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六、书面表达
54. 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex最近越来越胖了,他想了解你的一日三餐和你对健康饮食的看法。请你根据表格提供的信息,给他写一封回信。
注意:(1)文中必须包含所给出的全部内容要点,可适当发挥;写作参考供选择使用;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数70左右;正文首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I'm happy to share how I eat to stay healthy.
I will always be with you on your way to health.
Yours,
Li Hua
54. 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex最近越来越胖了,他想了解你的一日三餐和你对健康饮食的看法。请你根据表格提供的信息,给他写一封回信。
注意:(1)文中必须包含所给出的全部内容要点,可适当发挥;写作参考供选择使用;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数70左右;正文首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I'm happy to share how I eat to stay healthy.
I will always be with you on your way to health.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
54. One possible version:
Dear Alex,
I'm happy to share how I eat to stay healthy.
I have three meals a day. I usually have milk and eggs for breakfast at 8 a.m. I often have noodles and vegetables, sometimes rice for lunch at 12 o'clock. I have soup and a kind of fruit for dinner at 5 p.m. I like milk and cola best. But I seldom drink cola because it is not good for my health. I think it's important for us to have healthy eating habits. To be healthy, we should eat more fruit and vegetables and less junk food.
I will always be with you on your way to health.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Alex,
I'm happy to share how I eat to stay healthy.
I have three meals a day. I usually have milk and eggs for breakfast at 8 a.m. I often have noodles and vegetables, sometimes rice for lunch at 12 o'clock. I have soup and a kind of fruit for dinner at 5 p.m. I like milk and cola best. But I seldom drink cola because it is not good for my health. I think it's important for us to have healthy eating habits. To be healthy, we should eat more fruit and vegetables and less junk food.
I will always be with you on your way to health.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份给英国朋友Alex写回信，介绍自己的一日三餐及健康饮食看法，需包含表格中的时间（早、中、晚餐）、食物、饮品、个人观点四个要点，注意书信格式，词数70左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。解题思路：1. 承接已给首句，引出三餐安排；2. 分别介绍早、中、晚餐的时间、对应食物和饮品；3. 表达对健康饮食的看法，呼应观点要点；4. 衔接已给尾句，完成书信。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出，接下来介绍三餐：早餐在8点，吃鸡蛋、喝牛奶；午餐在12点，吃面条和蔬菜；晚餐在5点，喝汤和水果；2. 提及饮品：喜欢牛奶和可乐，但很少喝可乐，因为它对健康不好；3. 表达观点：健康饮食很重要，应多吃蔬果，少吃垃圾食品；4. 确保涵盖所有要点，用词简单，符合初中英语水平，词数约70，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alex,
I'm happy to share how I eat to stay healthy.
I have three meals a day. I usually have milk and eggs for breakfast at 8 a.m. I often have noodles and vegetables, sometimes rice for lunch at 12 o'clock. I have soup and a kind of fruit for dinner at 5 p.m. I like milk and cola best. But I seldom drink cola because it is not good for my health. I think it's important for us to have healthy eating habits. To be healthy, we should eat more fruit and vegetables and less junk food.
I will always be with you on your way to health.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、健康饮食话题表达、一般现在时
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见书面表达题，贴近学生生活，考查学生运用英语介绍日常饮食、表达观点的能力，要求涵盖所有给定要点，符合书信格式，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份给英国朋友Alex写回信，介绍自己的一日三餐及健康饮食看法，需包含表格中的时间（早、中、晚餐）、食物、饮品、个人观点四个要点，注意书信格式，词数70左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。解题思路：1. 承接已给首句，引出三餐安排；2. 分别介绍早、中、晚餐的时间、对应食物和饮品；3. 表达对健康饮食的看法，呼应观点要点；4. 衔接已给尾句，完成书信。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出，接下来介绍三餐：早餐在8点，吃鸡蛋、喝牛奶；午餐在12点，吃面条和蔬菜；晚餐在5点，喝汤和水果；2. 提及饮品：喜欢牛奶和可乐，但很少喝可乐，因为它对健康不好；3. 表达观点：健康饮食很重要，应多吃蔬果，少吃垃圾食品；4. 确保涵盖所有要点，用词简单，符合初中英语水平，词数约70，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alex,
I'm happy to share how I eat to stay healthy.
I have three meals a day. I usually have milk and eggs for breakfast at 8 a.m. I often have noodles and vegetables, sometimes rice for lunch at 12 o'clock. I have soup and a kind of fruit for dinner at 5 p.m. I like milk and cola best. But I seldom drink cola because it is not good for my health. I think it's important for us to have healthy eating habits. To be healthy, we should eat more fruit and vegetables and less junk food.
I will always be with you on your way to health.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、健康饮食话题表达、一般现在时
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见书面表达题，贴近学生生活，考查学生运用英语介绍日常饮食、表达观点的能力，要求涵盖所有给定要点，符合书信格式，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
