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八、书面表达。(10分)
今天是重阳节,Lily一家去看望爷爷奶奶。根据图片提示写一段话,不少于5句话。
要求:1. 所写内容需全面,要覆盖图片信息;2. 表达准确,语句通顺,书写规范。
My family day
Today is the Double Ninth Festival. We are visiting our grandparents together. Look!
But where is my grandma? Oh, she is
今天是重阳节,Lily一家去看望爷爷奶奶。根据图片提示写一段话,不少于5句话。
要求:1. 所写内容需全面,要覆盖图片信息;2. 表达准确,语句通顺,书写规范。
My family day
Today is the Double Ninth Festival. We are visiting our grandparents together. Look!
My mother is cooking nice food in the kitchen. My father is sweeping the floor. My grandpa is playing with my little brother happily. Our pet dog is sleeping near the sofa. I'm drawing a picture.
But where is my grandma? Oh, she is
picking some vegetables in the garden.
答案
示例:
My family day
Today is the Double Ninth Festival. We
are visiting our grandparents together. Look!
My mother is cooking nice food in the
kitchen. My father is sweeping the floor. My
grandpa is playing with my little brother
happily. Our pet dog is sleeping near the
sofa. I'm drawing a picture. But where is my
grandma? Oh, she is picking some vegetables
in the garden.
My family day
Today is the Double Ninth Festival. We
are visiting our grandparents together. Look!
My mother is cooking nice food in the
kitchen. My father is sweeping the floor. My
grandpa is playing with my little brother
happily. Our pet dog is sleeping near the
sofa. I'm drawing a picture. But where is my
grandma? Oh, she is picking some vegetables
in the garden.
解析
【分析】
这是一道小学英语看图类书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 先审题明确核心要求：主题为重阳节全家探望祖父母，需要覆盖全部图片信息，不少于5句话，语句通顺准确。2. 确定统一适配的时态：图中所有人物、事物的动作都是正在发生的状态，选用现在进行时（be+动词现在分词）来描述最贴合场景。3. 按空间顺序梳理图中所有元素：厨房做饭的妈妈、客厅扫地的爸爸、沙发上陪小弟弟玩耍的爷爷、桌边画画的自己、沙发旁睡觉的宠物狗，依次用正确的现在进行时句式描述，最后补充符合家庭生活逻辑的奶奶的动作，就能满足所有写作要求。
【解析】
我们按照从右到左、从人物到事物的观察顺序逐步完成填空内容：
1. 先描述图右侧厨房内妈妈的动作：My mother is cooking nice food in the kitchen.
2. 接着描述图左侧正在打扫的爸爸的动作：My father is sweeping the floor.
3. 然后描述沙发上祖孙二人的状态：My grandpa is playing with my little brother happily.
4. 接下来描述沙发边的小动物：Our pet dog is sleeping near the sofa.
5. 再描述小桌边自己的动作：I'm drawing a picture.
6. 最后补全奶奶的动作，符合探望长辈的生活化场景：picking some vegetables in the garden.
所有图片信息全部覆盖，语句连贯，总句数远超5句的最低要求，语法表达准确规范。
【答案】
My mother is cooking nice food in the kitchen. My father is sweeping the floor. My grandpa is playing with my little brother happily. Our pet dog is sleeping near the sofa. I'm drawing a picture. But where is my grandma? Oh, she is picking some vegetables in the garden.
【知识点】
现在进行时，看图写话，节日表达
【点评】
本题属于基础应用型写作题，核心考察现在进行时的实际运用能力，学生只需要按顺序观察图中所有的人和物的动作，不要遗漏信息，搭配正确的现在进行时结构，最后补充符合生活逻辑的奶奶的行为即可完成，对学生的词汇量和句式要求不高，适合小学高段学生练习写作。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一道小学英语看图类书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 先审题明确核心要求：主题为重阳节全家探望祖父母，需要覆盖全部图片信息，不少于5句话，语句通顺准确。2. 确定统一适配的时态：图中所有人物、事物的动作都是正在发生的状态，选用现在进行时（be+动词现在分词）来描述最贴合场景。3. 按空间顺序梳理图中所有元素：厨房做饭的妈妈、客厅扫地的爸爸、沙发上陪小弟弟玩耍的爷爷、桌边画画的自己、沙发旁睡觉的宠物狗，依次用正确的现在进行时句式描述，最后补充符合家庭生活逻辑的奶奶的动作，就能满足所有写作要求。
【解析】
我们按照从右到左、从人物到事物的观察顺序逐步完成填空内容：
1. 先描述图右侧厨房内妈妈的动作：My mother is cooking nice food in the kitchen.
2. 接着描述图左侧正在打扫的爸爸的动作：My father is sweeping the floor.
3. 然后描述沙发上祖孙二人的状态：My grandpa is playing with my little brother happily.
4. 接下来描述沙发边的小动物：Our pet dog is sleeping near the sofa.
5. 再描述小桌边自己的动作：I'm drawing a picture.
6. 最后补全奶奶的动作，符合探望长辈的生活化场景：picking some vegetables in the garden.
所有图片信息全部覆盖，语句连贯，总句数远超5句的最低要求，语法表达准确规范。
【答案】
My mother is cooking nice food in the kitchen. My father is sweeping the floor. My grandpa is playing with my little brother happily. Our pet dog is sleeping near the sofa. I'm drawing a picture. But where is my grandma? Oh, she is picking some vegetables in the garden.
【知识点】
现在进行时，看图写话，节日表达
【点评】
本题属于基础应用型写作题，核心考察现在进行时的实际运用能力，学生只需要按顺序观察图中所有的人和物的动作，不要遗漏信息，搭配正确的现在进行时结构，最后补充符合生活逻辑的奶奶的行为即可完成，对学生的词汇量和句式要求不高，适合小学高段学生练习写作。
【难度系数】
0.8
