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地球是我们的家园,人人都有责任保护它。现在,和环境污染有关的问题越来越多,为了保护环境,作为中学生的你在日常生活中应该采取什么措施呢? 请你以“ How to be a green teenager ”为题写一篇短文,讲述你们应该怎样保护环境。
审主题
提示:1.目前的环境状况及危害;
2.打算采取什么措施来保护环境;
3.你对于保护环境的看法。
审要点
→审人称: 第一、三人称
→审时态: 一般现在时
注意:1.词数80—100词;2.必须包含以上内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审词数
How to be a green teenager
写作支架
开头
描述目前的环境状况及危害,并引出下文
The earth is facing more and more serious environmental problems now, such as
These problems not only
So it’s necessary for us to
中间
具体介绍环保措施
As middle school students, we can do much in daily life.
First, save water and electricity by
Besides, we can
结尾
表达对于保护环境的看法
In my opinion, protecting the environment is never a small thing. Every small effort counts. If all teenagers act as green guardians, we’ll
审主题
提示:1.目前的环境状况及危害;
2.打算采取什么措施来保护环境;
3.你对于保护环境的看法。
审要点
→审人称: 第一、三人称
→审时态: 一般现在时
注意:1.词数80—100词;2.必须包含以上内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审词数
How to be a green teenager
写作支架
开头
描述目前的环境状况及危害,并引出下文
The earth is facing more and more serious environmental problems now, such as
air pollution, plastic waste and water shortage
.These problems not only
damage the natural ecosystem
but also directly threaten people’s health
.（高分句式1）So it’s necessary for us to
take action to protect the environment
.中间
具体介绍环保措施
As middle school students, we can do much in daily life.
First, save water and electricity by
turning off taps and lights in time
. Second, walk or ride bikes to school. Third, use reusable bags and bottles
, and sort rubbish carefully for easier recycling
.Besides, we can
plant trees
and tell others the importance of environmental protection.结尾
表达对于保护环境的看法
In my opinion, protecting the environment is never a small thing. Every small effort counts. If all teenagers act as green guardians, we’ll
surely build a cleaner and greener world
.（高分句式2）答案
How to be a green teenager
The earth is facing more and more serious environmental problems now, such as air pollution, plastic waste and water shortage. These problems not only damage the natural ecosystem but also directly threaten people’s health. So it’s necessary for us to take action to protect the environment.
As middle school students, we can do much in daily life. First, save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights in time. Second, walk or ride bikes to school. Third, use reusable bags and bottles, and sort rubbish carefully for easier recycling. Besides, we can plant trees and tell others the importance of environmental protection.
In my opinion, protecting the environment is never a small thing. Every small effort counts. If all teenagers act as green guardians, we’ll surely build a cleaner and greener world.
亮点评析
①用not only...but also...结构说明环境问题的双重危害,句式工整且逻辑递进,富有层次感。
②用First、Second、Third、Besides引出具体的环保措施,逻辑清晰。
③count在此处表“有意义;起作用”,替代单调的is important,表达更地道。
④用含if引导的条件状语从句的主从复合句表达展望,收尾有力。
The earth is facing more and more serious environmental problems now, such as air pollution, plastic waste and water shortage. These problems not only damage the natural ecosystem but also directly threaten people’s health. So it’s necessary for us to take action to protect the environment.
As middle school students, we can do much in daily life. First, save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights in time. Second, walk or ride bikes to school. Third, use reusable bags and bottles, and sort rubbish carefully for easier recycling. Besides, we can plant trees and tell others the importance of environmental protection.
In my opinion, protecting the environment is never a small thing. Every small effort counts. If all teenagers act as green guardians, we’ll surely build a cleaner and greener world.
亮点评析
①用not only...but also...结构说明环境问题的双重危害,句式工整且逻辑递进,富有层次感。
②用First、Second、Third、Besides引出具体的环保措施,逻辑清晰。
③count在此处表“有意义;起作用”,替代单调的is important,表达更地道。
④用含if引导的条件状语从句的主从复合句表达展望,收尾有力。
