,假如你是李华,请你从节约能源、减少污染和装点校园等三个方面谈谈你的看法,期待你用充满智慧的创意为学校的长远发展注入绿色活力!
要求:1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;3. 不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear all,
As our school is celebrating its 20th anniversary, the Green Campus Project has officially kicked off!

Li Hua

One possible version:
Dear all,
As our school is celebrating its 20th anniversary, the
Green Campus Project has officially kicked off! Here are my
suggestions to build a more sustainable campus:
Firstly, for energy conservation, we should develop
habits like turning off lights when leaving classrooms and
using staircases instead of elevators. Secondly, to reduce
pollution, proper waste sorting must be implemented, and we
should replace disposable plastic bottles with reusable
tumblers. Most importantly, let's jointly plant more trees and
create class green corners with potted plants to increase our
vegetation coverage.
Remember, every small action counts. Together, we can
transform our school into a model of eco-friendly education!
→transform... into... 将……转变为……
Li Hua
思路引导[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:主要使用一般现在
时。③提示:写作内容须涵盖节约能源、减少污染、装点校
园三个方面,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇说明倡议背景(已给出开头);第二步,从三个
维度提出具体建议,包括节约能源(关灯、走楼梯等)、减少
污染(垃圾分类、减少一次性塑料瓶的使用等)和装点校园
(植树、设置绿化角等);第三步,呼吁行动,展望效果。
[亮点词汇]
①energy conservation能源节约 ②implement执行,实施
③replace disposable plastic bottles with reusable tumblers
用可重复使用的水杯代替一次性塑料瓶 ④vegetation
coverage植被覆盖率
[高分句型]
Most importantly, let's jointly plant more trees and create
class green corners with potted plants to increase our
vegetation coverage.(动词不定式短语作目的状语)

【分析】
本题为环保主题的倡议书写作题，要求从节约能源、减少污染、装点校园三个方面展开。解题思路：首先明确文体为倡议书，时态以一般现在时为主；接着围绕三个提示要点，补充具体可行的细节让内容充实；最后遵循“开篇点题→分点提建议→呼吁行动”的结构，保证语句通顺、要点齐全，符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：1. 承接已给开头，引出关于“绿色校园”的建议；2. 分三个维度写作：①节约能源：列举离开教室关灯、走楼梯代替电梯等具体行为；②减少污染：说明垃圾分类、用可重复水杯代替一次性塑料瓶等措施；③装点校园：提出共同植树、设置班级绿植角等创意；3. 结尾呼吁大家行动，强调小行动的重要性，展望绿色校园的效果。同时运用环保类词汇和高分句型，确保语法正确、内容连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear all,
As our school is celebrating its 20th anniversary, the Green Campus Project has officially kicked off! Here are my suggestions to build a more sustainable campus:
Firstly, for energy conservation, we should develop habits like turning off lights when leaving classrooms and using staircases instead of elevators. Secondly, to reduce pollution, proper waste sorting must be implemented, and we should replace disposable plastic bottles with reusable tumblers. Most importantly, let's jointly plant more trees and create class green corners with potted plants to increase our vegetation coverage.
Remember, every small action counts. Together, we can transform our school into a model of eco-friendly education!
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达（倡议书）、一般现在时运用、环保主题词汇
【点评】
本文紧扣“绿色校园”主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯。运用了丰富的环保类词汇和动词不定式作目的状语的高分句型，内容具体可行，符合倡议书的文体要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6