七、实验班原创书面表达满分19分
进入初中两年来,你收获并成长了很多,在即将举行的"青春仪式"上,你将以"Be a Student with Good Manners"为题进行演讲,请根据提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
内容要点如下:
1. 礼仪:公共场所,举止得体,不乱丢垃圾……自拟一点;
2. 就餐:文明用餐,嘴里含着食物不要说话……自拟一点;3. 怎样做一个讲究礼仪的学生。
注意:词数80~100,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Be a Student with Good Manners
It's very important to be a person with good manners in our
daily lives.

七、One possible version:
Be a Student with Good Manners
It's very important to be a person with good manners in
our daily lives. I would like to talk about how to be a student
with good manners.
First of all, it's necessary to have good manners in
public. For example, we shouldn't shout loudly in public. It's
wrong of us to drop litter everywhere. When we have meals,
remember not to talk with food in your mouth. We shouldn't
reach over someone's plate for something. Moreover, we
should eat up all the food. It's a shame to waste food.
In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we
should be polite to others. Each of us should be a student with
good manners.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿。②时态:一般现在
时。③提示:文章的写作要点已给出,按照提示要点逐点阐
述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍演讲主题;第二步,分别从公共场所的礼仪以及
文明就餐方面详细阐述如何成为一个讲礼仪的学生;第
三步,表述你自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①in public当众 ②eat up吃光 ③be polite to对……有
礼貌
[高分句型]
①It's wrong of us to drop litter everywhere. It's+形容词+of
sb to do sth句型
②When we have meals, remember not to talk with food in
your mouth. when引导时间状语从句

【分析】本题为初中英语书面表达（演讲稿），主题是“Be a Student with Good Manners”。解题思路：先承接已给开头点明演讲主题，再按要求分三个要点展开：公共场所的得体举止（如不大声喧哗、不乱丢垃圾）、文明就餐的礼仪（如嘴里含食物不说话、不浪费食物），最后补充如何做的个人观点，确保时态为一般现在时，词数控制在80-100，语言通顺连贯。
【解析】1. 承接已给开头，引出演讲主题：“I would like to talk about how to be a student with good manners.”；2. 用“First of all”引出公共场所礼仪：说明在公共场合不大声喧哗、不乱丢垃圾；3. 用“When we have meals”引出就餐礼仪：强调嘴里有食物时不说话、不浪费食物；4. 用“In my opinion”补充个人做法：提出要对他人礼貌、保持安静；5. 最后总结呼吁大家成为有礼貌的学生，完成全文。
【答案】Be a Student with Good Manners
It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily lives. I would like to talk about how to be a student with good manners.
First of all, it's necessary to have good manners in public. For example, we shouldn't shout loudly in public. It's wrong of us to drop litter everywhere. When we have meals, remember not to talk with food in your mouth. We shouldn't reach over someone's plate for something. Moreover, we should eat up all the food. It's a shame to waste food.
In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Each of us should be a student with good manners.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书面表达要点整合、英语礼仪类表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，要点齐全，运用恰当的连接词使文章连贯，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6