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写作方法提优
精研高分写作范式
掌握考场实战技法
D6
同学们,在这个单元里,我们一起探讨了“怎样过绿色生活”。现在大家已经学会了用一般将来时来表达自己的环保想法啦!接下来,就请大家拿起笔,写一写属于你的绿色生活计划吧!
写作思路
例题演练
地球是我们共同的家园。请以“My Green Life”为题,根据提示写一篇短文,介绍你打算如何践行绿色生活、保护地球。要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于60词。
提示:随手关掉水龙头;纸张双面使用;购物使用布袋;节约粮食,不浪费食物。
范文展示
My Green Life
The Earth is our home. I want to live a green life and help it.
First, I will turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. Second, I will use both sides of the paper. Third, I will take a cloth bag when I go shopping with my parents. Finally, I won't waste food. I will eat up all the food on my plate.
These small things can help the Earth. Let's work together!
小试身手
假如你的学校正在开展以“绿色生活”为主题的征文活动,请根据下面表格内的提示,用英文完成一篇短文,介绍你的绿色生活。要求:包含表格中的信息,可适当发挥;不少于60词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
As a student, I live a green life now.
精研高分写作范式
掌握考场实战技法
D6
同学们,在这个单元里,我们一起探讨了“怎样过绿色生活”。现在大家已经学会了用一般将来时来表达自己的环保想法啦!接下来,就请大家拿起笔,写一写属于你的绿色生活计划吧!
写作思路
例题演练
地球是我们共同的家园。请以“My Green Life”为题,根据提示写一篇短文,介绍你打算如何践行绿色生活、保护地球。要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于60词。
提示:随手关掉水龙头;纸张双面使用;购物使用布袋;节约粮食,不浪费食物。
范文展示
My Green Life
The Earth is our home. I want to live a green life and help it.
First, I will turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. Second, I will use both sides of the paper. Third, I will take a cloth bag when I go shopping with my parents. Finally, I won't waste food. I will eat up all the food on my plate.
These small things can help the Earth. Let's work together!
小试身手
假如你的学校正在开展以“绿色生活”为主题的征文活动,请根据下面表格内的提示,用英文完成一篇短文,介绍你的绿色生活。要求:包含表格中的信息,可适当发挥;不少于60词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
As a student, I live a green life now.
First of all, water is the source of life and very valuable, so I will save water. For example, I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth.
Secondly, electricity is also important. I won't waste it and will turn off the lights in time when leaving a room.
Thirdly, I ride a bike or walk to school. It helps reduce air pollution and keeps me healthy. Small things can make a big difference. Let's live a green life together!
答案
写作方法提优
As a student, I live a green life now.
First of all, water is the source of life and very valuable, so I will save water. For example, I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth.
Secondly, electricity is also important. I won't waste it and will turn off the lights in time when leaving a room.
Thirdly, I ride a bike or walk to school. It helps reduce air pollution and keeps me healthy.
Small things can make a big difference. Let's live a green life together!
As a student, I live a green life now.
First of all, water is the source of life and very valuable, so I will save water. For example, I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth.
Secondly, electricity is also important. I won't waste it and will turn off the lights in time when leaving a room.
Thirdly, I ride a bike or walk to school. It helps reduce air pollution and keeps me healthy.
Small things can make a big difference. Let's live a green life together!
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求围绕“绿色生活”主题，介绍自己的具体践行做法，需用一般现在时，语句通顺且不少于60词。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，点明绿色生活的意义；2. 用firstly、secondly等连接词分点列举节水、节电、绿色出行等具体环保行动，搭配实例让内容更充实；3. 结尾总结小行动的价值并发出倡议，使结构完整。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接主题，说明自己践行绿色生活；2. 分点阐述具体做法：①节水：刷牙时关闭水龙头；②节电：离开房间及时关灯；③绿色出行：骑车或步行上学；3. 结尾总结小行动的作用，发出共同践行绿色生活的倡议。注意使用合适的连接词，语句通顺，符合一般现在时的时态要求，确保内容达标。
【答案】
As a student, I live a green life now.
First of all, water is the source of life and very valuable, so I will save water. For example, I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth.
Secondly, electricity is also important. I won't waste it and will turn off the lights in time when leaving a room.
Thirdly, I ride a bike or walk to school. It helps reduce air pollution and keeps me healthy.
Small things can make a big difference. Let's live a green life together!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、环保话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“绿色生活”主题，结构清晰，分点列举节水、节电、绿色出行等具体环保行动，内容充实，语句通顺，符合字数要求，结尾的倡议升华了主题，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作要求围绕“绿色生活”主题，介绍自己的具体践行做法，需用一般现在时，语句通顺且不少于60词。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，点明绿色生活的意义；2. 用firstly、secondly等连接词分点列举节水、节电、绿色出行等具体环保行动，搭配实例让内容更充实；3. 结尾总结小行动的价值并发出倡议，使结构完整。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接主题，说明自己践行绿色生活；2. 分点阐述具体做法：①节水：刷牙时关闭水龙头；②节电：离开房间及时关灯；③绿色出行：骑车或步行上学；3. 结尾总结小行动的作用，发出共同践行绿色生活的倡议。注意使用合适的连接词，语句通顺，符合一般现在时的时态要求，确保内容达标。
【答案】
As a student, I live a green life now.
First of all, water is the source of life and very valuable, so I will save water. For example, I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth.
Secondly, electricity is also important. I won't waste it and will turn off the lights in time when leaving a room.
Thirdly, I ride a bike or walk to school. It helps reduce air pollution and keeps me healthy.
Small things can make a big difference. Let's live a green life together!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、环保话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“绿色生活”主题，结构清晰，分点列举节水、节电、绿色出行等具体环保行动，内容充实，语句通顺，符合字数要求，结尾的倡议升华了主题，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
