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七 书面表达。(5 分)
购物是我们日常生活中一项重要的活动，人们几乎每天都要买东西，但怎么合理购物，理性消费，做一个聪明的购物者呢？假如你们的校刊英语专栏正在以“How to be a smart shopper”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你是如何明智且高效地购物的。
要点:1. 制作购物清单;2. 寻找最优惠的价格(best price);3. 分享物品以避免重复购买。
要求:1. 文中需要包含提示的全部要点，可适当发挥;2. 书写规范，不少于 50 词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to be a smart shopper
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how can we be smart shoppers? Here are my ways.
购物是我们日常生活中一项重要的活动，人们几乎每天都要买东西，但怎么合理购物，理性消费，做一个聪明的购物者呢？假如你们的校刊英语专栏正在以“How to be a smart shopper”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你是如何明智且高效地购物的。
要点:1. 制作购物清单;2. 寻找最优惠的价格(best price);3. 分享物品以避免重复购买。
要求:1. 文中需要包含提示的全部要点，可适当发挥;2. 书写规范，不少于 50 词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to be a smart shopper
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how can we be smart shoppers? Here are my ways.
答案
示例：
How to be a smart shopper
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how can we be smart shoppers? Here are my ways.
First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money. I always make a plan too. I know how much money I can use. Second, I am careful. I go to different shops to look for the best price. And I think twice before I pay. Last but not least, I usually share things with my brothers or sisters, so we don't buy the same things.
Let's be smart shoppers and do shopping smart!
How to be a smart shopper
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how can we be smart shoppers? Here are my ways.
First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money. I always make a plan too. I know how much money I can use. Second, I am careful. I go to different shops to look for the best price. And I think twice before I pay. Last but not least, I usually share things with my brothers or sisters, so we don't buy the same things.
Let's be smart shoppers and do shopping smart!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“How to be a smart shopper”，需结合给定开头续写，必须包含三个核心要点：制作购物清单、寻找最优价格、分享物品避免重复购买。解题思路：1. 承接开头的“Here are my ways”，用清晰的逻辑连接词分点阐述三个要点；2. 每个要点补充简单实际细节，使内容充实；3. 结尾添加简短倡议呼应主题，确保字数达标，语言符合初中英语水平。
【解析】
续写内容需按要求覆盖所有要点：① 第一点：说明制作购物清单的做法及好处，如“First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money.”；② 第二点：说明寻找最优价格的做法，如“Second, I go to different shops to look for the best price and think twice before paying.”；③ 第三点：说明分享物品避免重复购买的做法，如“Last, I usually share things with my brothers or sisters, so we don't buy the same things.”；最后添加简短倡议“Let's be smart shoppers and do shopping smart!”，确保结构清晰、语言通顺。
【答案】
How to be a smart shopper
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how can we be smart shoppers? Here are my ways.
First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money. I always make a plan too. I know how much money I can use. Second, I am careful. I go to different shops to look for the best price. And I think twice before I pay. Last but not least, I usually share things with my brothers or sisters, so we don't buy the same things.
Let's be smart shoppers and do shopping smart!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、日常话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，采用分点结构逻辑清晰，补充了符合实际的细节，语言简洁规范，符合初中英语写作要求，结尾呼应主题，是一篇合格的征文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“How to be a smart shopper”，需结合给定开头续写，必须包含三个核心要点：制作购物清单、寻找最优价格、分享物品避免重复购买。解题思路：1. 承接开头的“Here are my ways”，用清晰的逻辑连接词分点阐述三个要点；2. 每个要点补充简单实际细节，使内容充实；3. 结尾添加简短倡议呼应主题，确保字数达标，语言符合初中英语水平。
【解析】
续写内容需按要求覆盖所有要点：① 第一点：说明制作购物清单的做法及好处，如“First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money.”；② 第二点：说明寻找最优价格的做法，如“Second, I go to different shops to look for the best price and think twice before paying.”；③ 第三点：说明分享物品避免重复购买的做法，如“Last, I usually share things with my brothers or sisters, so we don't buy the same things.”；最后添加简短倡议“Let's be smart shoppers and do shopping smart!”，确保结构清晰、语言通顺。
【答案】
How to be a smart shopper
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how can we be smart shoppers? Here are my ways.
First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money. I always make a plan too. I know how much money I can use. Second, I am careful. I go to different shops to look for the best price. And I think twice before I pay. Last but not least, I usually share things with my brothers or sisters, so we don't buy the same things.
Let's be smart shoppers and do shopping smart!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、日常话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，采用分点结构逻辑清晰，补充了符合实际的细节，语言简洁规范，符合初中英语写作要求，结尾呼应主题，是一篇合格的征文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
