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② 典例赏析
榜样,就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人,他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中,一定有很多值得你学习的榜样,比如袁隆平、杨振宁、老师、亲人、朋友…… 假如你是李华,学校英语社团将举办主题为“The Person I Admire”的演讲比赛,请你根据要点提示并进行适当发挥,用英文写一篇 80-100 词的演讲稿,介绍自己的榜样。
要点: 1.你最敬佩的人的基本情况;2.你敬佩他/她的原因;3.你的期望或想法。
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone!
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
38 英语 九年级 上册 译林版
写作框架:
优秀范文:
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties①. She is a great mother and good doctor. When I have trouble in② my study, she always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to face③ these problems. And I always work them out. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example④ for my study. She spends most of her time on her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. ⑤
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
亮点词块
①in her forties 四十多岁
②have trouble in 在……方面遇到困难
③encourage me to face 鼓励我去面对
④set a good example 树立好榜样
高分句子
⑤So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
( I think 后面是宾语从句；not only…but also 连接并列名词)
榜样,就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人,他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中,一定有很多值得你学习的榜样,比如袁隆平、杨振宁、老师、亲人、朋友…… 假如你是李华,学校英语社团将举办主题为“The Person I Admire”的演讲比赛,请你根据要点提示并进行适当发挥,用英文写一篇 80-100 词的演讲稿,介绍自己的榜样。
要点: 1.你最敬佩的人的基本情况;2.你敬佩他/她的原因;3.你的期望或想法。
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone!
单元主题写作
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
38 英语 九年级 上册 译林版
写作框架:
优秀范文:
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties①. She is a great mother and good doctor. When I have trouble in② my study, she always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to face③ these problems. And I always work them out. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example④ for my study. She spends most of her time on her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. ⑤
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
亮点词块
①in her forties 四十多岁
②have trouble in 在……方面遇到困难
③encourage me to face 鼓励我去面对
④set a good example 树立好榜样
高分句子
⑤So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
( I think 后面是宾语从句；not only…but also 连接并列名词)
答案
单元主题写作
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份完成主题为“The Person I Admire”的演讲稿。解题思路：首先选择贴近自身生活、易展开内容的榜样（如范文中的母亲）；其次紧扣题目给出的三个要点：介绍榜样基本情况、说明敬佩原因、表达自身期望；最后注意演讲稿格式，时态以一般现在时为主，人称使用第一、第三人称，控制词数在80-100词内，适当运用亮点词块和高分句型提升写作质量。
【解析】写作步骤：1.开头：问候听众并自我介绍，引出自己敬佩的人；2.主体部分：①介绍榜样基本情况（如年龄、身份）；②阐述敬佩原因：结合具体事例（如学习上的帮助、工作上的态度）；③表达自身期望：希望成为像榜样那样的人；3.结尾：礼貌致谢。写作时需确保要点齐全，语言通顺，符合词数要求，合理运用给定的亮点词块和高分句型。
【答案】The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and good doctor. When I have trouble in my study, she always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to face these problems. And I always work them out. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She spends most of her time on her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、常用短语运用、宾语从句与并列结构
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅自然，运用了多个亮点词块和高分句型，符合演讲稿的格式规范，是一篇优秀的单元主题写作范例，贴近学生生活，具有较强的模仿性。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1.开头：问候听众并自我介绍，引出自己敬佩的人；2.主体部分：①介绍榜样基本情况（如年龄、身份）；②阐述敬佩原因：结合具体事例（如学习上的帮助、工作上的态度）；③表达自身期望：希望成为像榜样那样的人；3.结尾：礼貌致谢。写作时需确保要点齐全，语言通顺，符合词数要求，合理运用给定的亮点词块和高分句型。
【答案】The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and good doctor. When I have trouble in my study, she always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to face these problems. And I always work them out. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She spends most of her time on her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、常用短语运用、宾语从句与并列结构
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅自然，运用了多个亮点词块和高分句型，符合演讲稿的格式规范，是一篇优秀的单元主题写作范例，贴近学生生活，具有较强的模仿性。
【难度系数】0.6
