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七、书面表达(共1大题，满分20分)
假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Jim想来你的城市旅行，他向你提出了以下几个问题，请你用英语给他回复一封邮件。
1. What's the weather like now? What are you doing?
2. Which time of year is the best time to visit your city?
3. What's the weather usually like during that time?
4. What do you usually do in such days?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you and know that you're planning a trip to my city.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Jim想来你的城市旅行，他向你提出了以下几个问题，请你用英语给他回复一封邮件。
1. What's the weather like now? What are you doing?
2. Which time of year is the best time to visit your city?
3. What's the weather usually like during that time?
4. What do you usually do in such days?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you and know that you're planning a trip to my city.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
答案
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you and know that you're planning a trip to my city. Right now, the weather is windy and warm. It's about 20℃. I'm preparing for a school project about my city's history. The best time to visit my city is spring. It's around March to May. The weather during that time is usually warm and sunny. It's not too hot or too cold, just perfect for outdoor activities. During spring, I usually go to the parks with my family. We have picnics, fly kites and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Sometimes I go biking around the East Lake with my friends. It's a wonderful time to enjoy nature and have fun. Come and visit me then! I'm really looking forward to showing you around!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
It's great to hear from you and know that you're planning a trip to my city. Right now, the weather is windy and warm. It's about 20℃. I'm preparing for a school project about my city's history. The best time to visit my city is spring. It's around March to May. The weather during that time is usually warm and sunny. It's not too hot or too cold, just perfect for outdoor activities. During spring, I usually go to the parks with my family. We have picnics, fly kites and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Sometimes I go biking around the East Lake with my friends. It's a wonderful time to enjoy nature and have fun. Come and visit me then! I'm really looking forward to showing you around!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一封给英国朋友的回复邮件，需逐一回应Jim的四个问题，同时保持邮件的友好自然。第一步，先回答当前天气和自身正在进行的活动，要给出具体天气状况和温度，活动内容贴合学生身份；第二步，确定最佳旅行时间，选择天气适宜的季节更合适；第三步，描述该季节的典型天气，突出适合旅行的特点；第四步，介绍自己在该季节常做的活动，让内容更生动；最后加上邀请的话语，增强邮件亲切感。全程注意词数控制，语言简洁地道，不透露真实信息。
【解析】
1. 回应第一个问题：开篇后直接描述当前天气“Right now, the weather is windy and warm. It's about 20℃.”，接着用现在进行时说明正在做的事“I'm preparing for a school project about my city's history.”，准确表达当下动作。
2. 回答第二个问题：明确指出最佳旅行时间“The best time to visit my city is spring. It's around March to May.”，给出具体时间段让信息更清晰。
3. 描述该时段天气：“The weather during that time is usually warm and sunny. It's not too hot or too cold, just perfect for outdoor activities.”，突出天气适宜旅行的特点。
4. 介绍该时段活动：用一般现在时描述日常活动“During spring, I usually go to the parks with my family. We have picnics, fly kites and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Sometimes I go biking around the East Lake with my friends.”，列举具体场景让内容更丰富。
5. 结尾邀请：“Come and visit me then! I'm really looking forward to showing you around!”，增强邮件友好氛围，符合朋友间交流语气。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you and know that you're planning a trip to my city. Right now, the weather is windy and warm. It's about 20℃. I'm preparing for a school project about my city's history. The best time to visit my city is spring. It's around March to May. The weather during that time is usually warm and sunny. It's not too hot or too cold, just perfect for outdoor activities. During spring, I usually go to the parks with my family. We have picnics, fly kites and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Sometimes I go biking around the East Lake with my friends. It's a wonderful time to enjoy nature and have fun. Come and visit me then! I'm really looking forward to showing you around!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【知识点】
1. 英语邮件写作
2. 时态（现在进行时、一般现在时）运用
3. 天气与活动描述表达
【点评】
这篇回复邮件完整覆盖了题目要求的四个问题，内容条理清晰，语言简洁地道，符合英语邮件的友好交流语气。时态运用准确，通过具体场景描述让内容更生动，同时控制了词数，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确这是一封给英国朋友的回复邮件，需逐一回应Jim的四个问题，同时保持邮件的友好自然。第一步，先回答当前天气和自身正在进行的活动，要给出具体天气状况和温度，活动内容贴合学生身份；第二步，确定最佳旅行时间，选择天气适宜的季节更合适；第三步，描述该季节的典型天气，突出适合旅行的特点；第四步，介绍自己在该季节常做的活动，让内容更生动；最后加上邀请的话语，增强邮件亲切感。全程注意词数控制，语言简洁地道，不透露真实信息。
【解析】
1. 回应第一个问题：开篇后直接描述当前天气“Right now, the weather is windy and warm. It's about 20℃.”，接着用现在进行时说明正在做的事“I'm preparing for a school project about my city's history.”，准确表达当下动作。
2. 回答第二个问题：明确指出最佳旅行时间“The best time to visit my city is spring. It's around March to May.”，给出具体时间段让信息更清晰。
3. 描述该时段天气：“The weather during that time is usually warm and sunny. It's not too hot or too cold, just perfect for outdoor activities.”，突出天气适宜旅行的特点。
4. 介绍该时段活动：用一般现在时描述日常活动“During spring, I usually go to the parks with my family. We have picnics, fly kites and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Sometimes I go biking around the East Lake with my friends.”，列举具体场景让内容更丰富。
5. 结尾邀请：“Come and visit me then! I'm really looking forward to showing you around!”，增强邮件友好氛围，符合朋友间交流语气。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you and know that you're planning a trip to my city. Right now, the weather is windy and warm. It's about 20℃. I'm preparing for a school project about my city's history. The best time to visit my city is spring. It's around March to May. The weather during that time is usually warm and sunny. It's not too hot or too cold, just perfect for outdoor activities. During spring, I usually go to the parks with my family. We have picnics, fly kites and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Sometimes I go biking around the East Lake with my friends. It's a wonderful time to enjoy nature and have fun. Come and visit me then! I'm really looking forward to showing you around!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【知识点】
1. 英语邮件写作
2. 时态（现在进行时、一般现在时）运用
3. 天气与活动描述表达
【点评】
这篇回复邮件完整覆盖了题目要求的四个问题，内容条理清晰，语言简洁地道，符合英语邮件的友好交流语气。时态运用准确，通过具体场景描述让内容更生动，同时控制了词数，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
