主题写作专项 练写作 答案D5
主题词网
优选词汇
学校生活
· plan
· task
· homework
· project
· problem
· introduce
· subject
· advice
老师
· kind
· strict
· smile
· patient
同学
· polite
· friendly
· helpful
· outgoing
描述课程
· easy
· useful
· difficult
· interesting
· hard
· important
· enjoyable
· challenging
心情
· nervous
· happy
· excited
· tired

写作实例
审时态:一般现在时 审人称:第一、三人称 审主题
假设今天是你上学的第一天。请你根据下面的写作提示,以“My first lesson”为题,介绍一下你今天上的第一节语文、数学或英语课等。
提示:1.你要介绍的第一节课是什么课?
2.给你上这节课的教师是谁? 审人称:第三人称
3.描述当时的课堂场景;
4.表达你的感受。 审词数
要求:1.词数70左右;2.必须包含上述提示,可适当发挥。
My first lesson

写作支架
开头 开篇点题
I have a great lesson today.
It is my first lesson.
中间 详细描述上课场景
is our teacher. It is . He is .
In the beginning, he asks us to introduce ______ .（高分句式1）
Then, he asks me . I feel . My face .
looks at me . Then he tells . He also says .
结尾 表达感受
This is my first . I can’t forget it. I get .
I love . I’m so lucky to have a teacher like him.（高分句式2）
教材原文
初中英语 七年级 上册 外研版
P19 He asks us to introduce ourselves.
P19 I feel so nervous.
P19 My face turns red.
P19 I’m so lucky to have a teacher like him.
优秀范文
My first maths lesson
I have a great lesson today. It is my first maths lesson.①
Mr Zhang is our maths teacher.② He is kind and helpful.② In the beginning, he asks us to introduce ourselves. Then he asks me a maths question. It is difficult and I don’t know how to answer it. I feel so nervous. My face turns red. Mr Zhang looks at③ me with a smile③ and asks me not to be nervous. Then he tells me the answer and how to work it out. He also says, “I believe you can learn maths well.”
This is my first maths lesson.④ I can’t forget it. I get interested in maths because of it. I love Mr Zhang. I’m so lucky to have a teacher like him.
①点明主题，和第一个提示相呼应
②点明任课老师，并以两个形容词描述该老师
③look at、with a smile是较为高级的表达，提高了本文的档次
④和第一段做到了首尾呼应。
亮点评析
①点明主题,和标题及第一个提示相呼应。
②点明任课老师,并以两个形容词描述该老师。
③look at、with a smile是较为高级的表达,提高了本文的档次。
④和第一段做到了首尾呼应。

My first maths lesson
I have a great lesson today. It is my first maths lesson.
Mr Zhang is our maths teacher. He is kind and helpful. In the beginning, he asks us to introduce ourselves. Then he asks me a hard maths question. I feel so nervous and my face turns red. Mr Zhang looks at me with a smile, tells me how to work it out and says he believes I can learn maths well.
This is my first maths lesson. I can't forget it. I get interested in maths. I love Mr Zhang. I'm so lucky to have a teacher like him.

【分析】本题为七年级英语主题写作题，要求以“My first + 学科 + lesson”为题，需使用一般现在时，第一、三人称，涵盖“课程、任课教师、课堂场景、个人感受”四个提示点，结合给定优选词汇与教材高分句式，词数控制在70左右，写作时需遵循“开头点题-中间描场景-结尾抒感受”的结构，做到首尾呼应。
【解析】1. 补全标题：选择学科（如maths），完成“My first maths lesson”；2. 开头点题：用给定开篇句点明是第一节该学科课；3. 中间描述：用第三人称介绍任课教师（如Mr Zhang），用给定形容词（kind、helpful）描述教师，接着写课堂场景：教师让学生自我介绍（运用高分句式“introduce ourselves”），随后提问，自己紧张（feel nervous）、脸红，教师微笑（with a smile）鼓励并讲解解题方法，表达鼓励话语；4. 结尾呼应：点明对课程的兴趣，表达对教师的喜爱，呼应开头。
【答案】My first maths lesson
I have a great lesson today. It is my first maths lesson.
Mr Zhang is our maths teacher. He is kind and helpful. In the beginning, he asks us to introduce ourselves. Then he asks me a hard maths question. I feel so nervous and my face turns red. Mr Zhang looks at me with a smile, tells me how to work it out and says he believes I can learn maths well.
This is my first maths lesson. I can't forget it. I get interested in maths. I love Mr Zhang. I'm so lucky to have a teacher like him.
【知识点】英语主题写作、一般现在时运用、形容词描述人物
【点评】该范文紧扣写作要求，结构清晰，首尾呼应，运用了教材核心句式与给定词汇，准确完成写作任务，符合七年级英语写作的规范，是优秀的写作范例。
【难度系数】0.6