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五、书面表达。（共25分）
艾琳恩学校正在举办“校园风采展示”征文活动，主题为“Being proud of our school”。活动邀请七年级学生用英语分享自己的校园生活，向来访的外国交换生介绍学校的特色场所、精彩活动，或是让自己感到骄傲的校园瞬间。
学校是我们成长的摇篮，学生们都爱自己的学校。请以“Being proud of our school”为题，根据下面表格中的信息介绍自己学校的情况。
要求:1. 不得使用真实的人名和校名。2. 包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使内容完整,行文连贯。3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚。4. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school.
艾琳恩学校正在举办“校园风采展示”征文活动，主题为“Being proud of our school”。活动邀请七年级学生用英语分享自己的校园生活，向来访的外国交换生介绍学校的特色场所、精彩活动，或是让自己感到骄傲的校园瞬间。
学校是我们成长的摇篮，学生们都爱自己的学校。请以“Being proud of our school”为题，根据下面表格中的信息介绍自己学校的情况。
要求:1. 不得使用真实的人名和校名。2. 包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使内容完整,行文连贯。3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚。4. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school.
答案
One possible version:
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school.
The environment in our school is beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers everywhere. Our school is very big with a few tall buildings. We have a big playground, a library and so on. We have fun at school. We have many interesting school activities. After class we play games and do lots of sports. We also have some clubs. School activities make our school life colourful. In our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. We learn much from our teachers. The students work hard and often help each other. There are many safety rules in our school. We mustn't ride bikes at school. We should walk on the right side of the stairs.
We love our school.
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school.
The environment in our school is beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers everywhere. Our school is very big with a few tall buildings. We have a big playground, a library and so on. We have fun at school. We have many interesting school activities. After class we play games and do lots of sports. We also have some clubs. School activities make our school life colourful. In our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. We learn much from our teachers. The students work hard and often help each other. There are many safety rules in our school. We mustn't ride bikes at school. We should walk on the right side of the stairs.
We love our school.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语书面表达题，主题为“Being proud of our school”，要求根据表格要点完成写作。解题思路：首先衔接已给开头，依次围绕四个核心要点展开：1. 描述学校的环境（花草等）和建筑（高楼、操场、图书馆等）；2. 介绍学校的活动，如俱乐部，体现活动让校园生活多彩；3. 说明师生特点：老师博学，学生友好、努力且互助；4. 写出至少两条校园安全规则，最后表达对学校的热爱。写作时需确保覆盖所有要点，语言连贯，符合词数要求，不使用真实人名和校名。
【解析】
衔接开头后，按要点组织内容：
The environment in our school is beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers everywhere. Our school is very big with a few tall buildings. We have a big playground, a library and so on. We have fun at school. We have many interesting school activities. After class we play games and do lots of sports. We also have some clubs. School activities make our school life colourful. In our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. We learn much from our teachers. The students work hard and often help each other. There are many safety rules in our school. We mustn't ride bikes at school. We should walk on the right side of the stairs. We love our school.
【答案】
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school.
The environment in our school is beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers everywhere. Our school is very big with a few tall buildings. We have a big playground, a library and so on. We have fun at school. We have many interesting school activities. After class we play games and do lots of sports. We also have some clubs. School activities make our school life colourful. In our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. We learn much from our teachers. The students work hard and often help each other. There are many safety rules in our school. We mustn't ride bikes at school. We should walk on the right side of the stairs.
We love our school.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园话题写作、要点整合
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖表格所有要求的要点，内容充实，语言连贯自然，符合七年级英语写作的规范，清晰展现了学校的特色，表达了对学校的热爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语书面表达题，主题为“Being proud of our school”，要求根据表格要点完成写作。解题思路：首先衔接已给开头，依次围绕四个核心要点展开：1. 描述学校的环境（花草等）和建筑（高楼、操场、图书馆等）；2. 介绍学校的活动，如俱乐部，体现活动让校园生活多彩；3. 说明师生特点：老师博学，学生友好、努力且互助；4. 写出至少两条校园安全规则，最后表达对学校的热爱。写作时需确保覆盖所有要点，语言连贯，符合词数要求，不使用真实人名和校名。
【解析】
衔接开头后，按要点组织内容：
The environment in our school is beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers everywhere. Our school is very big with a few tall buildings. We have a big playground, a library and so on. We have fun at school. We have many interesting school activities. After class we play games and do lots of sports. We also have some clubs. School activities make our school life colourful. In our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. We learn much from our teachers. The students work hard and often help each other. There are many safety rules in our school. We mustn't ride bikes at school. We should walk on the right side of the stairs. We love our school.
【答案】
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school.
The environment in our school is beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers everywhere. Our school is very big with a few tall buildings. We have a big playground, a library and so on. We have fun at school. We have many interesting school activities. After class we play games and do lots of sports. We also have some clubs. School activities make our school life colourful. In our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. We learn much from our teachers. The students work hard and often help each other. There are many safety rules in our school. We mustn't ride bikes at school. We should walk on the right side of the stairs.
We love our school.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园话题写作、要点整合
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖表格所有要求的要点，内容充实，语言连贯自然，符合七年级英语写作的规范，清晰展现了学校的特色，表达了对学校的热爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.6
