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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D30
假如你是李辉，你收到英语老师在班级e-mail里发送的信息，内容如下：
请你以A report on “Tom Sawyer paints the fence”为题完成作业并提交，内容包括：
1.故事的作者、主要人物；
2.主要情节；
3.你关于这个故事的个人观点。
注意:1.词数100左右。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现个人的真实校名和姓名。
A report on “Tom Sawyer paints the fence”
Hello, I’m Li Hui. This is a report on “Tom Sawyer paints the fence”.
假如你是李辉，你收到英语老师在班级e-mail里发送的信息，内容如下：
请你以A report on “Tom Sawyer paints the fence”为题完成作业并提交，内容包括：
1.故事的作者、主要人物；
2.主要情节；
3.你关于这个故事的个人观点。
注意:1.词数100左右。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现个人的真实校名和姓名。
A report on “Tom Sawyer paints the fence”
Hello, I’m Li Hui. This is a report on “Tom Sawyer paints the fence”.
The story was written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. The main characters are Tom Sawyer and his friends.
One day, Tom was asked to paint the fence by his aunt. Instead of doing it himself, he tricked his friends into doing it for him by making it seem like a fun activity. His friends even gave him small gifts to get a turn.
I think Tom is very clever and creative. He found a smart way to solve his problem. But it's also a bit naughty to trick his friends.
Overall, it's an interesting story.
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
A report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence"
Hello, I'm Li Hui. This is a report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence". The story was written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. The main characters are Tom Sawyer and his friends.
One day, Tom was asked to paint the fence by his aunt. Instead of doing it himself, he tricked his friends into doing it for him by making it seem like a fun activity. His friends even gave him small gifts to get a turn.
I think Tom is very clever and creative. He found a smart way to solve his problem. But it's also a bit naughty to trick his friends. Overall, it's an interesting story.
＞ 进阶版范文
A report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence"
Hello, I'm Li Hui. This is a report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence". The story, which was written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer, is widely known for its humor and wisdom. The main characters are Tom Sawyer and his friends.
One day, Tom was asked to paint the fence by his aunt, which he considered a boring task. Instead of finishing it by himself, he cleverly turned the situation around. He made his friends believe that painting the fence was an enjoyable activity. As a result, they were eager to do it for him, and even offered him small gifts in order to have a chance to paint.
After reading the story, I realize that Tom is not only intelligent but also highly imaginative. However, although his method is effective, it is somewhat dishonest to trick his friends. From my point of view, the story shows that creativity can help solve problems, but we should also be honest in daily life.
＞ 基础版范文
A report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence"
Hello, I'm Li Hui. This is a report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence". The story was written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. The main characters are Tom Sawyer and his friends.
One day, Tom was asked to paint the fence by his aunt. Instead of doing it himself, he tricked his friends into doing it for him by making it seem like a fun activity. His friends even gave him small gifts to get a turn.
I think Tom is very clever and creative. He found a smart way to solve his problem. But it's also a bit naughty to trick his friends. Overall, it's an interesting story.
＞ 进阶版范文
A report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence"
Hello, I'm Li Hui. This is a report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence". The story, which was written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer, is widely known for its humor and wisdom. The main characters are Tom Sawyer and his friends.
One day, Tom was asked to paint the fence by his aunt, which he considered a boring task. Instead of finishing it by himself, he cleverly turned the situation around. He made his friends believe that painting the fence was an enjoyable activity. As a result, they were eager to do it for him, and even offered him small gifts in order to have a chance to paint.
After reading the story, I realize that Tom is not only intelligent but also highly imaginative. However, although his method is effective, it is somewhat dishonest to trick his friends. From my point of view, the story shows that creativity can help solve problems, but we should also be honest in daily life.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语主题写作题，需以李辉的身份完成指定报告。解题思路：1. 审题：明确要求包含三个核心内容——故事的作者与主要人物、主要情节、个人观点，词数100左右，开头已给出；2. 构思结构：先介绍故事基本信息，再按逻辑叙述情节，最后表达个人看法；3. 语言组织：用通顺的英语，适当用连接词使行文连贯，避免语法错误。
【解析】
首先承接开头，介绍故事作者是美国著名作家马克·吐温，主要人物是汤姆·索亚和他的朋友们；接着叙述情节：汤姆被姨妈要求刷栅栏，他没有自己做，反而骗朋友们觉得刷栅栏是有趣的事，朋友们为了刷栅栏给他小礼物；最后表达观点：汤姆聪明有创意但有点调皮，整体故事很有趣，符合词数要求，语句连贯。
【答案】
A report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence"
Hello, I'm Li Hui. This is a report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence". The story was written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. The main characters are Tom Sawyer and his friends.
One day, Tom was asked to paint the fence by his aunt. Instead of doing it himself, he tricked his friends into doing it for him by making it seem like a fun activity. His friends even gave him small gifts to get a turn.
I think Tom is very clever and creative. He found a smart way to solve his problem. But it's also a bit naughty to trick his friends. Overall, it's an interesting story.
【知识点】
英语写作、记叙文写作、观点表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对经典故事的理解和英语书面表达能力，要求整合信息并表达个人看法，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重基础写作能力的考查。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语主题写作题，需以李辉的身份完成指定报告。解题思路：1. 审题：明确要求包含三个核心内容——故事的作者与主要人物、主要情节、个人观点，词数100左右，开头已给出；2. 构思结构：先介绍故事基本信息，再按逻辑叙述情节，最后表达个人看法；3. 语言组织：用通顺的英语，适当用连接词使行文连贯，避免语法错误。
【解析】
首先承接开头，介绍故事作者是美国著名作家马克·吐温，主要人物是汤姆·索亚和他的朋友们；接着叙述情节：汤姆被姨妈要求刷栅栏，他没有自己做，反而骗朋友们觉得刷栅栏是有趣的事，朋友们为了刷栅栏给他小礼物；最后表达观点：汤姆聪明有创意但有点调皮，整体故事很有趣，符合词数要求，语句连贯。
【答案】
A report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence"
Hello, I'm Li Hui. This is a report on "Tom Sawyer paints the fence". The story was written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. The main characters are Tom Sawyer and his friends.
One day, Tom was asked to paint the fence by his aunt. Instead of doing it himself, he tricked his friends into doing it for him by making it seem like a fun activity. His friends even gave him small gifts to get a turn.
I think Tom is very clever and creative. He found a smart way to solve his problem. But it's also a bit naughty to trick his friends. Overall, it's an interesting story.
【知识点】
英语写作、记叙文写作、观点表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对经典故事的理解和英语书面表达能力，要求整合信息并表达个人看法，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重基础写作能力的考查。
【难度系数】
0.6
