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话题概述
本单元的主题是“社区”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍社区。与此相关的写作维度有：①社区环境；②邻里关系和互助活动。
考查学生介绍社区的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息和思维导图等，写一篇文章向网站或报纸投稿、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：社区环境、基础设施、社区活动、互助行为、改进建议、居住感受等。
写作实例
你们学校的英文网站正在开展以“美丽社区”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇 90 词左右的英语短文投稿，介绍你的社区。提示：
1. 介绍你的社区的位置、环境和设施；
2. 谈谈你的邻居，以及他们如何互相帮助；
3. 描述你的居住感受。
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文
2. 时态：以一般现在时为主
3. 人称：以第一、第三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①in the east of 在……的东边 ②many trees and flowers 许多树木和花卉 ③make the air fresh 使空气清新 ④kind and helpful 友善且乐于助人 ⑤all kinds of problems 各种各样的问题 ⑥be willing to do sth. 愿意做某事 ⑦make you feel better 让你感觉更好 ⑧be very lucky to do sth. 非常幸运能做某事 ⑨live in such a lovely neighbourhood 住在这样一个令人愉快的社区里
谋篇布局
教材原文
P19 There's a school, a hospital and a big supermarket.P20 Some of them are volunteers...They help us with all kinds of problems.P26 There are good doctors and nurses here. They will make you feel better!P22 We are very lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
优秀范文I live in a beautiful neighbourhood in the east of the city. There are many trees and flowers everywhere. They make the air fresh. In my neighbourhood, there is a school, a hospital and a supermarket.My neighbours are kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They help us with all kinds of problems. The engineers can repair your broken computer and the college students are willing to help students with their homework. There are good doctors and nurses here. If you are ill, they will make you feel better!We are very lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.亮点评析①该段恰当地使用了固定短语 in the east of、高级词汇 everywhere 以及 there be 结构，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。②该段使用并列句和复合句介绍邻居的互助行为，是文章的亮点。③文章结尾使用本单元所学句型表达自己的居住感受，体现了作者学以致用的能力。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①a wonderful place to live 一个宜居的好地方 ②help people with all kinds of problems 帮助人们解决各类问题 ③buy daily things 购买日常用品 ④take part in activities 参与活动 ⑤beautiful and quiet 美丽而宁静 ⑥worry about 担忧 ⑦give a helping hand 伸出援手
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D10
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行主题为“My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李雷，住在花园社区，请根据以下要点提示，介绍你的社区，向该报投稿。要点：
1. What is your neighbourhood like?
2. What are your neighbours like? How do they help others?
3. How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3. 词数 90 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Neighbourhood
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood.
本单元的主题是“社区”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍社区。与此相关的写作维度有：①社区环境；②邻里关系和互助活动。
考查学生介绍社区的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息和思维导图等，写一篇文章向网站或报纸投稿、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：社区环境、基础设施、社区活动、互助行为、改进建议、居住感受等。
写作实例
你们学校的英文网站正在开展以“美丽社区”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇 90 词左右的英语短文投稿，介绍你的社区。提示：
1. 介绍你的社区的位置、环境和设施；
2. 谈谈你的邻居，以及他们如何互相帮助；
3. 描述你的居住感受。
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文
2. 时态：以一般现在时为主
3. 人称：以第一、第三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①in the east of 在……的东边 ②many trees and flowers 许多树木和花卉 ③make the air fresh 使空气清新 ④kind and helpful 友善且乐于助人 ⑤all kinds of problems 各种各样的问题 ⑥be willing to do sth. 愿意做某事 ⑦make you feel better 让你感觉更好 ⑧be very lucky to do sth. 非常幸运能做某事 ⑨live in such a lovely neighbourhood 住在这样一个令人愉快的社区里
谋篇布局
教材原文
P19 There's a school, a hospital and a big supermarket.P20 Some of them are volunteers...They help us with all kinds of problems.P26 There are good doctors and nurses here. They will make you feel better!P22 We are very lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
优秀范文I live in a beautiful neighbourhood in the east of the city. There are many trees and flowers everywhere. They make the air fresh. In my neighbourhood, there is a school, a hospital and a supermarket.My neighbours are kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They help us with all kinds of problems. The engineers can repair your broken computer and the college students are willing to help students with their homework. There are good doctors and nurses here. If you are ill, they will make you feel better!We are very lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.亮点评析①该段恰当地使用了固定短语 in the east of、高级词汇 everywhere 以及 there be 结构，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。②该段使用并列句和复合句介绍邻居的互助行为，是文章的亮点。③文章结尾使用本单元所学句型表达自己的居住感受，体现了作者学以致用的能力。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①a wonderful place to live 一个宜居的好地方 ②help people with all kinds of problems 帮助人们解决各类问题 ③buy daily things 购买日常用品 ④take part in activities 参与活动 ⑤beautiful and quiet 美丽而宁静 ⑥worry about 担忧 ⑦give a helping hand 伸出援手
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D10
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行主题为“My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李雷，住在花园社区，请根据以下要点提示，介绍你的社区，向该报投稿。要点：
1. What is your neighbourhood like?
2. What are your neighbours like? How do they help others?
3. How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3. 词数 90 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Neighbourhood
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood.
答案
【解析】：本题是一篇说明文写作，要求介绍自己的社区，需遵循“社区环境-邻里互助-居住感受”的结构进行创作。写作时以一般现在时为主，人称以第一、第三人称为主，要合理运用题目给出的必备词汇，紧扣要点，保证语句通顺，符合七年级下册英语的词汇与语法要求，字数控制在90词左右。
【答案】：
I live in a beautiful neighbourhood in the east of our city. There are many trees and flowers. They make the air fresh. In my neighbourhood, there is a nice community centre.
My neighbours are kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They help us with all kinds of problems. The engineers can fix broken machines and check computers. There are some doctors and nurses. If you don't feel well, they will make you feel better.
We are very lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
Unit 2 主题写作专项
基础版范文My NeighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful neighbourhood with some tall buildings. There is a school, a park and a big supermarket.My neighbours are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help others. The computer engineers help us to fix our computers and washing machines. Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them. At the weekend, I clean our neighbourhood with my neighbours. People here are like a big family.I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood.
进阶版范文My NeighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. There's a beautiful park in the neighbourhood, and I always take a walk in it. There's a shop in our neighbourhood, so it's very easy for us to buy things. I love my neighbourhood a lot.My neighbours are very friendly and helpful. They help us with all kinds of problems. If there is something wrong with our computers, the computer engineers will repair them. The artists can give us some advice on how to design our homes. Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them. Sometimes I help clean our neighbourhood to keep it looking nice.I'm happy and lucky to live here. I hope it will become better in the future.
【答案】：
I live in a beautiful neighbourhood in the east of our city. There are many trees and flowers. They make the air fresh. In my neighbourhood, there is a nice community centre.
My neighbours are kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They help us with all kinds of problems. The engineers can fix broken machines and check computers. There are some doctors and nurses. If you don't feel well, they will make you feel better.
We are very lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
Unit 2 主题写作专项
基础版范文My NeighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful neighbourhood with some tall buildings. There is a school, a park and a big supermarket.My neighbours are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help others. The computer engineers help us to fix our computers and washing machines. Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them. At the weekend, I clean our neighbourhood with my neighbours. People here are like a big family.I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood.
进阶版范文My NeighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. There's a beautiful park in the neighbourhood, and I always take a walk in it. There's a shop in our neighbourhood, so it's very easy for us to buy things. I love my neighbourhood a lot.My neighbours are very friendly and helpful. They help us with all kinds of problems. If there is something wrong with our computers, the computer engineers will repair them. The artists can give us some advice on how to design our homes. Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them. Sometimes I help clean our neighbourhood to keep it looking nice.I'm happy and lucky to live here. I hope it will become better in the future.
解析
【分析】
首先审题：本题是英语说明文写作，主题为“My Neighbourhood”，要求以李雷的身份介绍花园社区，需覆盖三个要点：社区的环境与设施、邻居的特点及互助行为、居住感受；确定时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一、第三人称；接着按照“社区环境-邻里互助-居住感受”的三段结构组织内容，结合给定的必备词汇，确保语句通顺、要点齐全，词数控制在90左右。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 衔接开头：承接已给的开头“My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood.”，介绍社区整体情况，如“a beautiful neighbourhood with some tall buildings”，再列举设施“a school, a park and a big supermarket”；2. 中间段写邻里互助：用“kind and helpful”描述邻居，说明他们的行为，如“computer engineers fix computers”“volunteers help old people clean flats and do shopping”，体现互助；3. 结尾段表达感受：用“be lucky to live in such a neighbourhood”总结，升华主题，确保内容连贯，符合语法要求。
【答案】
My Neighbourhood
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful neighbourhood with some tall buildings. There is a school, a park and a big supermarket. My neighbours are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help others. The computer engineers help us to fix our computers and washing machines. Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them. At the weekend, I clean our neighbourhood with my neighbours. People here are like a big family. I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作，社区话题词汇，一般现在时
【点评】
本题围绕单元核心主题“社区”考查写作能力，要求学生整合所学词汇与句型，按指定要点谋篇布局，既考查语言基础，又注重实际运用能力，符合七年级英语的教学要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先审题：本题是英语说明文写作，主题为“My Neighbourhood”，要求以李雷的身份介绍花园社区，需覆盖三个要点：社区的环境与设施、邻居的特点及互助行为、居住感受；确定时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一、第三人称；接着按照“社区环境-邻里互助-居住感受”的三段结构组织内容，结合给定的必备词汇，确保语句通顺、要点齐全，词数控制在90左右。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 衔接开头：承接已给的开头“My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood.”，介绍社区整体情况，如“a beautiful neighbourhood with some tall buildings”，再列举设施“a school, a park and a big supermarket”；2. 中间段写邻里互助：用“kind and helpful”描述邻居，说明他们的行为，如“computer engineers fix computers”“volunteers help old people clean flats and do shopping”，体现互助；3. 结尾段表达感受：用“be lucky to live in such a neighbourhood”总结，升华主题，确保内容连贯，符合语法要求。
【答案】
My Neighbourhood
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful neighbourhood with some tall buildings. There is a school, a park and a big supermarket. My neighbours are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help others. The computer engineers help us to fix our computers and washing machines. Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them. At the weekend, I clean our neighbourhood with my neighbours. People here are like a big family. I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作，社区话题词汇，一般现在时
【点评】
本题围绕单元核心主题“社区”考查写作能力，要求学生整合所学词汇与句型，按指定要点谋篇布局，既考查语言基础，又注重实际运用能力，符合七年级英语的教学要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
