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九、一天的学习即将结束,Lily看到医生接诊了一位病人Peter,他因为淋雨着凉发烧了,还伴有头疼及咳嗽的症状。Lily也尝试在自己的学习笔记中写下其病症及建议。(10分)
要求:语句通顺、书写规范,不少于5句话。
提示词:ill, have a fever/headache/cough/cold, have a rest, drink water, take medicine ...
Summer is coming and the weather is getting hotter and hotter. Peter is caught in the rain and
要求:语句通顺、书写规范,不少于5句话。
提示词:ill, have a fever/headache/cough/cold, have a rest, drink water, take medicine ...
Summer is coming and the weather is getting hotter and hotter. Peter is caught in the rain and
is ill. He has a fever. And he also has
a cold. He should wear more clothes. He
should take some medicine. He should drink
more water. He should have a rest.
答案
参考范文:
Summer is coming and the weather is
getting hotter and hotter. Peter is caught in the
rain and is ill. He has a fever. And he also has
a cold. He should wear more clothes. He
should take some medicine. He should drink
more water. He should have a rest.
Summer is coming and the weather is
getting hotter and hotter. Peter is caught in the
rain and is ill. He has a fever. And he also has
a cold. He should wear more clothes. He
should take some medicine. He should drink
more water. He should have a rest.
解析
【分析】
这是一道提示型情景英语写作题，解题思路非常清晰：首先顺着题干已经给出的开头语句，第一步先点明Peter淋雨之后的结果，用上提示词ill说明他生病了；第二步结合插图信息和给出的症状类提示词，依次描述他发烧、感冒的相关病症；第三步再结合建议类提示词，依次给出符合常识的养病建议，全程保证语句通顺，总句数不少于5句，正确使用提示词即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题干给出的开头，顺理成章说明淋雨的后果：Peter is caught in the rain and is ill. 用上提示词ill，逻辑连贯。
2. 描述核心症状：He has a fever. 对应插图里38℃的发烧信息，用上提示词have a fever。
3. 补充对应病症：And he also has a cold. 用上提示词have a cold，符合淋雨着凉的设定。
4. 给出第一条康复护理建议：He should wear more clothes. 符合着凉感冒的基础护理逻辑。
5. 给出第二条就医相关建议：He should take some medicine. 用上提示词take medicine，符合医生接诊的场景设定。
6. 给出第三条常规护理建议：He should drink more water. 用上提示词drink water，是感冒护理的通用要求。
7. 给出第四条休养建议：He should have a rest. 用上提示词have a rest，符合生病休养的常识。
所有提示词都合理覆盖，总句数远超5句的要求，语句通顺没有语法错误，完全符合题目的各项要求。
【答案】
参考范文:
Summer is coming and the weather is getting hotter and hotter. Peter is caught in the rain and is ill. He has a fever. And he also has a cold. He should wear more clothes. He should take some medicine. He should drink more water. He should have a rest.
【知识点】
情景英语写作，健康类词汇，建议类句型
【点评】
本题是小学阶段非常典型的基础提示类写作题，给出了明确的情景、提示词和开头框架，不需要学生自主搭建复杂的叙事逻辑，只需要按照“点明生病-描述病症-给出建议”的顺承逻辑填充内容，正确使用提示词、保证句数达标、语句通顺即可得分，能很好地考察学生对健康相关英语表达的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一道提示型情景英语写作题，解题思路非常清晰：首先顺着题干已经给出的开头语句，第一步先点明Peter淋雨之后的结果，用上提示词ill说明他生病了；第二步结合插图信息和给出的症状类提示词，依次描述他发烧、感冒的相关病症；第三步再结合建议类提示词，依次给出符合常识的养病建议，全程保证语句通顺，总句数不少于5句，正确使用提示词即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题干给出的开头，顺理成章说明淋雨的后果：Peter is caught in the rain and is ill. 用上提示词ill，逻辑连贯。
2. 描述核心症状：He has a fever. 对应插图里38℃的发烧信息，用上提示词have a fever。
3. 补充对应病症：And he also has a cold. 用上提示词have a cold，符合淋雨着凉的设定。
4. 给出第一条康复护理建议：He should wear more clothes. 符合着凉感冒的基础护理逻辑。
5. 给出第二条就医相关建议：He should take some medicine. 用上提示词take medicine，符合医生接诊的场景设定。
6. 给出第三条常规护理建议：He should drink more water. 用上提示词drink water，是感冒护理的通用要求。
7. 给出第四条休养建议：He should have a rest. 用上提示词have a rest，符合生病休养的常识。
所有提示词都合理覆盖，总句数远超5句的要求，语句通顺没有语法错误，完全符合题目的各项要求。
【答案】
参考范文:
Summer is coming and the weather is getting hotter and hotter. Peter is caught in the rain and is ill. He has a fever. And he also has a cold. He should wear more clothes. He should take some medicine. He should drink more water. He should have a rest.
【知识点】
情景英语写作，健康类词汇，建议类句型
【点评】
本题是小学阶段非常典型的基础提示类写作题，给出了明确的情景、提示词和开头框架，不需要学生自主搭建复杂的叙事逻辑，只需要按照“点明生病-描述病症-给出建议”的顺承逻辑填充内容，正确使用提示词、保证句数达标、语句通顺即可得分，能很好地考察学生对健康相关英语表达的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.8
