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七、书面表达。（共15分）
某中学生英文报 Your Voice 栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写一篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。
注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数 100 左右，文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
某中学生英文报 Your Voice 栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写一篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。
注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数 100 左右，文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
答案
One possible version:
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
Everyone needs friends, but I think making friends by following suit is not wise.
To make true friends, think as you are in his or her position and make him or her feel comfortable. Don't judge a person only by his or her appearance. If you don't agree with others, don't argue but discuss with them. Don't believe in those who leave their friends when their friends are in trouble.
I have a good friend named Li Hua. Last month, I fell off my bike and hurt my leg. I had to stay in hospital for one week. Li Hua went to see me and helped me with my lessons. With his help, I didn't fall behind too much. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Love your friends!
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
Everyone needs friends, but I think making friends by following suit is not wise.
To make true friends, think as you are in his or her position and make him or her feel comfortable. Don't judge a person only by his or her appearance. If you don't agree with others, don't argue but discuss with them. Don't believe in those who leave their friends when their friends are in trouble.
I have a good friend named Li Hua. Last month, I fell off my bike and hurt my leg. I had to stay in hospital for one week. Li Hua went to see me and helped me with my lessons. With his help, I didn't fall behind too much. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Love your friends!
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确题目要求：围绕“青少年交真朋友”主题，回答两个问题（随大流交友是否明智、如何交真朋友），需结合个人经历举例，词数100左右，开头已给出。接着确定核心观点：随大流交友不明智，再构思交真朋友的方法，准备具体的个人经历（如朋友在自己困难时的帮助），最后组织语言，确保结构清晰、衔接自然。
【解析】1. 承接开头，明确观点：指出随大流交友是不明智的，因为这样做可能违背自身意愿，无法交到真正的朋友；2. 阐述交真朋友的方法：要换位思考、不以外貌评判他人、有分歧时沟通而非争吵、在朋友困难时不离不弃；3. 结合个人经历举例：讲述自己受伤住院时，朋友帮忙补习功课的经历，体现“患难见真情”；4. 总结升华，点明真正朋友的意义。
【答案】I want to share my ideas about the topic.
Everyone needs friends, but I think making friends by following suit is not wise.
To make true friends, think as you are in his or her position and make him or her feel comfortable. Don't judge a person only by his or her appearance. If you don't agree with others, don't argue but discuss with them. Don't believe in those who leave their friends when their friends are in trouble.
I have a good friend named Li Hua. Last month, I fell off my bike and hurt my leg. I had to stay in hospital for one week. Li Hua went to see me and helped me with my lessons. With his help, I didn't fall behind too much. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Love your friends!
【知识点】英语书面表达、交友话题写作、观点阐述与举例
【点评】本题为英语话题书面表达题，围绕青少年交友主题，要求学生明确观点、阐述方法并结合个人经历，既考查英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确交友观，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 承接开头，明确观点：指出随大流交友是不明智的，因为这样做可能违背自身意愿，无法交到真正的朋友；2. 阐述交真朋友的方法：要换位思考、不以外貌评判他人、有分歧时沟通而非争吵、在朋友困难时不离不弃；3. 结合个人经历举例：讲述自己受伤住院时，朋友帮忙补习功课的经历，体现“患难见真情”；4. 总结升华，点明真正朋友的意义。
【答案】I want to share my ideas about the topic.
Everyone needs friends, but I think making friends by following suit is not wise.
To make true friends, think as you are in his or her position and make him or her feel comfortable. Don't judge a person only by his or her appearance. If you don't agree with others, don't argue but discuss with them. Don't believe in those who leave their friends when their friends are in trouble.
I have a good friend named Li Hua. Last month, I fell off my bike and hurt my leg. I had to stay in hospital for one week. Li Hua went to see me and helped me with my lessons. With his help, I didn't fall behind too much. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Love your friends!
【知识点】英语书面表达、交友话题写作、观点阐述与举例
【点评】本题为英语话题书面表达题，围绕青少年交友主题，要求学生明确观点、阐述方法并结合个人经历，既考查英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确交友观，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.6
