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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D5
「2026江苏盐城康居路初中教育集团期中」
亲爱的同学,祝贺你已经成为一名初中生。在这里你将开启新的人生旅程,并将结识新朋友,学习新课程,参加丰富多彩的活动。请根据下面的提示,从三个方面以“My new school life”为题,介绍一下你的初中生活。
要求:(1)文中不得提及真实姓名,校名等信息;
(2)内容全面,语句通顺,条理清晰;
(3)词数70左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
「2026江苏盐城康居路初中教育集团期中」
亲爱的同学,祝贺你已经成为一名初中生。在这里你将开启新的人生旅程,并将结识新朋友,学习新课程,参加丰富多彩的活动。请根据下面的提示,从三个方面以“My new school life”为题,介绍一下你的初中生活。
要求:(1)文中不得提及真实姓名,校名等信息;
(2)内容全面,语句通顺,条理清晰;
(3)词数70左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
My school is very beautiful. My favourite place is the library. I like reading books and there are many interesting books.
At school we have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. My favourite subject is English.
There are also many clubs at school and we can choose one club to join. I have some new friends at school.
They are all friendly to me and I like them.
I really like my new school. I am happy every day.
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
My school is very beautiful. My favourite place is the library. I like reading books and there are many interesting books. At school we have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. My favourite subject is English. There are also many clubs at school and we can choose one club to join. I have some new friends at school. They are all friendly to me and I like them.
I really like my new school. I am happy every day.
＞ 进阶版范文
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
My school is a beautiful place with some wonderful buildings. My favourite place is the library. I enjoy reading books there because there are many interesting books there. At school we have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. I like English best because it's very useful. There are also many clubs at school and we can choose one club to join. One week ago, I joined the music club because I enjoy singing. I have some new friends at school. They are all friendly to me and I like them.
I really like my new school. I enjoy myself there every day. I hope my school life will be better and better.
＞ 基础版范文
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
My school is very beautiful. My favourite place is the library. I like reading books and there are many interesting books. At school we have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. My favourite subject is English. There are also many clubs at school and we can choose one club to join. I have some new friends at school. They are all friendly to me and I like them.
I really like my new school. I am happy every day.
＞ 进阶版范文
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
My school is a beautiful place with some wonderful buildings. My favourite place is the library. I enjoy reading books there because there are many interesting books there. At school we have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. I like English best because it's very useful. There are also many clubs at school and we can choose one club to join. One week ago, I joined the music club because I enjoy singing. I have some new friends at school. They are all friendly to me and I like them.
I really like my new school. I enjoy myself there every day. I hope my school life will be better and better.
解析
【分析】本题是初中英语话题写作题，要求以“My new school life”为题，根据思维导图的三个核心分支（学校、校园生活、新朋友）展开写作。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，先介绍学校的整体情况，重点说明最喜欢的学校场所及原因；2. 围绕校园生活，提及开设的科目、可参加的俱乐部等内容；3. 介绍新朋友的性格特点；最后收尾表达对初中新生活的喜爱，确保内容全面、语句通顺，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头后，先描述学校的整体印象，再点明最喜欢的地方（如图书馆），说明喜欢的原因（有很多有趣的书，适合阅读）；2. 介绍校园生活的科目（列举语文、数学、英语等），提及学校的俱乐部供选择；3. 说明自己的新朋友很友好，表达对他们的喜爱；4. 收尾总结对新学校生活的喜爱，符合词数要求，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
My school is very beautiful. My favourite place is the library. I like reading books and there are many interesting books. At school we have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. My favourite subject is English. There are also many clubs at school and we can choose one club to join. I have some new friends at school. They are all friendly to me and I like them.
I really like my new school. I am happy every day.
【知识点】英语话题写作、初中英语写作、要点式表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图提示考查初中英语写作，要求学生紧扣要点组织语言，考查语言运用能力，难度适中，是初中期中常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头后，先描述学校的整体印象，再点明最喜欢的地方（如图书馆），说明喜欢的原因（有很多有趣的书，适合阅读）；2. 介绍校园生活的科目（列举语文、数学、英语等），提及学校的俱乐部供选择；3. 说明自己的新朋友很友好，表达对他们的喜爱；4. 收尾总结对新学校生活的喜爱，符合词数要求，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
My school is very beautiful. My favourite place is the library. I like reading books and there are many interesting books. At school we have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. My favourite subject is English. There are also many clubs at school and we can choose one club to join. I have some new friends at school. They are all friendly to me and I like them.
I really like my new school. I am happy every day.
【知识点】英语话题写作、初中英语写作、要点式表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图提示考查初中英语写作，要求学生紧扣要点组织语言，考查语言运用能力，难度适中，是初中期中常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
