十、小华想向Leo介绍他最喜欢的中国节日,请你帮小华写一封完整的电子邮件。(5分)
要求:语句通顺、书写规范,不少于5句话。可以参考以下思维导图。

开头:My favourite Chinese festival is the ...
介绍时间:It is in/on ...
活动与习俗:On that day, my family and I usually ...
特色美食:The special food for this festival is ...; We eat ...
结尾:I love this festival because it is ...; I hope you can come and celebrate it with me one day!
To: leo@email.com
Subject: My Favourite Chinese Festival
Dear Leo,
Today, I want to tell you about my favourite Chinese festival.
要求:语句通顺、书写规范,不少于5句话。可以参考以下思维导图。
开头:My favourite Chinese festival is the ...
介绍时间:It is in/on ...
活动与习俗:On that day, my family and I usually ...
特色美食:The special food for this festival is ...; We eat ...
结尾:I love this festival because it is ...; I hope you can come and celebrate it with me one day!
To: leo@email.com
Subject: My Favourite Chinese Festival
Dear Leo,
Today, I want to tell you about my favourite Chinese festival.
My favourite Chinese festival
is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September
or October.
On that day, my family get together at my
grandparents' home. We have a big dinner.
After dinner, we sit in the yard and look at the
bright full moon. We also eat delicious moon
cakes.
I love this festival because it is warm and
happy. I hope you can come and celebrate it
with me one day!
Best wishes,
Xiaohua
is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September
or October.
On that day, my family get together at my
grandparents' home. We have a big dinner.
After dinner, we sit in the yard and look at the
bright full moon. We also eat delicious moon
cakes.
I love this festival because it is warm and
happy. I hope you can come and celebrate it
with me one day!
Best wishes,
Xiaohua
答案
参考范文:
To: leo@email.com
Subject: My Favourite Chinese Festival
Dear Leo,
Today, I want to tell you about my favourite
Chinese festival. My favourite Chinese festival
is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September
or October.
On that day, my family get together at my
grandparents' home. We have a big dinner.
After dinner, we sit in the yard and look at the
bright full moon. We also eat delicious moon
cakes.
I love this festival because it is warm and
happy. I hope you can come and celebrate it
with me one day!
Best wishes,
Xiaohua
To: leo@email.com
Subject: My Favourite Chinese Festival
Dear Leo,
Today, I want to tell you about my favourite
Chinese festival. My favourite Chinese festival
is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September
or October.
On that day, my family get together at my
grandparents' home. We have a big dinner.
After dinner, we sit in the yard and look at the
bright full moon. We also eat delicious moon
cakes.
I love this festival because it is warm and
happy. I hope you can come and celebrate it
with me one day!
Best wishes,
Xiaohua
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提示引导类的英语邮件写作题,解题时可以完全顺着题目给出的思维导图逻辑梳理写作顺序:第一步先顺着已有的开篇内容,点明要介绍的具体中国节日,优先选择自己熟悉、对应习俗和美食都很明确的节日,比如中秋节;第二步补充说明该节日的具体时间;第三步展开核心内容,先写节日当天家人的团聚活动,再介绍对应的传统习俗,之后说明节日对应的特色美食;最后收尾写出自己对这个节日的感受,再按要求发出邀请,补上邮件落款即可,全程注意语句通顺,满足不少于5句话的要求,符合英语邮件书写规范。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分补全:顺着已给出的开篇句,直接点明最喜欢的节日是中秋节,补充说明它的时间在九月或者十月,完成点明节日+介绍时间的开篇要求。
2. 核心部分展开:先写节日当天的家人活动,说明全家会聚在祖父母家享用丰盛的晚餐;接着介绍对应的传统习俗,饭后一家人坐在院子里观赏明亮的满月;之后介绍节日特色美食,说明节日的特色食物是美味的月饼,完整覆盖思维导图的三个核心分支内容。
3. 收尾部分完成:写出自己喜爱这个节日的原因是它温馨又充满幸福感,再按照提示发出邀请,最后补上邮件常用的祝福语和署名,完成整篇邮件的书写。
【答案】
To: leo@email.com
Subject: My Favourite Chinese Festival
Dear Leo,
Today, I want to tell you about my favourite Chinese festival. My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September or October.
On that day, my family get together at my grandparents' home. We have a big dinner. After dinner, we sit in the yard and look at the bright full moon. We also eat delicious moon cakes.
I love this festival because it is warm and happy. I hope you can come and celebrate it with me one day!
Best wishes,
Xiaohua
【知识点】
电子邮件写作,传统节日表达,一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于提纲引导类的应用文体写作,题目给出了清晰的写作逻辑思维导图和各部分的参考句式,大幅降低了写作门槛,学生只需要按照给定的叙事逻辑填充对应符合节日特征的内容,保证语句通顺、句数达标即可,同时也能引导学生用英语输出中国传统文化相关内容,提升文化表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇提示引导类的英语邮件写作题,解题时可以完全顺着题目给出的思维导图逻辑梳理写作顺序:第一步先顺着已有的开篇内容,点明要介绍的具体中国节日,优先选择自己熟悉、对应习俗和美食都很明确的节日,比如中秋节;第二步补充说明该节日的具体时间;第三步展开核心内容,先写节日当天家人的团聚活动,再介绍对应的传统习俗,之后说明节日对应的特色美食;最后收尾写出自己对这个节日的感受,再按要求发出邀请,补上邮件落款即可,全程注意语句通顺,满足不少于5句话的要求,符合英语邮件书写规范。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分补全:顺着已给出的开篇句,直接点明最喜欢的节日是中秋节,补充说明它的时间在九月或者十月,完成点明节日+介绍时间的开篇要求。
2. 核心部分展开:先写节日当天的家人活动,说明全家会聚在祖父母家享用丰盛的晚餐;接着介绍对应的传统习俗,饭后一家人坐在院子里观赏明亮的满月;之后介绍节日特色美食,说明节日的特色食物是美味的月饼,完整覆盖思维导图的三个核心分支内容。
3. 收尾部分完成:写出自己喜爱这个节日的原因是它温馨又充满幸福感,再按照提示发出邀请,最后补上邮件常用的祝福语和署名,完成整篇邮件的书写。
【答案】
To: leo@email.com
Subject: My Favourite Chinese Festival
Dear Leo,
Today, I want to tell you about my favourite Chinese festival. My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September or October.
On that day, my family get together at my grandparents' home. We have a big dinner. After dinner, we sit in the yard and look at the bright full moon. We also eat delicious moon cakes.
I love this festival because it is warm and happy. I hope you can come and celebrate it with me one day!
Best wishes,
Xiaohua
【知识点】
电子邮件写作,传统节日表达,一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于提纲引导类的应用文体写作,题目给出了清晰的写作逻辑思维导图和各部分的参考句式,大幅降低了写作门槛,学生只需要按照给定的叙事逻辑填充对应符合节日特征的内容,保证语句通顺、句数达标即可,同时也能引导学生用英语输出中国传统文化相关内容,提升文化表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
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