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生活中，总有这样一位榜样：在你迷茫时指引方向，在你消沉时给予鼓励……那么，谁是你心中的榜样？假如你是李华，请结合下面的提示，写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，分享榜样带给你的力量。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1. Introduce the role model and his/her achievements.
2. Share his/her influence on you.
Dear teachers and classmates，
I’m Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—
That’s all. Thank you.
生活中，总有这样一位榜样：在你迷茫时指引方向，在你消沉时给予鼓励……那么，谁是你心中的榜样？假如你是李华，请结合下面的提示，写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，分享榜样带给你的力量。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1. Introduce the role model and his/her achievements.
2. Share his/her influence on you.
Dear teachers and classmates，
I’m Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—
Helen Keller
.That’s all. Thank you.
答案
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，分享心中的榜样。解题思路：1. 选取有典型励志事迹的人物作为榜样（如海伦·凯勒）；2. 按提示完成内容：先介绍榜样的身份与成就（幼年患病失聪失明，凭借坚强意志学习，成为著名作家，著有《假如给我三天光明》）；3. 阐述榜样对自己的影响（教会积极面对困难、不放弃）；4. 注意符合演讲稿的语气，字数控制要求，开头结尾已给出，无需调整。
【解析】
首先确定榜样为海伦·凯勒，接着介绍其经历与成就：幼年因高烧失去听觉和视觉，却从未放弃，坚持学习读写说，最终成为著名作家，其作品《假如给我三天光明》鼓舞全球读者；然后说明她对“我”的影响：教会“我”积极面对生活、永不放弃希望，遇到困难时会以她为榜样坚持前行；最后点明她是真正的榜样，符合演讲稿结构，字数达标。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类书面表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查人物介绍与情感表达能力，引导学生树立正确榜样观，写作要求明确，易于学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，分享心中的榜样。解题思路：1. 选取有典型励志事迹的人物作为榜样（如海伦·凯勒）；2. 按提示完成内容：先介绍榜样的身份与成就（幼年患病失聪失明，凭借坚强意志学习，成为著名作家，著有《假如给我三天光明》）；3. 阐述榜样对自己的影响（教会积极面对困难、不放弃）；4. 注意符合演讲稿的语气，字数控制要求，开头结尾已给出，无需调整。
【解析】
首先确定榜样为海伦·凯勒，接着介绍其经历与成就：幼年因高烧失去听觉和视觉，却从未放弃，坚持学习读写说，最终成为著名作家，其作品《假如给我三天光明》鼓舞全球读者；然后说明她对“我”的影响：教会“我”积极面对生活、永不放弃希望，遇到困难时会以她为榜样坚持前行；最后点明她是真正的榜样，符合演讲稿结构，字数达标。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类书面表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查人物介绍与情感表达能力，引导学生树立正确榜样观，写作要求明确，易于学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.5
