六、书面表达。5分
今天是星期天,也是你家的"家庭劳动日"。请根据下面的思维导图,以"Family Labour Day"为题,介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么吧!
要求:1. 内容全面,表达通顺,书写规范;2. 时态运用正确,不少于4句话。

今天是星期天,也是你家的"家庭劳动日"。请根据下面的思维导图,以"Family Labour Day"为题,介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么吧!
要求:1. 内容全面,表达通顺,书写规范;2. 时态运用正确,不少于4句话。
答案
范文:
Family Labour day
Today is Sunday, and it’s our family’s cleaning day. We are all busy with different chores at home. My mother is in the kitchen. She is washing the dirty dishes carefully. My father is cleaning the living room. He is sweeping the floor with a broom. I’m tidying up my bedroom.
We feel a little tired but happy. It’s nice to make our home clean and tidy together!
Family Labour day
Today is Sunday, and it’s our family’s cleaning day. We are all busy with different chores at home. My mother is in the kitchen. She is washing the dirty dishes carefully. My father is cleaning the living room. He is sweeping the floor with a broom. I’m tidying up my bedroom.
We feel a little tired but happy. It’s nice to make our home clean and tidy together!
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求以“Family Labour Day”为题,结合思维导图(包含Who、When、Where、What、How五个要素)介绍家人正在做的家务。解题思路:首先确定时态为现在进行时(描述正在发生的动作);其次对应思维导图的五个要素梳理内容:When是周日,Who是我和家人,Where是家里不同区域,What是各自做的家务,How是一起劳动的感受;最后组织语言,确保内容全面、语句通顺,满足不少于4句话的要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 开篇点明主题:说明今天是周日,是家庭劳动日,引出大家都在做家务;2. 分述家人的具体动作:对应Where(厨房、客厅、卧室),用现在进行时描述妈妈洗碗、爸爸扫地、我整理房间;3. 结尾表达劳动后的感受,呼应主题,使内容完整;全程注意时态正确,涵盖思维导图所有要素,语句连贯。
【答案】
Family Labour day
Today is Sunday, and it’s our family’s cleaning day. We are all busy with different chores at home. My mother is in the kitchen. She is washing the dirty dishes carefully. My father is cleaning the living room. He is sweeping the floor with a broom. I’m tidying up my bedroom.
We feel a little tired but happy. It’s nice to make our home clean and tidy together!
【知识点】
英语书面表达,现在进行时,话题写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图搭建写作框架,降低了写作难度,贴近学生生活,考查学生的语言组织能力和时态运用能力,符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求以“Family Labour Day”为题,结合思维导图(包含Who、When、Where、What、How五个要素)介绍家人正在做的家务。解题思路:首先确定时态为现在进行时(描述正在发生的动作);其次对应思维导图的五个要素梳理内容:When是周日,Who是我和家人,Where是家里不同区域,What是各自做的家务,How是一起劳动的感受;最后组织语言,确保内容全面、语句通顺,满足不少于4句话的要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 开篇点明主题:说明今天是周日,是家庭劳动日,引出大家都在做家务;2. 分述家人的具体动作:对应Where(厨房、客厅、卧室),用现在进行时描述妈妈洗碗、爸爸扫地、我整理房间;3. 结尾表达劳动后的感受,呼应主题,使内容完整;全程注意时态正确,涵盖思维导图所有要素,语句连贯。
【答案】
Family Labour day
Today is Sunday, and it’s our family’s cleaning day. We are all busy with different chores at home. My mother is in the kitchen. She is washing the dirty dishes carefully. My father is cleaning the living room. He is sweeping the floor with a broom. I’m tidying up my bedroom.
We feel a little tired but happy. It’s nice to make our home clean and tidy together!
【知识点】
英语书面表达,现在进行时,话题写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图搭建写作框架,降低了写作难度,贴近学生生活,考查学生的语言组织能力和时态运用能力,符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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