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主题写作专项 练写作 答案D27 拍照批改
主题词网
未来生活
角度 · traffic · transport system · education · industry · medical service · outer space
变化 · take over · replace · disappear · shall · pass · run low on sth.
看法 · different from · influence · develop · depend on · make sure · meet one’s needs
感受 · quite worse · positive · challenging · creative · impossible · valuable
写作实例
审主题
近期,某英文报开辟了“畅想未来”的专栏。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图提示,以“Life in the Future”为题,写一篇说明文向该专栏投稿,从不同角度畅谈你对未来生活的展望。
审时态:以一般将来时为主 审人称:第一、三人称
要求:1.内容包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;3.词数不少于80。
审词数
Life in the Future
写作支架
开头 — 第一段:开门见山,引出话题
中间 — 第二段:从不同的方面介绍自己对未来的一些预测
结尾 — 第三段:归纳总结,表达看法
I think life in the future will it is today. (高分句式1) Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be , but will be so that there will be . (高分句式2)
Besides, it’s possible for people to on the sea or in outer space. (高分句式3)
As for education, robots will and students just need to . And more kids will , because .
What’s more, there are and we’ll have better .
We never know what will happen in the future. (高分句式4) But it depends on to .
优秀范文
Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all¹, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that² there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides¹, it’s possible for people to build² houses on the sea or in outer space. As for¹ education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more¹, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make³ it better.
亮点评析
①用First of all、Besides、As for和What’s more使文章的逻辑清晰,有条理;
②用so that引导的状语从句及it’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.结构预测了将来可能发生的事情;
③用it depends on...to do sth.号召人们为了将来的美好生活而努力。
主题词网
未来生活
角度 · traffic · transport system · education · industry · medical service · outer space
变化 · take over · replace · disappear · shall · pass · run low on sth.
看法 · different from · influence · develop · depend on · make sure · meet one’s needs
感受 · quite worse · positive · challenging · creative · impossible · valuable
写作实例
审主题
近期,某英文报开辟了“畅想未来”的专栏。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图提示,以“Life in the Future”为题,写一篇说明文向该专栏投稿,从不同角度畅谈你对未来生活的展望。
审时态:以一般将来时为主 审人称:第一、三人称
要求:1.内容包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;3.词数不少于80。
审词数
Life in the Future
写作支架
开头 — 第一段:开门见山,引出话题
中间 — 第二段:从不同的方面介绍自己对未来的一些预测
结尾 — 第三段:归纳总结,表达看法
I think life in the future will it is today. (高分句式1) Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be , but will be so that there will be . (高分句式2)
Besides, it’s possible for people to on the sea or in outer space. (高分句式3)
As for education, robots will and students just need to . And more kids will , because .
What’s more, there are and we’ll have better .
We never know what will happen in the future. (高分句式4) But it depends on to .
优秀范文
Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all¹, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that² there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides¹, it’s possible for people to build² houses on the sea or in outer space. As for¹ education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more¹, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make³ it better.
亮点评析
①用First of all、Besides、As for和What’s more使文章的逻辑清晰,有条理;
②用so that引导的状语从句及it’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.结构预测了将来可能发生的事情;
③用it depends on...to do sth.号召人们为了将来的美好生活而努力。
答案
写作支架填空答案
1. be quite different from
2. more people in the cities
3. the transport system
4. more efficient
5. fewer traffic accidents
6. build houses
7. replace teachers
8. study on computers
9. do sport at home with AI
10. there's a smart AI system in every house
11. service robots to do housework for people
12. health care technology
13. us
14. make it better
完整优秀范文
# Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides, it’s possible for people to build houses on the sea or in outer space. As for education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make it better.
1. be quite different from
2. more people in the cities
3. the transport system
4. more efficient
5. fewer traffic accidents
6. build houses
7. replace teachers
8. study on computers
9. do sport at home with AI
10. there's a smart AI system in every house
11. service robots to do housework for people
12. health care technology
13. us
14. make it better
完整优秀范文
# Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides, it’s possible for people to build houses on the sea or in outer space. As for education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make it better.
解析
本题为人教版八年级上册的主题写作题，要求以"Life in the Future"为题写一篇畅想未来生活的说明文，解题步骤如下：1. 审题：明确写作核心是从多个维度展望未来生活，时态以一般将来时为主，使用第一、第三人称，需要覆盖交通、住房、教育、日常活动、健康医疗全部提示信息，词数不少于80；2. 谋篇布局：第一段开门见山引出话题，点明未来生活和当下差异很大；第二段用First of all、Besides、As for、What's more这类逻辑连接词依次展开不同维度的预测，保证文章条理清晰；第三段总结收尾，号召大家为创造美好未来努力；3. 遣词造句：合理使用给定的主题词汇和高分句式，保证语法准确、语句连贯。
