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Ⅸ. 书面表达。（共1小题，计20分）
96. 户外活动是通往世界的生动课堂，让我们跨越书本的边界，触摸不同地域的文化肌理，见证多样地形的鬼斧神工，邂逅自然万物的生命韵律。请以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，围绕下图所示的三个问题写一篇英语短文，讲述你经历过的一次户外活动。
要求：
（1）词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
（3）文中不能出现真实校名、人名等信息。
提示词：unforgettable(难忘的)
96. 户外活动是通往世界的生动课堂，让我们跨越书本的边界，触摸不同地域的文化肌理，见证多样地形的鬼斧神工，邂逅自然万物的生命韵律。请以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，围绕下图所示的三个问题写一篇英语短文，讲述你经历过的一次户外活动。
要求：
（1）词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
（3）文中不能出现真实校名、人名等信息。
提示词：unforgettable(难忘的)
答案
96.【范文】
An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them. Last summer, we went hiking in the mountains. During the activity, we climbed steep hills and crossed a clear stream by jumping from stone to stone. We also collected leaves of different shapes and colours to make bookmarks. What made it unforgettable was that we met a local villager. He told us stories about the mountain and taught us some survival skills. This experience was unforgettable because it let me touch nature closely and understand local culture. I learned that nature is full of wonders and we should respect it.
An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them. Last summer, we went hiking in the mountains. During the activity, we climbed steep hills and crossed a clear stream by jumping from stone to stone. We also collected leaves of different shapes and colours to make bookmarks. What made it unforgettable was that we met a local villager. He told us stories about the mountain and taught us some survival skills. This experience was unforgettable because it let me touch nature closely and understand local culture. I learned that nature is full of wonders and we should respect it.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，围绕一次户外活动经历写作。解题时需先确定具体的户外活动事例，再描述活动过程，点明难忘的原因，最后总结收获，注意词数要求和语言通顺，避免真实信息。
【解析】首先确定具体活动为去年夏天和朋友登山，接着描述活动中的细节（爬山、过小溪、收集树叶），然后说明难忘的原因（遇到当地村民，听故事、学生存技能，感受自然与当地文化），最后总结从经历中获得的感悟，符合题目要求的词数和语言规范。
【答案】An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them. Last summer, we went hiking in the mountains. During the activity, we climbed steep hills and crossed a clear stream by jumping from stone to stone. We also collected leaves of different shapes and colours to make bookmarks. What made it unforgettable was that we met a local villager. He told us stories about the mountain and taught us some survival skills. This experience was unforgettable because it let me touch nature closely and understand local culture. I learned that nature is full of wonders and we should respect it.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、户外活动主题英语表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，内容具体充实，有细节描写，清晰点明了难忘的原因，语言通顺连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先确定具体活动为去年夏天和朋友登山，接着描述活动中的细节（爬山、过小溪、收集树叶），然后说明难忘的原因（遇到当地村民，听故事、学生存技能，感受自然与当地文化），最后总结从经历中获得的感悟，符合题目要求的词数和语言规范。
【答案】An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them. Last summer, we went hiking in the mountains. During the activity, we climbed steep hills and crossed a clear stream by jumping from stone to stone. We also collected leaves of different shapes and colours to make bookmarks. What made it unforgettable was that we met a local villager. He told us stories about the mountain and taught us some survival skills. This experience was unforgettable because it let me touch nature closely and understand local culture. I learned that nature is full of wonders and we should respect it.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、户外活动主题英语表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，内容具体充实，有细节描写，清晰点明了难忘的原因，语言通顺连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
