七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计20分)(真题·绍兴嵊州)
76.假设你是李华,你校英语社团将开展“劳动(labour)让我成长”的演讲比赛。请结合自身实际,选择下图中的一个劳动场所,谈谈你的做法和收获。

要求:(1)文中必须包含所选表格内的所有信息,可适当发挥;(2)你的做法和收获至少各补充一条;(3)80词左右;(4)演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here.







Thanks for listening!

One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here.
I'd like to share how labour helps me grow at home. Every day, I do the dishes after meals and make the bed every morning. Also, I often help my mum wash the clothes and sweep the floor on weekends.
From doing these chores, I've developed important life skills. I've learnt to take care of myself and understand how hard my parents work. What's more, I've become more responsible and patient. I also realise that small efforts can make a big difference in keeping a home tidy.
Labour not only makes me independent but also teaches me the value of hard work.
Thanks for listening!
(102 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
这是一篇演讲类记叙文,主题是“劳动如何帮助自身成长”,需以第一人称(Li Hua)向听众分享居家劳动的经历与感悟。写作需覆盖“what(做了哪些劳动)、how(劳动的具体方式)、why(劳动带来的成长)”三个核心维度,逻辑清晰且情感真实;时态以一般现在时(描述日常劳动)+现在完成时(描述成长变化)为主;需包含材料中的劳动内容(洗碗、整理床铺、洗衣、扫地),并重点突出“劳动带来的能力/认知提升”,让内容有感染力。
【提纲演示】
第一步:
开篇问候+点明主题
示例:Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here. I'd like to share how labour helps me grow at home.
第二步:
具体阐述日常劳动内容
示例:Every day, I do the dishes after meals and make the bed every morning. Also, I often help my mum wash the clothes and sweep the floor on weekends.
第三步:
分析劳动带来的成长(核心部分)
技能与自我照顾能力:
示例:From doing these chores, I've developed important life skills. I've learnt to take care of myself ...
对他人的理解:
示例:... and understand how hard my parents work.
性格与认知变化:
示例:What's more, I've become more responsible and patient. I also realise that small efforts can make a big difference ...
第四步:
总结升华+结尾致谢
示例:Labour not only makes me independent but also teaches me the value of hard work. Thanks for listening!
【写作要点】
逻辑衔接:
用 also/what's more 串联不同劳动内容与成长点,让演讲更流畅
情感落地:
将“成长”具体化为“生活技能、理解父母、责任感”等细节,避免空泛
演讲语气:
开头问候、结尾致谢符合演讲场景,语言口语化但正式得体

【分析】
首先确定写作主题为“劳动让我成长”的演讲稿，需选择表格中的一个劳动场所（本题选居家At home）；其次必须包含所选场所表格内的所有信息：做法需涵盖do the dishes、make the bed，且至少补充1条做法（如wash clothes、sweep the floor）；收获需涵盖develop life skills，且至少补充1条收获（如理解父母辛劳、增强责任感）；时态上，描述日常劳动用一般现在时，描述成长收获用现在完成时；结构上，利用给定的开头和结尾，用also、what's more等衔接，符合演讲语气，控制字数在80词左右。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，点明分享居家劳动的成长：I'd like to share how labour helps me grow at home.
2. 列举具体劳动内容（含表格内的洗碗、整理床铺，补充洗衣、扫地）：Every day, I do the dishes after meals and make the bed every morning. Also, I often help my mum wash the clothes and sweep the floor on weekends.
3. 阐述劳动带来的收获（含表格内的发展生活技能，补充理解父母辛劳、增强责任感）：From these chores, I've developed important life skills. I've learnt to take care of myself and understand how hard my parents work. What's more, I've become more responsible and patient.
4. 总结升华主题，呼应演讲结尾：Labour not only makes me independent but also teaches me the value of hard work. Thanks for listening!
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here.
I'd like to share how labour helps me grow at home. Every day, I do the dishes after meals and make the bed every morning. Also, I often help my mum wash the clothes and sweep the floor on weekends.
From doing these chores, I've developed important life skills. I've learnt to take care of myself and understand how hard my parents work. What's more, I've become more responsible and patient. I also realise that small efforts can make a big difference in keeping a home tidy.
Labour not only makes me independent but also teaches me the value of hard work.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣“劳动让我成长”的演讲主题，严格覆盖题目要求的所有信息，补充内容合理贴合主题，时态运用准确，逻辑清晰，衔接自然，符合演讲的正式口语化语气，情感真实，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6